Chack (Workin' on it)

Started by Chack, 2012 Nov 12, 19:48:46

previous topic - next topic

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Go Down

Chack

2012 Nov 12, 19:48:46 Last Edit: 2012 Nov 12, 21:38:22 by Chack
'Bout time I started on this. -Ahem-



Name: Chack
Age: 17
Race: Earth Pony
Gender: Colt
Color: Navy Blue
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Mane/Tail color: Brown
Cutie Mark: Swirling connected figure 8s; Represents artistic and endless creative talent
Physique: Tall and skinny, messy mane and tail
Special Power: None
Residence: Small house in Ponyville with both parents and two younger brothers
Hobbies: Drawing, thinking about random things for hours, spending time with his close friends, twirling a small knife he found
Jobs/Career: Small, but popular food center at a grocery store, freelance drawing, may go into cartooning
Personality: The quiet, intelligent type; had one of the highest scoring grades in school. Can come to sensible conclusions even when guessing. Can be very sarcastic and blunt, but loyal and much nicer to close friends. Usually not easily impressed. Can't stand lazy ponies. REALLY can't stand inconsiderate ponies or those who make fun of others. Mind usually wonders and can end up blurting out whatever comes to mind, no matter how much sense it doesn't make. Can be very sensitive to those who have no or not very many friends, usually befriending them. Kinda has a girly side, but doesn't show it.
Favorite words: "Bugger" "Booyah"
Favorite quote: "Eh, what's up, Doc?"
Favorite book: Tell Tale Heart: By Edgar Allen Poeny
Likes: Art, ketchup, almost anything with sugar in it, his close friends, cute things, awesome things, super spicy food
Dislikes: Incompetence with no drive, seeing ponies made fun of, onions, overused stuff, most peppers, cold weather, being bothered

In-Depth Personality


Chack generally stays calm and collected. If he's having a good day, he'll may skip around or hum a tune. If he's having a bad day, he refuses to speak to anyone or allow whatever frustration he has to build up, and he may lash out. Whatever he's feeling, he usually ends up displaying that feeling through his art. He is very creative. His artistic skill has led others to ask him to draw something for them, and he's getting to the point where he'll start charging bits for his work. His sense of humor is a bit different from most others, but he had a good one up to the point he has no idea what he's saying or doing. Chack also has the fun ability to change his voice and imitate other voices. He likes to give the impression that he is crazy or insane, but he truly isn't. He generally avoids things ponies might consider "cool", such as certain types of music or sports events. His favorite thought is that nopony is "normal" and that's a good thing. To him, "normal" equals "boring", as he is not as easy to impress as most are.

Chack doesn't talk much or socialize often, believing he has more important things to worry about. He is very smart, and usually this brings about his sarcastic and prideful nature. He isn't too prideful, knowing his most limits and weaknesses, though he likes to set a high standard for himself, and he finds others that are too lazy to do anything with themselves annoying. When he's not drawing or shooing off others asking him to draw stuff, he likes to sit in his room or any quiet place and think. His mind can wonder, making him think of the weirdest things at the wrong time. If he's alone, he may practice changing his voice or sing, which he never lets other ponies hear. Might be too shy and scared to do so, considering his voice still cracks at a certain pitch.

Chack isn't usually angered easily, but he can become frustrated with himself or others. If he can't meet his own standard, he'll beat himself up over it, and he lets that frustration build up. On the other hand, if somepony ends up annoying him, he tries warding them off by acting creepy. If that doesn't work and he can't take it, he might respond cruelly beyond reason. Sometimes he'll silently find delight in the failure of others just to make himself feel better.

What Chack likes to see is effort. If he notices somepony that really wants to try something but may be too scared to do it, he respects that pony and will encourage him/her. He makes friends that way, and he is very loyal to anypony he befriends. He'd do just about anything for them. He only opens up to his friends too, trusting them with all his secrets and feelings. As far as a love life goes, he has not had one. The closest he's ever gotten to a girlfriend was a small crush on somepony in his first year of high school, but it did not last. Chack, however, longs for that perfect mare for him, and he patiently waits for that special day. His patience for love has earned him some respect.

Sometimes Chack will show a few random acts of kindness, whether it be holding open a door for a mare or picking up a pencil the colt sitting next to him dropped. Doing so warms his heart a bit, especially if he is thanked. He also likes animals, even more so if they are fluffy and adorable. He might try hard not to "daww" at them if other ponies are around. Cute things somehow grab his attention immediately.
Wait for it...
...
...

Rad Thunder

I say you did pretty darn well. I like. :]
And I like Edgar Allen Poeny... lol

Chack

Quote from: Rad Thunder on 2012 Nov 12, 20:02:44
And I like Edgar Allen Poeny... lol


I was so proud of myself for that. lol
Wait for it...
...
...

Tiger

This OC I like! I like what you did with his cutie mark. Much more interesting than the normal infinity symbol  :3

Though, I wish I knew more about his personality. Maybe you could add to that?

But other than that, there is absolutely nothing wrong with this OC  :D Good job for that part, but it would be nice to add on  ^-^

A link to my tumblr above!
Tiger's OC page. Should re-do it...

Chack

Quote from: Tiger on 2012 Nov 12, 20:17:15
This OC I like! I like what you did with his cutie mark. Much more interesting than the normal infinity symbol  :3

Though, I wish I knew more about his personality. Maybe you could add to that?

But other than that, there is absolutely nothing wrong with this OC  :D Good job for that part, but it would be nice to add on  ^-^


Thanks! I'll get right on that.  :D
I wonder how many people use the infinity symbol as a cutie mark...  :I
Wait for it...
...
...

Gracie Sky

Where did the name "Chack" come from?
Character Critique Thread

Have your OC fairly and honestly evaluated!

Chack

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2012 Nov 12, 21:19:50
Where did the name "Chack" come from?

I honestly don't know. It just sounded cool. Like a combination between Chuck and Jack.  lol
Wait for it...
...
...

Chack

M'kay, I added a bit more to his personality. Hopefully, that will do.
Wait for it...
...
...

Go Up