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Offline Shadow Mare

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark
« Reply #20 on: 2013 Jun 24, 17:24:28 »
Well played Ancient Relic... >:/

still love ur character! 0:)
Spark: *Girly scream* Spike! You do love me!!! But what's with the weird costume? That's not gonna hide you from marrying me!

Re: Shadow Mare and Spark
« Reply #21 on: 2013 Jun 29, 13:54:22 »
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...
If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
When in doubt, hotdogs.

Re: Shadow Mare and Spark
« Reply #22 on: 2013 Jun 29, 14:01:04 »
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...
If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.

Re: Shadow Mare and Spark
« Reply #23 on: 2013 Jun 29, 14:06:04 »
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...
If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.
:I
When in doubt, hotdogs.

Re: Shadow Mare and Spark
« Reply #24 on: 2013 Jun 29, 14:22:48 »
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...
If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.
:I
its all the possible ways of Internet browsing.
Oh, forgot, there's also the 3DS.

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark
« Reply #25 on: 2013 Jun 29, 14:23:33 »
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...
If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.
:I
its all the possible ways of Internet browsing.
Oh, forgot, there's also the 3DS.
I have 3DS, but I use my laptop ^-^

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark
« Reply #26 on: 2013 Jul 04, 23:22:04 »

Relic: Real cute. Are you and your sister still crying about who's better? ;)

Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #27 on: 2013 Jul 05, 00:37:19 »
I just read Dawn Mare's personality... It's almost the perfect opposite of shadow. ovO

Offline Shadow Mare

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #28 on: 2013 Jul 05, 00:38:38 »
SM: And what does THAT supposed to mean? >:/

Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #29 on: 2013 Jul 05, 00:40:00 »
SM: And what does THAT supposed to mean? >:/
which means bacon and insanity, my good ol' friend. *puts hoof on Shadow's elbow*

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #30 on: 2013 Jul 05, 00:42:06 »
*INTENSE ANGER OVERLOAD FROM SM!!!!!!!!!!!!*

Offline Kittilot

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #31 on: 2013 Jul 10, 15:28:27 »
I am assuming that Shadow Mare is a pun off Shadowmere, the demon horse from Oblivion AND Skyrim?

Snapshots from Skyrim and Oblivion below:
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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #32 on: 2013 Jul 10, 15:33:26 »
Yeah, my ocs are pretty much inspired by the Elder Scrolls especially Skyrim.

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #33 on: 2013 Jul 11, 17:32:52 »
Relic: That's why I don't know what Dovahs and whatever else they are, because it sounds kinda nerdy.  ;)

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and *Torch *=TBA
« Reply #34 on: 2013 Jul 12, 12:16:34 »
OH UM THIS POST WAS NOTHING  :3
Shave and a haircut..

Offline Gracie Sky

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and Torch
« Reply #35 on: 2013 Jul 20, 17:55:22 »
All four of your OCs seem like they were specifically created for each other. Strangely enough, their chemistry together is based on contrast; they are polar opposites and yet require the other to be complete. The mutual dependency they have on each other does steal from their individuality, but they have good synergy when they are together. However, they pretty much always must be together.

Your characters are "dragon ponies" and assistances to those dragon ponies. I'm really not too sure how I feel about such a union, especially since nothing in the show suggests half-pony breeds of any sort. I'll have to give you the benefit of the doubt here, though, and assume such a breed is legitimate.

As characters themselves, I see nothing wrong with the material about them you provided, although I did note how brief your descriptions were. Of course, if this is exactly what you wanted to reveal about your characters at this point, I see nothing wrong with it.

Oh... you might want to proofread it a bit. "Additude" is not a real word. :P
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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and Torch
« Reply #36 on: 2013 Jul 20, 23:02:07 »
All four of your OCs seem like they were specifically created for each other. Strangely enough, their chemistry together is based on contrast; they are polar opposites and yet require the other to be complete. The mutual dependency they have on each other does steal from their individuality, but they have good synergy when they are together. However, they pretty much always must be together.

Your characters are "dragon ponies" and assistances to those dragon ponies. I'm really not too sure how I feel about such a union, especially since nothing in the show suggests half-pony breeds of any sort. I'll have to give you the benefit of the doubt here, though, and assume such a breed is legitimate.

As characters themselves, I see nothing wrong with the material about them you provided, although I did note how brief your descriptions were. Of course, if this is exactly what you wanted to reveal about your characters at this point, I see nothing wrong with it.

Oh... you might want to proofread it a bit. "Additude" is not a real word. :P
I suck at spelling...

Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and Torch
« Reply #37 on: 2013 Oct 01, 10:10:08 »
Cool OCs! I like dragons, I like ponies. Combine them... GOLD!!!
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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and Torch
« Reply #38 on: 2013 Oct 01, 15:00:53 »
Nice!

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Re: Shadow Mare and Spark/Dawn Mare and Torch
« Reply #39 on: 2013 Oct 01, 16:39:40 »
Is Torch and Spark sisters to?  :3