Ancient Dragon Relic

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2013 Mar 06, 19:15:46 Last Edit: 2014 Jun 24, 21:42:09 by GlassMirror
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Profile!
Name: Relic; The Ancient Dragon; Ancient Relic.
Sex: Male
Age: Real age - 6000yrs, somewhere around that; other age: 21
Species: DragonPony
Coat Color: Red
Mane Color: Rose Red
Eye Color: shiny purple
features: Has horns on his head that is usually covered by his hair; Wings are the size of a mini dragon, Able to morph to a full dragon as whenever he wants. His hooves don't actually click clack like a usual pony hoof.
Cutie Mark: In a shape of a tablet with unknown scriptures on it.
Location: in a forest somewhere next to the Everfree.
Likes: To sleep, read unknown text, fly, talk to animals(he can't understand them like Fluttershy can). He likes to leave his wings open as well, because he can't really close it anyway.
Family: The son of the deceased King and Queen of Ancient World Equestria who took over much of the land ponies live in today, mostly out of greed.
Friends: No friends(other than the animals) at the moment.
Rivals/enemies: No enemies at this time
Cutie mark story: While watching the animals, he suddenly comes across a ditch. Inside was tablets and jewelry from the ancient world he never knew about(nor knew he was born there). He realizes he can understand every letter, word, and symbol on them, he can even understand lost languages to.
Powers: Fire breath, and because of his little dragon bloodline, he is able to fly very fast, and able to shoot fire out his eyes; strength. 


Bio/Personality!
     Dragons tend to be very greedy, mean, and carefree about things, Relic on the other hand isn't. Like dragons, he usually has this frown on his face that make him look like what he is. But, to be truthful, Relic is more depicted as a sweet DragonPony who's generous and kind to all the animals. Broad body structure and leadership skills which he learned throughout his years, made him the perfect example of a leader, and an example of a guy that everyone would love if they ever meet him. He's that soul key to kindness, much like Fluttershys.
     But there's a catch to this. DragonPonies are Carnivors, so he eats only meat, except for ponies. Relic, as I said he's sweet and kind, but at times, like when he's hungry for example, he could be very mean and cruel.

History!
    Tall, calm, and very patient, Relic is very mature, and the most nicest DragonPony in Equestria. Nothing is known about him for sure, but what I know is that he is suppose to be King of all DragonPonies and Dragons.
     Basically, his whole life was in the sealed forest. He cannot escape because of the two chains on his left back leg (sorta like a dog collar). He learned to fly on his own, hunt on his own, and receive an education, mostly by scriptures and ancient writings that had all of that. This sort of thing was the cause of Relic getting his cutie mark.
     Another thing to, Relic has a tendency to only eat meat, with the exception of some fruits, sweets, and some spicy food. He will NEVER eat vegetables. This reason is because he is a native DragonPony, and natives who came from the forest has the same instincts as other dragons, so there meat crave is normal... Except if your eating gemstones.
     His wings are... Pretty big. His wingspan is about the size of a regular Dragon! He takes care of them deeply. but theres a disadvantage to those huge wings, since they are practically bigger than his body, they tend to be heavy, so it's hard getting around, so that's why he usually keeps his wings open instead of keeping them closed.
     ...And that's pretty much that about Relic!... Hey, even I don't have that much on him, once my comic is reconstructed, you will know more about him and his lost past!


I decided to revise this because the story wasn't really about Relic. So here is the new thing.



More changes up soon.
Trying to promote him on the MLP FIM show!

If there are any mistakes, please tell me, like any misspelling, anything ^-^


Relic's Theme:


2nd theme song:

Gracie Sky

Your dragonpony concept is pretty interesting, although I think it would be best to separate this universe from the real Equestria, if you haven't already. This would make great folklore.

As for Relic himself, I'm surprised anything is known about him since he lives sealed in a forest. Do other ponies visit him, despite his relation to the not well liked king and queen of old?
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GlassMirror

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Mar 07, 19:55:03
Your dragonpony concept is pretty interesting, although I think it would be best to separate this universe from the real Equestria, if you haven't already. This would make great folklore.

As for Relic himself, I'm surprised anything is known about him since he lives sealed in a forest. Do other ponies visit him, despite his relation to the not well liked king and queen of old?
Well, this concept is not an altered universe, just an old tale of the beginning of Equestria, which turns into a folklore as time goes by because no one was talking about it.

