Soooo... I've decided to do something special. c:

[Ryo_D_Disk]

oh it was digitaly lowerd ah that explans it oh well regardless good sining and presuming the volume quality was lowerd when the sound went down that just means you have a good sining voice in real life

(and this is the point i begin making no sence oh well nothing new)

[PrincessButton]

oh it was digitaly lowerd ah that explans it oh well regardless good sining and presuming the volume quality was lowerd when the sound went down that just means you have a good sining voice in real life

(and this is the point i begin making no sence oh well nothing new)

Well thank you! 

[Tekner]

What happened to you changing the lyrics?

[PrincessButton]

What happened to you changing the lyrics?

I explained in the first post.

[Tekner]

Oh .

[PrincessParfait]

That was so cute   
Good job Pinkie.

[PrincessButton]

That was so cute   
Good job Pinkie.

Aww thanks Parfait. 

[Tekner]

That was so cute   
Good job Pinkie.

[PrincessButton]

That was so cute   
Good job Pinkie.

Thanks everypony, I'm also very excited to share it with you all.
I'd be interested in some of Tekner's nice constructive criticism like you got Legulus. 

What happened to my constructive criticism??^ 

[Tekner]

What happened to my constructive criticism??^ 

Oh. You were serious?
Hmm... I'd give you the exact same suggestions I berate myself with every time I try to sing .
Watch your consistency and strength of voice. We both tend to have the right idea when it comes to singing, but are prone to straying off pitch, tempo, and volume occasionally. By straying off I mean cracking almost; like a split second of "Doooohh... Why did I go that far..."
Besides that I thought it was wonderful and cute as heck .

[PrincessButton]

What happened to my constructive criticism??^ 

Oh. You were serious?
Hmm... I'd give you the exact same suggestions I berate myself with every time I try to sing .
Watch your consistency and strength of voice. We both tend to have the right idea when it comes to singing, but are prone to straying off pitch, tempo, and volume occasionally. By straying off I mean cracking almost; like a split second of "Doooohh... Why did I go that far..."
Besides that I thought it was wonderful and cute as heck .

Yes of course I was serious! 
Thanks. 

[Fudgemuffin]

I wish I had a sister who'd do that for me. You're awesome to sing for your brother.

[PrincessButton]

I wish I had a sister who'd do that for me. You're awesome to sing for your brother.

Thank youu.

[Fudgemuffin]

I wish I had a sister who'd do that for me. You're awesome to sing for your brother.

Thank youu.

No problem.

[Howlborne]

Constructive criticism? Let's do this!

Only a few off notes and missing a beat here and there, nothing too major T'was barely noticeable, really...

But maybe the lyrics:
For-other ponies to make my life complete

could be:
other ponies could make my life complete

[PrincessButton]

Constructive criticism? Let's do this!

Only a few off notes and missing a beat here and there, nothing too major T'was barely noticeable, really...

But maybe the lyrics:
For-other ponies to make my life complete

could be:
other ponies could make my life complete

Tips... from a VOICE ACTOR??  I'm honoured.
Thanks for the advice, I'll change the lyrics, and I'll try to keep on beat for my next song...
(yes I am doing more songs. )

[Howlborne]

(yes I am doing more songs. )

Glad to hear that

[ChilledEagle]

It sounds nice, I would definitely like to hear more from you. 

[PrincessButton]

Everyone is so nice. 
Thanks!