My alicorn OC

[Primus]

Before you start to hate I already went through this and worse.

[Little Star]

...Any info on it whatsoever....?
Just a picture...?

[Night Pony]

I can tell you you're unoriginal. Not because it's an alicorn but because of the colour scheme.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

The only thing I really dislike is the eyes. Red eyes, people usually think of evil when they see that, even more so with slit pupils.

[DawnsEmbrace]

Dang, this looks a lot like my unpublished OC.
Time to make some changes to him I guess.

[Primus]

...Any info on it whatsoever....?
Just a picture...?

Made from a pony creator from devaintart and placed on the site.  Had trouble placing the pic on the post so I just hurried on it.

And here's the bio:

Name: Primus

Age:  Unknown

Gender: Male

Bio:   Works as the protector of the princesses since their foal days. Because of his immortality and being born since the beginning of time he has seen everything.  Last of his civilization.  Knows the mane six and their families. Celestia fell in love with him at the time when she was at a teenage equivalent of alicorn time. Been through everything with both princesses since taking the job.

Personality:  Acts all quiet and mysterious, barely speaking, and only speaks when necessary. He looks through anything by not caring, even his relationships, but anything with a heavy emotion hits him. Inside he cares deeply for everyone even if he doesn't know them. Despite his silent and mysterious attitude he is very kind to whoever he meets, but only to those that deserve it. If not he'll just be suspicious of them. He has a intimate ability to know who's lying or not and always gives a second chance. Kills only when need be. Has enhanced senses from his immortality.

Weapons and Magic:  Two swords from his time period long ago.  Any magic whether good or bad.  Primarily uses blood wards.

Likes- Relaxing with his love ones and just doing something to keep his mind busy.

Dislikes- Those who waste his time with useless stuff.

Extra- Has a relationship with Celestia.

Post Merge

I can tell you you're unoriginal. Not because it's an alicorn but because of the colour scheme.

I usually like some dark colors on me.  I just wanted a contrasting color scheme that's a bit opposite of each other.

[Mi Amore Cadenza]

Maybe I should remake my OC to look like an Alicorn just to see how it would turn out.

[Tiger]

Now, y'see, the first problem here is that OCs with relationships with canon characters aren't generally liked. More likeable OCs are those that keep things realistic and would fit into canon. We know of only three alicorns, making them a really rare race. If there were other alicorns, the show would be making note of them. So, if you want to keep a character sticking to canon, alicorns are basically out of the question. Same goes for relationships with canon characters. Alicorn OCs also tend to not be liked as much because of their overpoweredness (and unlikelihood).

I'd be typing more if I weren't in a rush right now. Though, really, it's your OC. We're only here for feedback c:

[Night Pony]

Post Merge

I can tell you you're unoriginal. Not because it's an alicorn but because of the colour scheme.

I usually like some dark colors on me.  I just wanted a contrasting color scheme that's a bit opposite of each other.

That's fine, i like night themed ponies too but black and red are two most overused colours and every OC with pure black and red is viewed as unoriginal, mary sue and overall not good. Also your Bio doesn't help your case in proving that it's a good OC.

[Luminescence]

Well, aside from the cle-she color scheme that has been stated to the umpteenth degree, the back story that says "I've been around forever so HA!" the fact that you took the real characters and decided "I know them, we are cool." and trying to force a relationship with what equates to a god pony, it's great!

Overall, it's... yeah.

[Grizzly]

The only thing I really dislike is the eyes. Red eyes, people usually think of evil when they see that, even more so with slit pupils.

Well, my OC has red eyes, would you consider Blue evil? XD

The thing with alicorn OCs, well at least for me, is that it just looks like you cant decide between the pony races.

Over all i would say that its not a bad OC, just that it shouldnt be used in RPs not prepared for alicorns, nor as your main OC. Just sayan

[GoldenTerrabyte]

The only thing I really dislike is the eyes. Red eyes, people usually think of evil when they see that, even more so with slit pupils.

Well, my OC has red eyes, would you consider Blue evil? XD

The thing with alicorn OCs, well at least for me, is that it just looks like you cant decide between the pony races.

Over all i would say that its not a bad OC, just that it shouldnt be used in RPs not prepared for alicorns, nor as your main OC. Just sayan

No, I don't think that. I meant to say others might think that, especially given his pitch black coat.

[DawnsEmbrace]

Putting Alicorn aside, I like everything else about him.

I like the idea that he uses ancient blades from a lost era of Equestria as weapons.
I like his personality, and his appearance doesn't seem to bug me as much as other people.

[Primus]

Putting Alicorn aside, I like everything else about him.

I like the idea that he uses ancient blades from a lost era of Equestria as weapons.
I like his personality, and his appearance doesn't seem to bug me as much as other people.

I like this guy and Primus.  What do you think?

Primus:  *Looks over him*  He's okay.