Portal Jumper, My OC.

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2012 Nov 21, 21:50:29 Last Edit: 2013 Feb 21, 21:32:17 by AAA13
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Name: Portal Jumper
Gender: Female
Race: Earth pony
Home: A universe called Evernight. The Elements of Harmony never existed here, and were replaced with the Elements of Chaos.

Story: A few days before she was named, She found a portal to another Ponyverse.
Nothing unusual, they were all over the place where she lived.
She went through to have a look, but found that in the Ponyverse she had crossed to, Discord had won.
Normaly ponies can't get back through a portal, it's only a one-way door, but Portal Jumper discovered she could do it without the aid of technology or magic.
Her parents thought this was a very lucky talent, and named her after her cutiemark.

Present: She now works for the royals, along with many other ponies, in an Agency they call 'The Dimension Jumpers Alliance.'
Her boots, portal gun and ear piece are all implants, along with a special eye implant that displays portals for her.
She was given the chance to have these implanted as part of an experiment, which ended after they succeeded with her, for reasons unknown.
They can retracted to make Portal Jumper look semi-normal.

Implants:
Portal Gun: This is fairly straight forawrd. Point, shoot, instant portal. But, due to the fact that the dimensions are always moving, you have to be very presise about your aim, or else you're in trouble. Without being authorise by the royals, all portal tech is illegal.
Ear piece: This allows her to contact anypony in her organisation at anytime from any dimension; very useful on dangerous missions.
Eye Implant: Allows Portal Jumper to keep tabs on the movements of the known portals, and tells her what is beyond them.
Links to her portal gun to allow her more accurate aim.
Boots: Prevent Portal Jumper from being harmed if she falls for a height, by absorbing the brunt of the impact, as well as making sure she lands hooves-down.
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Blues-Music

Wait so her parents didn't name her , and let her live for a while until they decided what to name her , but then they let her go through a portal which she should have known was dangerous considering a lot of them pop up in her town , and her parents probably would have told her not to go in there. Why did she go in?

I have no problem with this O.C its very creative , but the way you worded out the back story was a tiny bit confusing so keep up the good work.

AAA13

Quote from: Blues-Music on 2012 Nov 22, 03:17:07
Wait so her parents didn't name her , and let her live for a while until they decided what to name her , but then they let her go through a portal which she should have known was dangerous considering a lot of them pop up in her town , and her parents probably would have told her not to go in there. Why did she go in?

I have no problem with this O.C its very creative , but the way you worded out the back story was a tiny bit confusing so keep up the good work.
Portal in this world come and go, it wasn't there before and she was curious.
They didn't notice untill it was too late to stop her and were too afraid to go in.
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Jenzy

Neat story.

Yeah. It's interesting how she's named AFTER her cutie mark... She must've been really young to find such a talent.

AAA13

Quote from: Jenzy on 2012 Nov 22, 14:12:02
Neat story.

Yeah. It's interesting how she's named AFTER her cutie mark... She must've been really young to find such a talent.

Yup.
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