Tanzanite

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2013 Feb 05, 21:04:22 Last Edit: 2013 Feb 16, 22:46:11 by Fluffy Cloud
Tanzanite


Name: Tanzanite, Tanza
Gender: Mare
Age: 18
Race: Earth
Appearance:
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Drawn by I like lobsters

Bio: Tanza was abandoned by her parents and left at orphanage in Ponyville, along with a letter. She was taken in, and grew to be kind and nice. However, she was quite small for her size, which made her a perfect target for bullies. She usually stayed away from them, or hid. Whenever somepony came along to adopt a filly, she was never picked. She still managed to find a few bright things in her life.

However, when the bullies came up to Tanza one day, they offered her a challenge: to go snooping around in the staff room, where no filly was allowed. They said that if she did, they wouldn't bother her for a month. Desperate to get a break from being bullied, she went to the staff room and looked around. She eventually found the letter that had been left with her. She read it, and became angry with why her parents had abandoned her. She took the letter and left the staff room, angry and grumpy. She stuffed the letter under the mattress of her bed.

The bullies, as they were, didn't stick to their word. They bullied Tanza quite soon, and caught her when she was in a rather bad mood. Their torture made her more mad, until she finally couldn't take it anymore and yelled at them. She didn't know that her anger generated bad luck for those around her. A flower pot fell on one of the bullies's head, and the others tripped when they ran away. The next day,she gained her cutie mark suddenly. Tanza became satisfied, and was therefore left alone by the other fillies. She didn't care about being adopted anymore

One day, Tanza decided to leave the orphanage. She packed her things, including the letter, and took her money and some money from the other fillies too. She left in the middle of the night. There wasn't many places where she could work, but she got a job in Ponyville at a cafe. She liked working there, where there was iddle chatter. Eventually, she got enough money to move to Canterlot, and moved there. She bought a nice house there, and works at a cafe. However, being amongst the high class ponies of Canterlot makes her irritated, and occasionally angry. She seems rather grumpy most of the time, except in the cafe.
Personality: Tanza is usually grumpy and/or irritated. She dislikes communicating with anyone, and will act rude whenever she gets a chance. She is usually brewing over something mentioned the letter, having to deal with "powers". However, while working in the cafe, she seems calm and satisfied with her job, and sometimes joins in some small talk.
Likes: Working in the cafe, ponies minding their business, being rude, being the dominant one in a group, small talk, being rebellious, and socks.
Dislikes: High class snooty ponies, ponies who don't mind their own business, tight and itchy dresses, ponies who rude to her, ponies making her look weak, copycats, and goody two-hooves.

Gracie Sky

 :I ... Is she glowing, or is that just the color of her skin?

She looks like she's glowing. I wouldn't recommend making her glow. I wouldn't recommend that skin coloring pattern, either.
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