Yellowpikmin476's OCs!

[The Wandering Magus]

I'll be happy to help if you wish.  Descriptions are always welcome.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

I'll be happy to help if you wish.  Descriptions are always welcome.

Sure!

[The Wandering Magus]

Let's start with Rainstorm: I've filled in a few blanks, but he's your character.

Name: Rainstorm
Description: He LOVES the rain, and it's constantly raining over his house. Although he does keep himself clean, he always has a bit of mud on his hooves(much to Rarity's annoyance if she's around ) just as a trademark of sorts. He also has a crush on Rainbow Dash. He is one of the most important ponies for weather setup jobs. He is also Yellow and Flower's brother.

age:
gender: stallion
personality:
where was he born: Cloudsdale?
what does he actually do for a living, what's his job: forepony of the Weather Factory?
where does he live in Equestria: Cloudsdale?
what are his strengths: authoritative?
What are his weaknesses: Fear of rejection?
What are his likes: water?
and dislikes: droughts?
Who are his friends:
Who are his enemies, if any:
What was his foalhood like:
Does he have an education: yes?
Where was he educated: Flight School?
What are his parents like: kind? caring?
Does he have siblings: brother to Yellow and Flower
What is his relationship with his family: amiable relationship?
How did he get his cutiemark:
What age was he when he got it:

[GoldenTerrabyte]

Let's start with Rainstorm: I've filled in a few blanks, but he's your character.

Name: Rainstorm
Description: He LOVES the rain, and it's constantly raining over his house. Although he does keep himself clean, he always has a bit of mud on his hooves(much to Rarity's annoyance if she's around ) just as a trademark of sorts. He also has a crush on Rainbow Dash. He is one of the most important ponies for weather setup jobs. He is also Yellow and Flower's brother.

age: However old Rainbow Dash is
gender: stallion
personality: He is sensitive by nature, but is still able to stand up for himself. He is generally hard working, but will slack off every once in a while. He has a clear honesty hold-up, he can't stand lying. Although he might strike some as lonely, he is actually very energetic and happy most of the time. He is generally very kind, but he still gets very annoyed and some ponies.
where was he born: Cloudsdale
what does he actually do for a living, what's his job: He is the main rain set-up pony for the weather factory, and is also hoping to join the Wonderbolts someday.
where does he live in Equestria: Ponyville
what are his strengths: He is a very capable flier, and because of his love of rain, has no trouble traveling through almost any conditions.
What are his weaknesses: Fear of spiders, and impatience.
What are his likes: water, rain(of course), anything that lights up.
and dislikes: droughts, extreme heat, waiting long times.
Who are his friends: Rainbow Dash(he also has a crush on her), The rest of the Mane 6.
Who are his enemies, if any: Rarity(not so much, but she kinda avoids him, she doesn't like him too much)
What was his foalhood like: He had an interesting foalhood, living with an earth pony AND a unicorn, him being a pegasus. They came up with interesting games, involving the fact that they were all 3 pony races.
Does he have an education: Yes.
Where was he educated: Flight School, and also in his training for a high-rank weather factory job.
What are his parents like: kind, caring, strict, thus he is very well behaved.
Does he have siblings: brother to Yellow and Flower
What is his relationship with his family: A very kind and loving relationship.
How did he get his cutiemark: He got it when he was bored one day, but all of a sudden there was a large and colorful explosion that bumped the clouds in the sky around, and it started raining! He then played around in the rain all day, and when it stopped raining, he flew around and found more clouds. He brought them over and he had got his cutie mark: a rain drop!
What age was he when he got it: just a little colt.

So there, how's that? I'll put that in his description once I can go on the computer. The Wii can't copy and paste.

[The Wandering Magus]

Let's start with Rainstorm: I've filled in a few blanks, but he's your character.

Name: Rainstorm
Description: He LOVES the rain, and it's constantly raining over his house. Although he does keep himself clean, he always has a bit of mud on his hooves(much to Rarity's annoyance if she's around ) just as a trademark of sorts. He also has a crush on Rainbow Dash. He is one of the most important ponies for weather setup jobs. He is also Yellow and Flower's brother.

age: However old Rainbow Dash is
gender: stallion
personality: He is sensitive by nature, but is still able to stand up for himself. He is generally hard working, but will slack off every once in a while. He has a clear honesty hold-up, he can't stand lying. Although he might strike some as lonely, he is actually very energetic and happy most of the time. He is generally very kind, but he still gets very annoyed and some ponies.
where was he born: Cloudsdale
what does he actually do for a living, what's his job: He is the main rain set-up pony for the weather factory, and is also hoping to join the Wonderbolts someday.
where does he live in Equestria: Ponyville
what are his strengths: He is a very capable flier, and because of his love of rain, has no trouble traveling through almost any conditions.
What are his weaknesses: Fear of spiders, and impatience.
What are his likes: water, rain(of course), anything that lights up.
and dislikes: droughts, extreme heat, waiting long times.
Who are his friends: Rainbow Dash(he also has a crush on her), The rest of the Mane 6.
Who are his enemies, if any: Rarity(not so much, but she kinda avoids him, she doesn't like him too much)
What was his foalhood like: He had an interesting foalhood, living with an earth pony AND a unicorn, him being a pegasus. They came up with interesting games, involving the fact that they were all 3 pony races.
Does he have an education: Yes.
Where was he educated: Flight School, and also in his training for a high-rank weather factory job.
What are his parents like: kind, caring, strict, thus he is very well behaved.
Does he have siblings: brother to Yellow and Flower
What is his relationship with his family: A very kind and loving relationship.
How did he get his cutiemark: He got it when he was bored one day, but all of a sudden there was a large and colorful explosion that bumped the clouds in the sky around, and it started raining! He then played around in the rain all day, and when it stopped raining, he flew around and found more clouds. He brought them over and he had got his cutie mark: a rain drop!
What age was he when he got it: just a little colt.

