Dragon Sisters

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Shadow Mare

Quote from: GlassMirror on 2013 Jun 24, 17:16:49
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Jun 24, 16:58:18
Well played Ancient Relic... >:/


still love ur character! 0:)

Spark: *Girly scream* Spike! You do love me!!! But what's with the weird costume? That's not gonna hide you from marrying me!

Alexander321

Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Jun 24, 15:57:59
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...

If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
When in doubt, hotdogs.

Nala Valor

Quote from: Alexander321 on 2013 Jun 29, 13:54:22
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Jun 24, 15:57:59
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...

If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.

Alexander321

Quote from: Nala Valor on 2013 Jun 29, 14:01:04
Quote from: Alexander321 on 2013 Jun 29, 13:54:22
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Jun 24, 15:57:59
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...

If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.

:I
When in doubt, hotdogs.

Nala Valor

Quote from: Alexander321 on 2013 Jun 29, 14:06:04
Quote from: Nala Valor on 2013 Jun 29, 14:01:04
Quote from: Alexander321 on 2013 Jun 29, 13:54:22
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Jun 24, 15:57:59
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...

If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.

:I
its all the possible ways of Internet browsing.
Oh, forgot, there's also the 3DS.

GlassMirror

Quote from: Nala Valor on 2013 Jun 29, 14:22:48
Quote from: Alexander321 on 2013 Jun 29, 14:06:04
Quote from: Nala Valor on 2013 Jun 29, 14:01:04
Quote from: Alexander321 on 2013 Jun 29, 13:54:22
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Jun 24, 15:57:59
I seen something like that... I wish I had a PC...

If you don't have a PC, how are you talking to us?   o.O
cellphone/iPod/ps3/wii/Xbox 360.

:I
its all the possible ways of Internet browsing.
Oh, forgot, there's also the 3DS.

I have 3DS, but I use my laptop ^-^

GlassMirror


Relic: Real cute. Are you and your sister still crying about who's better? ;)

Nala Valor

I just read Dawn Mare's personality... It's almost the perfect opposite of shadow. ovO

Shadow Mare


Nala Valor

Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Jul 05, 00:38:38
SM: And what does THAT supposed to mean? >:/
which means bacon and insanity, my good ol' friend. *puts hoof on Shadow's elbow*

Shadow Mare

*INTENSE ANGER OVERLOAD FROM SM!!!!!!!!!!!!*

Kittilot

I am assuming that Shadow Mare is a pun off Shadowmere, the demon horse from Oblivion AND Skyrim?

Snapshots from Skyrim and Oblivion below:
Spoiler: show
Shave and a haircut..

Shadow Mare

Yeah, my ocs are pretty much inspired by the Elder Scrolls especially Skyrim.

GlassMirror

Relic: That's why I don't know what Dovahs and whatever else they are, because it sounds kinda nerdy.  ;)

Kittilot

Shave and a haircut..

Gracie Sky

All four of your OCs seem like they were specifically created for each other. Strangely enough, their chemistry together is based on contrast; they are polar opposites and yet require the other to be complete. The mutual dependency they have on each other does steal from their individuality, but they have good synergy when they are together. However, they pretty much always must be together.

Your characters are "dragon ponies" and assistances to those dragon ponies. I'm really not too sure how I feel about such a union, especially since nothing in the show suggests half-pony breeds of any sort. I'll have to give you the benefit of the doubt here, though, and assume such a breed is legitimate.

As characters themselves, I see nothing wrong with the material about them you provided, although I did note how brief your descriptions were. Of course, if this is exactly what you wanted to reveal about your characters at this point, I see nothing wrong with it.

Oh... you might want to proofread it a bit. "Additude" is not a real word. :P
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Shadow Mare

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Jul 20, 17:55:22
All four of your OCs seem like they were specifically created for each other. Strangely enough, their chemistry together is based on contrast; they are polar opposites and yet require the other to be complete. The mutual dependency they have on each other does steal from their individuality, but they have good synergy when they are together. However, they pretty much always must be together.

Your characters are "dragon ponies" and assistances to those dragon ponies. I'm really not too sure how I feel about such a union, especially since nothing in the show suggests half-pony breeds of any sort. I'll have to give you the benefit of the doubt here, though, and assume such a breed is legitimate.

As characters themselves, I see nothing wrong with the material about them you provided, although I did note how brief your descriptions were. Of course, if this is exactly what you wanted to reveal about your characters at this point, I see nothing wrong with it.

Oh... you might want to proofread it a bit. "Additude" is not a real word. :P

I suck at spelling...

GoldenTerrabyte

Cool OCs! I like dragons, I like ponies. Combine them... GOLD!!!
pepsehhhh

Shadow Mare


GlassMirror


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