Escape to the future (Sign-Up RP)

Started by Peace Keeper, 2015 Mar 11, 03:35:39

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Maplewood

"how long where you kepping that in for?" maple asked surprised by the unicorns big outburst

Nocturna

"That was a very informative rant, Sir Illusion," Nocturna begins carefully. "In any case, Combo, I don't quite understand how you're in here, mind explaining that?" She inquires, curiosity plaguing her.

Ryo_D_Disk

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Just a reminder guys keep the RP's freindly a good tone keeps a good RP

Ryo D Disk



Nocturna

2015 May 25, 14:21:05 #663 Last Edit: 2015 May 25, 14:37:03 by Nocturna
((Friendly as in what? If you mean person-to-person all of it is RP apart from our friendly OOC. If you mean the RP in general, the conflicts aid in its continuation, as we're approaching the final arc of this specific roleplay. If you don't mind clarifying and explaining, it'd be appreciated.

The rant was a bit of a dark tone, but it still wasn't too far, in my opinion. If you believe it was, then very well, or if you're referring to something else, I hope you point it out.))

Weremetalwolf

Quote from: Stryder221 on 2015 May 25, 07:17:43
"nevermind the bloody danger I put myself into just by visiting a friend in your stinking mud-hole of a village!

To explain what Ryo did, this is the part he edited. The adjective "bloody", is not permitted since it falls into the rule that forbids the use of a certain terminology (see rule 7a)
Quote7.) No Obscenity - We require everyone to observe and maintain common sensitivity and a sense of decency. This includes:
   
      a.) No racist, bigoted, vulgar, or distasteful language.
      b.) No adult situations in any portion of the site. This includes non-public areas.
      c.) Gore is strongly prohibited. This is a family-friendly site where people of all ages venture.
      d.) Weapons can only be used as props. Firearms of any kind are prohibited.

Even being a not serious kind of vulgarity, it's still considered one, hence, why it fell into the category and not be considered friendly from a site that is inspired from a child show.
Hope I cleared any doubt, if not, let me know and I'll try to make it clearer.
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Gracie Sky

As soon as the nets were thrown and a lot of words were thrown, Gracie took cover under the nearest table she could find. This one was covered in a tablecloth, so it completely hid her from sight, although it was very unlikely that she got under there before anypony could see her, especially since her tail was still sticking out. She was trembling in apprehension, which made the table tremble as well. Whatever they were arguing about was uncomprehensible to her, since the sheer volume and hostility of their voices scared her.
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Nocturna

((My appreciation towards you good sir. I apologize for my prior use of the same term, and I shall refrain from using it in the future. Cheers!))

"Gracie, you can come out, we're fine for now," Nocturna says to the tail sticking out of the table.

Peace Keeper

*-I'll keep that in mind of the rules.
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Double Edge has told me how you spared him. However, I was lucky to find him when he was crying out for help. He is able to escape... except he got injured while trying to escape. He would have been trapped there forever! I thank you for sparring him but I hate you for sealing him. You could have at least left it open. Besides, you petrified him for a good time for you to escape to another village! And my village you say. It is corrupt as tartarus for crying out loud. I did not fall into this, this... wretched winds of hatred. You lack respect... but so is Edge. He is bought into this hatred. Me and him were friends, but the only friend I can make. Nopony respected me but him, and he supported me. He raised me tough, but I did not got raised to hate. I do my best to help him buy in to unity, so that there can be a better future. I try showing unity to the foals, which is why I showed great mercy when I saw those fillies. I please you all to try to not show these fillies the violence and hatred of the ponies.Edge also told me that he was a fool for being too aggressive and not thinking straight but anger.

*stares at the ground, then realizes* Oh, and to answer to you Vampire Pony. I have noticed before finding Edge, you were heading to the castle, so after finding out about my friend, I chased after you all into the castle.
Representing the Element of Peace, my name is Peacekeeper, and I am an Evershade Crusader. I am also a proud member of Chat-o-Landia. My talent is preventing conflict and maintaining order.

Nocturna

"A Vampony to be specific, but whatever I suppose," Nocturna says. "Also, chasing after us? Really?" She continues, shaking her head. She hears the banging of some of the guards heading back.

