OC Rating Service

[EpicElrod22]

Firstly, This is not a trolling "Service". Secondly, please do not put Troll/Joke COs on here.
This is for people to get their OC rated for Stereotypicalness or MarySueness.

      Rules:
Don't post too many or overwhelm me. I will try to get these done fast.

   You must include:
Full name
Age
Race
Gender
AT LEAST a very detailed description ( pictures are best and help me rate better)
A bit of backstory-- The more the better! (place of birth, etc.)
A bit of family history-- The more the better!
Personal history (job, friends, relationships, etc) (Once again-- The more the better)
Personality and hobbies


   OCs will be rated on originality, detail, non-Mary Sue or Stereotypicalness and neatness.

[GlassMirror]

Even though my OC has already been rated a bunch of times, and since no one commented yet, I might as well start with one!

My OC Relic has a detailed story, and it might be a lot so I'll just give you the link to it. Is that ok with you?

[EpicElrod22]

Even though my OC has already been rated a bunch of times, and since no one commented yet, I might as well start with one!

My OC Relic has a detailed story, and it might be a lot so I'll just give you the link to it. Is that ok with you?

Well, I don't really like dragon ponies because they are synonymous with dark past. BUT: he has a backstory, he is not actually dark past. I'm not too fond of super-strong OCs, but he isn't OP. I like that he is not Mr. Bad@$$ with epic evil attitude instead he has a gentle personality. Even though he is a bit common in style, I would still accept him because is isn't ultra stereotypical or strong. He also has a well developed backstory. So I give him the OK.

[GlassMirror]

Even though my OC has already been rated a bunch of times, and since no one commented yet, I might as well start with one!

My OC Relic has a detailed story, and it might be a lot so I'll just give you the link to it. Is that ok with you?

Well, I don't really like dragon ponies because they are synonymous with dark past. BUT: he has a backstory, he is not actually dark past. I'm not too fond of super-strong OCs, but he isn't OP. I like that he is not Mr. Bad@$$ with epic evil attitude instead he has a gentle personality. Even though he is a bit common in style, I would still accept him because is isn't ultra stereotypical or strong. He also has a well developed backstory. So I give him the OK.

yayz!

[annosrules]

I know he's well liked, but an extra opinion is always nice. Enjoy! Blazing Legend

[EpicElrod22]

I know he's well liked, but an extra opinion is always nice. Enjoy! Blazing Legend

I love that he is very original! Not many COs are earth ponies. I like his extremely detailed backstory and personality. He is definitely a good OC!  I would actually probably use him in a story if he was mine.  Even though I don't really judge on color, (besides red and black, that is) I would give him points for his very good color scheme.
   All in all, this is a well made OC, (I'm loving the no dark past) good job!

[annosrules]

Thanks for the critique! I'd ask about Match Stick, but he isn't quite finished. But feel free to critique it anyway.

[EpicElrod22]

Thanks for the critique! I'd ask about Match Stick, but he isn't quite finished. But feel free to critique it anyway.

Though he is not finished, I can see him being a very good OC. Fire power usually comes with a bad OC, but he is very well developed. I like his color pattern and his unique abilities and personality. I also like the background story with him. Very good job developing unique OCs, annosrules!

[annosrules]

I based his character design of of D&D's Nightmares.

Spoiler: show

[Night Pony]

I based his character design of of D&D's Nightmares.

Spoiler: show

Kinda reminds me of Ruin.

Spoiler: show

[Dark Hooves]

how's about rating OC Angel's Breath

here is the link http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=6860.msg557579#msg557579

[Etherdrone]

I quite like Blazing Legend, he has that explorer vibe that's meant to be, you know?

For some reason, no one seems to be talking too much on his page, but here's a link to my OC, Classius Von Mayberk. He's meant to be a little over-the-top, but let me know what y'all think!

[annosrules]

I quite like Blazing Legend, he has that explorer vibe that's meant to be, you know?

Unfortunately I can't really develop because I started an RP a while back and I don't have any takers so far, and i haven't seen any new RP's that he would fit into.

[-ReiMar-]

How about mine?) Link is in my signature) If some points look too OP for you even with listed drawbacks, do point 'em out. I'll see what I can do))

[EpicElrod22]

how's about rating OC Angel's Breath

here is the link http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=6860.msg557579#msg557579

Angel's Breath is Ok, but Dark Hooves is not very good in my standards. I will automatically hate Alicorn OCs because all bad OCs are Alicorns. BUT: you can make up for it because his personality is not stereotypical. He also is not OP, so that is good. I would not have him as one of my OCs, but I won't condemn him as bad.
Post Merge

I quite like Blazing Legend, he has that explorer vibe that's meant to be, you know?

For some reason, no one seems to be talking too much on his page, but here's a link to my OC, Classius on Mayberk. He's meant to be a little over-the-top, but let me know what y'all think!

I love him! He is like something that I would make.  Awesome detail on the backstory and personality! Wonderful! Just marvelous!
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How about mine?) Link is in my signature) If some points look too OP for you even with listed drawbacks, do point 'em out. I'll see what I can do))

I could have sworn I rated this before or commented on another topic... meh I will rate it anyway.

Very interesting and origional. I don't much like dragon ponies, BUT: she was not one by birth or magical enlightenment. (whatever that means) Instead she has a very detailed backstory and reason to be one. I like the concept and think you did a good job.

[Dark Hooves]

thanks, i did attempt to make Dark Hooves balanced out, he possesses the ability of flight and magic, but both are weaker than a pure pegasus and a pure unicorn, btw Dark Hooves is my Ponysona

Angel's Breath isn't faster than Rainbow Dash and she was never meant to be, she also isn't very outgoing like RBD either, she is a little bit shy around ponies she hasn't met before, but once she gets to know them, she is a friend for life

[-ReiMar-]

Many thanks) I also have another OC who is also a "Quilin", but only because Scale is. It's messy kinda, she's a Dark OC, so I am unsure if I should upload her to OC section...But you can see her pic on my avatar)

[0jackie0]

If you feel up for it. I have five separate characters, but I'd like to see which one you choose.

Jackie Trade, the repair pony
Russ Eaves, the private detective
Elsa Cane, the cow with a secret
Thrak, the cuteasaurus
Sugar Drop, the honey slime

[Peace Keeper]

I did had a couple of comments for my OC. It was very early and now I did some adjustments to him.
I would like an opinion from you.

I am not sure how you judge ponysonas, so I will probably add a non-ponysona OC.
So here are the 2 OCs to judge, one a ponysona with a regular life, and one that's a little outside of society.

-Peacekeeper
-Cheveyo (His story is not as long, almost brief. Sorry if it doesn't have enough info.)
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=13069.0

I'll take any criticism.
... And yes... My OCs suck.

[EpicElrod22]

Ok, sorry I have not been posting, I've been busy. Too busy I have to lock this thread. I'm sorry. I just can't keep up.