My OC

[XxSlendyxX]

Name(s)-Magic Dusk
Age- Um 15?
Gender-Mare
Breed-Pegasus
Color-Black
Others-?

[Weremetalwolf]

I suggest you to put a few more infos about your oc like, the appearance, the personality, the cutiemark and the special talent, what she likes and dislikes. The way you wrote about your oc is too basic.

[Tiger]

I suggest you to put a few more infos about your oc like, the appearance, the personality, the cutiemark and the special talent, what she likes and dislikes. The way you wrote about your oc is too basic.

Yes, this please. Also be sure to include the history of the character (eg how she got her cutie mark)

[Dark Hooves]

this template should help you

Name:
Species:
Wing power: (if applicable)
Mana Points: (if applicable)
Gender:
Age:
Coat color:
Mane and tail color:
Mane and tail shape:
Eye color:
Personality:
Positive traits:
Cutiemark:
Special talent:
B-day:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Favorite food:
Occupation:
Dream job:
Skills:
Hobbies:
Negative traits/limitations: