My new OC

Started by Linkamena, 2012 Oct 27, 03:45:49

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Linkamena

2012 Oct 27, 03:45:49 Last Edit: 2012 Oct 27, 21:09:18 by Linkamena
Alot of people really hated my old OC  :c D: :c
Ends up I didn't follow the rules  O:

So here is a "fixed" version... (Less violent cutie mark)

Name: Linkamena Victoria Pie (Linkie Pie)
Gender: Mare
Race: Earth Pony
Cutie Mark: Frown Face
Age: 17
Looks: Dark gray, red eyes, and black flat-ironed mane.
And yet again, She is Pinkie's sister.
Backstory: She was an orphan and never met her true mother. She was left at the door of the Pie family with her sister Prim and taken in. She used to be light blue with light pink hair, until it faded and she turned a very dark shade. She never turned back to her light colour. Our true dad was a pegasus and our mom was a unicorn. My sister was gifted with both, while I had the disadvantage of having neither.

http://sphotos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/282251_125245437627080_967485375_n.jpg




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sorikuXIII

This is better than the last time honestly but you may want to give her a backstory cause pinkie only has two confirmed canon sisters so you may want a story about how she became her third sister but thats just my opinion on that.
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ShadowHeart

i agree with moonlight....i think i dont want to know what her old oc was like. it would probably scare me

Join the changeling herd, or she'll devour your love!

Linkamena

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Linkamena

Quote from: ShadowHeart on 2012 Oct 27, 08:54:02
i agree with moonlight....i think i dont want to know what her old oc was like. it would probably scare me
Where did you get the animated pony in your signature!?
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Vertigo,

needs a happy ending to me its kinda like this> once upona a time there was a little boy he was blind sick and death and never got better. The end.

Linkamena

Quote from: Vertigo, on 2012 Oct 27, 16:17:55
needs a happy ending to me its kinda like this> once upona a time there was a little boy he was blind sick and death and never got better. The end.
I know what you mean but this... Is Linkie happy? She is meant to be a depressed kinda backround character.
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sorikuXIII

that backstory is good but kinda short and makes others ask things like..what made her original color fade away?
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Linkamena

Bieng orphaned? I guess just bieng depressed by living on a rock farm
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Chirp

2012 Oct 27, 17:27:27 #9 Last Edit: 2012 Oct 27, 17:58:50 by Chirp
Let's see:
Related to one of the Mane Six?
Depression from (most likely) unmentioned adoption?
Fading colours for strange reasons?
Is the sad face in the picture supposed to be white on the inside? Meh, probably. Nice job actually importing one  ^-^
Depressed, yet lived with Pinkie Pie? Unpossible.

Sponk

Quote from: Chirp on 2012 Oct 27, 17:27:27
Let's see:
Related to on of the Mane Six?
Depression from (most likely) unmentioned adoption?
Fading colours for strange reasons?
Is the sad face in the picture supposed to be white on the inside? Meh, probably. Nice job actually importing one  ^-^
Depressed, yet lived with Pinkie Pie? Unpossible.
Yeah, Pinkie would even let a werewolf live with her. lol
Blah blah blah.

Anibell April Dash

I liek the idea! Super nice! dont let ppl let you down cuz u created a character, im having kinda the same problem by not including lots of detail,
but your character is nice, you made her yourself. (but yea, maybe not make them live with the one of the mane 6?)

Blues-Music

This seems incredibly inaccurate. Pinkie pie was treated poorly while Inkie , and Linkie were treated nicely.Also when Pinkie threw the party Linkie , and Inkie were both happy.They also share a very similar color scheme to pinkies parents more than pinkie does. In fact I could say Pinkie was the adopted one. Also why is every single O.C with a black color scheme an orphan , or a one with a sad story? Infact Shadow mare , and Madness were the only O.C's with black color schemes that didn't have completely dark stories.

Other than that good O.C.

Anibell April Dash

Quote from: Blues-Music on 2012 Oct 28, 14:55:52
This seems incredibly inaccurate. Pinkie pie was treated poorly while Inkie , and Linkie were treated nicely.Also when Pinkie threw the party Linkie , and Inkie were both happy.They also share a very similar color scheme to pinkies parents more than pinkie does. In fact I could say Pinkie was the adopted one. Also why is every single O.C with a black color scheme an orphan , or a one with a sad story? Infact Shadow mare , and Madness were the only O.C's with black color schemes that didn't have completely dark stories.

Other than that good O.C.
Your noticed tht too? I thought i wuz the only one e-e

Cutiebone

Quote from: Anibell April Dash on 2012 Oct 28, 14:42:53
I liek the idea! Super nice! dont let ppl let you down cuz u created a character, im having kinda the same problem by not including lots of detail,
but your character is nice, you made her yourself. (but yea, maybe not make them live with the one of the mane 6?)

It's not the detail that was the problem with your character, it's just that there's so many of them and they're so typical and undeveloped :P No one's letting her down because she made a character, lots of people make OC's! ^-^

Anyway, I like the OC! And it isn't bad that she likes her OC to be depressed, that's how she likes it :] Also guys, Linkie said that Linkie wasn't Pinkie's birth sister, she was abandoned on her doorstep.
Moved to Fluffy Ribbon. FR is universal. Rather than CB, which refers to an OC that isn't used anymore, it's better to use a name I'd actually like to be identified with... >.<

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