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Started by Featherdust418, 2015 Jul 25, 01:59:31
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Quote from: Honestly.Wrong on 2016 Jul 31, 16:08:50I still need to figure out what good Applejack would say to evil Applejack and vice versa. My current fanfic, the first attempt at one, I've got the Mane Six versus the Mane Six. And I'm attempting to do a small segment of each pony making a comment toward their counterpart. I got Twilight with her hero pride checked, Rarity with her fashion sense checked, Rainbow Dash challenging Rainbow Dash in speed checked, gonna have Pinkie be somewhat similar to the way she was to the changling that tried to be her. And for Fluttershy, I actually thought it be better if the evil version had adopted the attitude she learned from Iron Will. But, Applejack, it's hard to figure out.
Quote from: Featherdust418 on 2016 Aug 01, 10:20:21I think I'm a bit confused, about the "evil" mane six part. What are their personalities? Do they act in a way that is opposite to each element (a bit like they did when corrupted by Discord)? Or do they do bad things in general and cause trouble? Are the mane six trying to stop them and their wrongdoings, are they hearing negative things and questioning the things they love, are they being framed and are now on the run... I feel like I might need a bit more info, either that or I am completely misunderstanding what you said above... I'm sorry if it should be obvious and I am.
Quote from: Honestly.Wrong on 2016 Aug 01, 12:02:14Lol, I think you might be misunderstanding, but all the same, the evil Mane Six are from one of the mirror dimensions. They generally act like the good ones do, except for Fluttershy, except evil, . I don't want to reveal too much of my story, though, so I'm leaving it at that.
Quote from: Featherdust418 on 2016 Aug 01, 14:31:05I see. So with that, I am now wondering what kind of encounter this is between them. Is a first meet, where personalities are discovered and there is shock? Is it an attempt to change the personalities of the evil mane six? Or perhaps both?Maybe Applejack could say something about how dishonest the whole situation is, and that they need to stop their ridiculous ways of wreaking havoc. Also something about how they're disrupting the peace and tranquility of Ponyville (Equestria?) Or (if it's just a first time meeting) she could say something about how it can't be true and it must be a dream. Sort of like a disbelief kind of thing.Well, that's all for now... am I hitting any of the marks? Well if not, I hope you can at least branch off of that and think of other ideas... maybe. I hope I at least helped somewhat, best of luck to you and your writing!
Quote from: Honestly.Wrong on 2016 Aug 01, 14:35:17That did help out, actually. I was thinking of using her honesty, but didn't know how to go about it. And that definitely gives me an idea of how to do it. And technically, this is the first meeting. The good already knew the evil existed thanks to an OC in the story, they already met evil Twilight, but this is the first time both sides are in the same room. And it's all of Equestria, mostly in the Crystal Empire. And that's all I'm revealing, . Thank you for the help. I hope to get this fic done soon!
Quote from: Featherdust418 on 2016 Aug 02, 10:50:25Really? That's great! I'm glad I could help out and give you an idea, good to hear I hit some marks at least your story sounds very interesting, you should put a link to it when you're finished (or even now, if you'd like ) I hope you'll be able to finish it soon, and if you ever need any more help with ideas, I'll be happy to do my best to help again!
Quote from: Honestly.Wrong on 2016 Aug 02, 14:58:18I'll definitely keep that in mind. Thank you. And I'll surely give a link, when it's finished. But, when it's finished. I ain't got far to go, anyway. On the final climax.
Quote from: Featherdust418 on 2016 Aug 03, 17:56:26Awesome, can't wait to read it maybe I should link my fanfic... it's not done yet, but almost. I kind've gave up on it a while back, wasn't sure if it was any good. Who knows though, maybe I'll finish it someday just for fun!