My OC, Shadow Star

[Shadow17598]

Name: Shadow Star
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Personality: Shadow is kind of shy, but is very loyal. He is also very self-concious. When with friends, he is very outgoing and a big jokester. Prone to bullying.
Race: Alicorn
Magic: All kinds of magic, signature spell is he causes his wings to display the moon (on both of them) and then (as the horn is charging very much) both wings show the picture of both moons shooting a beam that, when reaching the wings, come out and blast towards the enemy. Not used often, as Shadow Star is very timid and a pacifist.

Bio: Was born in Canterlot, birthed by a pegasus and unicorn (Shadow Wing and Moon Sparkle.) His parents were very surprised as soon as he was born, that he was an Alicorn. As he grew up, he did not learn to use his horn or wings, and truthfully wasn't very interested. He soon met his best friends at the highest class elementary school in all of Equestria, Fire Feather (a Male Pegasus), Emerald (a Female Alicorn), and Diamond Eclipse (a Male Unicorn.) He was much more interested in spending his time with his friends because he was afraid if he used his magic and wingpower, he would be taken away from them. He was bullied quite a lot when his friends weren't around because all the other students thought him to be different and took advantage of his weakness. When his friends discovered this, they all began to tutor him, for they were all very gifted, insisting he stand up for himself. Fire Feather gave flying lessons, Diamond Eclipse gave magic lessons, and Emerald taught him how to put it together. After a few months, his friends had finished their lessons, and soon Shadow Star was the most gifted of them all. When he was confronted on his way back to the bathroom by the same bullies, he said "I have the power to put a stop to this now, but I really don't want to embarrass you, and I'd much rather spend my time having fun." With that said, his cutie mark appeared. He still does not understand to this day, but for some reason, his cutie mark became a dark star over a moon. After that incident, he was never bullied again. As he grew up, him and all of his greatest friends continued to stay together throughout middle school, high school, and even college. They all decided they wanted a change of scenery from all the stuck up ponies in Canterlot, so they all decided to move to Ponyville together. After a few weeks there, Shadow Star decided he needed some new clothes, and all over town he had heard about the local dress store incorporating stallion clothes. He went to check it out, and as soon as he entered he was bedazzled by the gorgeousness of Rarity. As soon as he walked in, he blushed and thought of running out, but he came for clothes and that is what he was going to get. He made a determined face and walked through the store, purposefully letting Rarity see his horn and wings. Long story short, they fell in love and got married and had twin Alicorns. Emerald and Fire Feather got married and Diamond Eclipse was forever alone.



That was more like a fanfiction, sorry "orz




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[teacloud]

I see you posted this in the OC critique thread, but never got a response. Do you mind if I give you some feedback? :>

[b3nzay]

aren't alicorns the equivalent to gods?