Sahara Special (re-do, POSITIVE feedback this time plz?)

[Anibell April Dash]

Gender: Mare
Race: Pegasus

backstory: Sahara is a desert pony, a pony who lives in the desert far far FAR away from Equestria. One day she decided to leave, since
she wanted to teach fillies, and not much fillies lived at the desert land. So she set off, from the desert
to Appleloosa. Then finally took the train to Ponyville. She got taught by Ms. Cheerilee on how to teach
young foals. After that she taught a small class at the school. Her cutie mark is unknown at the moment
but she does teach the meaning of "Special". Special meaning that everyone is special in a way,
no matter how big or how small you are. She also babysits and collects stuff aswell. And yes she is based off
a book i read.

[Blues-Music]

Good pony however i'm not sure why someone would post something without excpecting negative feedback.Its a good thing to have others say whats wrong in what you made so you can fix it.If you don't want negative feedback I suggest not posting it on any public website.
No offense , but I can't take it when ponies can't take criticism , and ask you to complement them on everything.

[The Wandering Magus]

I just realized... You're Sahara?!  I feel so now

how did she get to appleloosa?  walking?  how do you get a cutie mark without knowing what it is?  how did the other ponies of ponyville react to a complete stranger from a strange land coming into town?  similar to the way they reacted to Zecora?

[Tiger]

Good pony however i'm not sure why someone would post something without excpecting negative feedback.Its a good thing to have others say whats wrong in what you made so you can fix it.If you don't want negative feedback I suggest not posting it on any public website.
No offense , but I can't take it when ponies can't take criticism , and ask you to complement them on everything.

This.

You can't expect your character to be absolutely perfect. There's got to be some weak points, which other ponies will have to critique you about so that you can improve your OC.

This too:

how do you get a cutie mark without knowing what it is?

The only way I see that possible is when the cutie mark is some strange unknown alien symbol.


It's quite a nice OC anyway, how she teaches others that everypony is special. Nopony's the floormat that gets stepped on