For Relic, everyone knew that the Queen had a son, and they knew that he was still there, but overtime, most people didn't believe that Relic was sealed, nor believed the sealed forest even existed anymore, which brought them to the point that he was already gone, but he ages slowly because of the seal. As for ponies visiting him, they still had the belief that the forest was gone, other than that, this forest is in the very end of ponyville, where thick trees usually be. He has never had any contact with the ponies because he cannot leave, and I forgot to mention, but Relic has a chain on his back left leg, which keeps him there, and the only way to release it is to have a descendant of Quest help out.

...By the way, the king and queen are his parents.

ShadowHeart

just wondering, maybe i missed it but what makes him a dragon pegasus? He doesn't seem to have dragon wings. Does he have a dragon tail. btw, I have a dragon pony too; he can't wait to me urs  ^-^

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GlassMirror

Quote from: ShadowHeart on 2013 Mar 08, 09:55:27
just wondering, maybe i missed it but what makes him a dragon pegasus? He doesn't seem to have dragon wings. Does he have a dragon tail. btw, I have a dragon pony too; he can't wait to me urs  ^-^

  He has dragon wings, there usually out, but the thing is is that since he's so much of a pony, he has no scales on his wings, plus his tail is long, but doesn't have scales as well.
   
   He can't wait to meet yours, if you can find him in the forest at least... :3 ^-^

ShadowHeart

oooo! Does yours live in the forest too? So does mine, mainly because his friend does but he still has a nice house in Ponyville.

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GlassMirror

Quote from: ShadowHeart on 2013 Mar 08, 21:32:27
oooo! Does yours live in the forest too? So does mine, mainly because his friend does but he still has a nice house in Ponyville.

Haha, well, Relic does have some sort of house that he built, but he usually sleeps outside because of dragon heritage. :3

GlassMirror

Once i'm done with Relic's whole back story, I will create Quest, the Ancient Pegasus hero.

Dark Hooves

very interesting concept GlassMirror i like it alot  ^-^
<br /><br />everypony is capable of great good or great evil but everypony should be treated like their worth giving a chance<br /><br />My OCs. http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=6860.0

GlassMirror

Quote from: Dark Hooves on 2013 Mar 14, 08:16:59
very interesting concept GlassMirror i like it alot  ^-^

Why thank you, I try to describe this story as best as I can :3

GlassMirror

By the way :o

     If everyone looked closely at his mark and chain, it say's something...  O:

Gracie Sky

It is the Japanese word "ikara", which is basically the English equivalent to "how much(?)".

... if my research is correct.
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GlassMirror

2013 Mar 14, 21:22:13 #12 Last Edit: 2013 Mar 14, 21:27:26 by GlassMirror
Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Mar 14, 19:37:30
It is the Japanese word "ikara", which is basically the English equivalent to "how much(?)".

... if my research is correct.


Well... Barely correct. it says ???, ikari, meaning revenge, but depending on the kanji, it can mean anger or anchor, but should be the same thing. basically because of his parents imprisonment in his mark, and when they return, they will take revenge by starting another war.  ^-^

... I'm still learning Japanese, but this should be correct from what I heard

Gracie Sky

2013 Mar 14, 23:37:23 #13 Last Edit: 2013 Mar 14, 23:40:29 by Gracie Sky
Ah... I see. I mistook your ? (ri) for a ? (ra).

You might want to make the last character look more like ? so others don't confuse it as well.

Edit - Looks like this forum doesn't support Japanese Hiragana. So, just look at a table and I recommend making two strokes instead of one for that character so the two parts aren't connected.
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super_chris85

I would like to meet your character he seems very interesting

GlassMirror

Quote from: super_chris85 on 2013 Mar 14, 23:41:59
I would like to meet your character he seems very interesting


He can't wait to meet yours as well, you just need to find him :D ^-^

GlassMirror

2013 Mar 14, 23:44:45 #16 Last Edit: 2013 Mar 14, 23:52:45 by GlassMirror
Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Mar 14, 23:37:23
Ah... I see. I mistook your ? (ri) for a ? (ra).

You might want to make the last character look more like ? so others don't confuse it as well.

Edit - Looks like this forum doesn't support Japanese Hiragana. So, just look at a table and I recommend making two strokes instead of one for that character so the two parts aren't connected.


I will take your advice, thank you. X3 and Quest is coming soon...soon....later.... I don't know, I'm not really done with Relic, so she'll come when he's done :3

GlassMirror


GlassMirror

Plus I also changed the song! :] now both of them have the same theme

Dark Hooves

i really l your battle weary pic of Quest and the other pic she resembles Fluttershy a little bit.
<br /><br />everypony is capable of great good or great evil but everypony should be treated like their worth giving a chance<br /><br />My OCs. http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=6860.0

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