Odette And Sunflower

Started by PrincessParfait, 2012 Jun 06, 04:44:49

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Gracie Sky

I'd like to know how ponies knit and how Unicorns grow plants, which I believe is something only Earth Ponies can do... but at the same time, you beat me to the punch on making an OC Unicorn who grows things...

Other than all that, I like her even more than Odette, although not by much. You cleverly avoided naming her after her cutie mark by blanking her memory and real name. Her personality is far less predictable than your last two OCs, which adds a special dimension to her. I'm just praying this hidden back story isn't too tragic.

You seem to be getting better at making realistic, down to earth (or Equestria) OCs. :D
Character Critique Thread

Have your OC fairly and honestly evaluated!

PrincessParfait

Thanks a bunch~! I do like this one much better. I'm deleting the other one.
Back story isn't too tragic, I promise  ;)

GalvinRoe

Deleting the other one . . . . not Odette? Don't delete Odette Parfait  :'(.

PrincessParfait


GalvinRoe

2012 Jun 21, 23:00:36 #24 Last Edit: 2012 Jun 21, 23:02:39 by GalvinRoe
She's a pony too, sure maybe didn't come out just like you would like but you made her, once that's deleted she ceases to exist  :x.

Are you willing to kill off a character? I think she still has potential and even if she doesn't, let her have what she does. No need to delete her.

As an author the main reason I write is to give the characters I think of, a life, once I have them on paper they have the chance to thrive and flourish. Change from my original idea and become . . . a character. It doesn't matter if it's *YOUR* character, would you kill a child even though it's yours? It is your choice though . . . and I don't have any kind of say in this but just wanted to tell you what I believe  :'(.

PrincessParfait

I'm not gonna delete her forever. Just take her off from here.   ovO
But I'll give it another try~

GalvinRoe

As I said, I have no say in it . . .  :x. Do whatcha will  :c.

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