"Fertrey, trotonica, le linaseo!" Nocturna shouts, creating a magical barrier around the entrance to the room, a web of chains within it.

Peace Keeper

I have heard you Vampony of your whereabouts, but this is feels too unorthodox of you. I must know why are you really here for?
Representing the Element of Peace, my name is Peacekeeper, and I am an Evershade Crusader. I am also a proud member of Chat-o-Landia. My talent is preventing conflict and maintaining order.

Nocturna

"A purpose? The question is not whether I'll tell you, the question is can you handle as such," Nocturna states.

Peace Keeper

As long as it doesn't endanger the lives of others, especially these fillies.
Representing the Element of Peace, my name is Peacekeeper, and I am an Evershade Crusader. I am also a proud member of Chat-o-Landia. My talent is preventing conflict and maintaining order.

Nocturna

"This room is one of immense power, allowing one to create and travel through a Rift in time. This room is going to be used to travel to a certain period of time," Nocturna explains, vaguely.

Peace Keeper

Time travel!? My guess may be that you are not from this time. So... these may be your time-traveling friends as well I presume.
Representing the Element of Peace, my name is Peacekeeper, and I am an Evershade Crusader. I am also a proud member of Chat-o-Landia. My talent is preventing conflict and maintaining order.

Nocturna

"Me, I am from this time, though memories always bring haze to my mind. The ones that have travelled to this period in time are those," Nocturna says, pointing to the future ponies. "The rest of us simply are assisting them, perhaps to help ourselves..escape from the troubles of our past and this time period.." She continues, trailing off, shaking to recover from whatever possessed her near the end.

Peace Keeper

You are future ponies!? So you are from the future?...

... So perhaps that may explain why you were helping each other. Is no wonder. If I would have known that, I would have assisted you as well. And by looking at these different races together tells me there is hope for unity in the future. It is very hostile, and I believe that you future ponies are in no well condition to handle our time. So go return to your time before it is too late! These ponies can break through your barriers with the correct tool.


Combo throws a hook and uncovers the nets off.
Representing the Element of Peace, my name is Peacekeeper, and I am an Evershade Crusader. I am also a proud member of Chat-o-Landia. My talent is preventing conflict and maintaining order.

Nocturna

"Yes..let's do so indeed," Nocturna states, laughing menacingly.

"Turenkadis, tufraleous, si corruptica!" She shouts, causing weakness upon the group. "I appreciate the help, my fine fellows, though my plan for time travel was to bring me back in time, to save my foal from that horrendous pony," She says, her fangs out in anger, insanity clouding her. "Almost everything is in set now, finally it can all be done," She continues, tears in her eyes, from what she doesn't understand.

((There's the final conflict for the current roleplay, from my end. It's meant to be a quick, emotional one, and no, we're not really going to be travelling back to that time before the end of it. Perhaps we could do a sequel of this RP, post-returning to the proper timeline. If you want me not to do this, then I suppose I can modify it, though that would mean all the build up was for nothing on my end, lol.))

Peace Keeper

*-It's cool. As long as we can get enough fun out of it.
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What is this spell!? You... you really are a terrible one aren't you. My brother then is right all along. You should have been slain a long time ago.

*Whispering from the weakness* What... the... why? Please... this isn't gonna end me.
*whispering from the weakness*That... little [shrimp]. She lied to us, that friggin liar.
Representing the Element of Peace, my name is Peacekeeper, and I am an Evershade Crusader. I am also a proud member of Chat-o-Landia. My talent is preventing conflict and maintaining order.

Maplewood

"I knew I should have never trusted you witch" maple sneered trying to break the spell

Gracie Sky

The table Gracie Sky was hiding under shook violently as the filly inside hit her head on the top of it. Gracie poked her head out from underneath the tablecloth and her eyes were immediately drawn towards Nocturna. Her eyes confirmed what Gracie could feel from the tone of her voice, great pain. Gracie could not comprehend why she looked so sad, but Gracie could not bear to see a pony so sad, so sad that they were also angry at the same time. But she could sense that this situation was far more dangerous than anything she's been recently confronted with. What was she to do about this? The only thing she knew: anything she could.

"N-nocturna! W-what are you doing? Why are you so sad? Please tell me!" Gracie shouted, hysterically worried.
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