So there, how's that? I'll put that in his description once I can go on the computer. The Wii can't copy and paste.

very good start   it's the same thing for each character, in turn

The middle child of kind and caring yet strict parents, the young Rainstorm was always a very capable flier, born in Cloudsdale as he was.  Though he was often impatient (and had a particular fear of spiders), he loved rain and water, and willingly flew through almost any weather.  He had an interesting foalhood, living with an earth pony AND a unicorn brother, and the three siblings invented numerous imaginative games exploiting each of their respective abilities.  One day when he was just a little colt, a bright and colorful explosion caused the clouds in the sky to all gather together and begin raining; after spending the entire day playing in the downpour and going to gather more clouds when the rain stopped, Rainstorm discovered his cutiemark: a raindrop!  As the colt matured, he began to train for his future in Flight School, eventually earning a high-rank weather factory job setting up projects.  He aspires to join the Wonderbolts some day, but for the moment he lives peacefully in Ponyville, making friends with such local celebrities as Rainbow Dash and the rest of the Mane Six.  Though he does avoid Rarity and is avoided by the dressmaker in turn, he is a sensitive and hardworking pony who always tells the truth.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

Well, the truth is, do I really need a long backstory for everything about all of them? I like keeping things simple. I know, most of the people here like long an extensive backstories, but for my OCs, I don't care much about their past. Just their present. I will eventually add more, and even perhaps 1 or 2 backstories, but if so, they will be short. I have a few more ideas since I last updated, but who knows if I'll add them.

[The Wandering Magus]

Well, the truth is, do I really need a long backstory for everything about all of them? I like keeping things simple. I know, most of the people here like long an extensive backstories, but for my OCs, I don't care much about their past. Just their present. I will eventually add more, and even perhaps 1 or 2 backstories, but if so, they will be short. I have a few more ideas since I last updated, but who knows if I'll add them.

It's always useful to at least have the backstory on hoof for reference, so you can relate to other characters during social RP or pull some skill or another from a detailed backstory when integrating into adventure RPs.  For instance, being able to say "Feather probably is known and well-respected in Canterlot unlike the other players" because you already specified that in your backstory and don't have to argue the point with the GM, making it easier for all involved.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

But really what I meant was, I would have that type of thing in his OC file, I just wouldn't have a story to tell why. You get the gist of what I'm saying, right?

[The Wandering Magus]

But really what I meant was, I would have that type of thing in his OC file, I just wouldn't have a story to tell why. You get the gist of what I'm saying, right?

I suppose.  I just think it's more helpful to have all your thoughts organized in a story form rather than a haphazard list of various traits and factoids.  I generally remember stories better than I remember lists, but that's just me.  I also think it would save space in a way.

[FrostFlightTheFox]

These OCs are lovely~
I cant find anything wrong with them and they arent to god mod or bland and boring.
But you may want to put more then two sentences behind the charecter give them some more personality!
As in like write a short story behind them. Thats the only complaints I have.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

I know, and I agree with that, I'm only saying I don't need to say their whole past. I know, lots of OCs have their complicated and dramatic pasts, but I just think mine aren't that intricate.

[The Wandering Magus]

I know, and I agree with that, I'm only saying I don't need to say their whole past. I know, lots of OCs have their complicated and dramatic pasts, but I just think mine aren't that intricate.

That's perfectly fine   A simple and quiet past is welcome as well.  And I'm sure that, here at least, such a past would be unique in and of itself.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

MAJOR UPDATE: I added ages, and I shed some light on the "quests".

[The Wandering Magus]

will you be placing any of the suggested information in the OC data sheets?

age:
gender: stallion
personality:
where was he born: Cloudsdale?
what does he actually do for a living, what's his job: forepony of the Weather Factory?
where does he live in Equestria: Cloudsdale?
what are his strengths: authoritative?
What are his weaknesses: Fear of rejection?
What are his likes: water?
and dislikes: droughts?
Who are his friends:
Who are his enemies, if any:
What was his foalhood like:
Does he have an education: yes?
Where was he educated: Flight School?
What are his parents like: kind? caring?
Does he have siblings: brother to Yellow and Flower
What is his relationship with his family: amiable relationship?
How did he get his cutiemark:
What age was he when he got it:

[GoldenTerrabyte]

Like I've said before, I don't NEED to explain ALL that. I prefer to keep some stuff unmentioned, so you have to meet them in RP to learn that stuff.

[The Wandering Magus]

here's hoping you remember all of it for each OC several years from now.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

Never escapes my mind.

[GoldenTerrabyte]

There! I gave you what you want! Personalities and where they were born. Sorry, no backstories. Their past is less interesting than their future.

[The Wandering Magus]

nice job!

[GoldenTerrabyte]

Made the names less generic. Especially Flower and Yellow. And their names in the descriptions are the color of their text in RP.