Spa Buffet RP (Jump-In)

[Gamepad]

Game purrs happily, wagging his tail and wiggling.

[Timber Keyblade]

Gear rubs Game's belly some more.

[Gamepad]

Game, continues wiggling and purring and manages to roll himself into a mud bath.

[Timber Keyblade]

Gear joins after him.

[Gamepad]

Game splashed half-heartedly, trying to roll his body around and get more pets from the pone.

[Timber Keyblade]

Gear picks up Game, sets him on his lap and pets Game again.

[Gamepad]

Game, suprised by the amount of creatures that have picked him up at this spa, just rolls with it and hopes that he doesn`t break Gear's lap, purring from pets.

[Rainboom Blitz]

I enter The Ponyville day Spa and I decide to check out the buffet.  I eat a salad and walk to the mud baths and I climb right in and close my eyes and sigh happily

[Misty Fly]

*the 4 mares walk over to Rainboom*
Misty : hey there
Blaze : hi!
High winds : hey
Surprise : HI! *grins widely*

[Rainboom Blitz]

hello Misty, Blaze, High winds and Surprise, nice seeing you all 4 beautiful mares here
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I pet game and winks at the 4 mares talking to me as I flex my rugged stallion muscles cuz I'm kind of a showoff

[Misty Fly]

Surprise : do you like fun? i sure do! i remember that one time when i had too much but i.m already hyperactive
*Blaze puts a hoof on her mouth*
High winds : she is a bit hyperactive

[Rainboom Blitz]

I am a fan of the Wonderbolts and I don't mind hyperactiveness, I have a hyper sister back in cloudsdale so I'm used to it
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so what do u mares like to do for fun?

[Misty Fly]

Misty : really? well we may be wonderbolts but we dont really hang with Spitfire or fleetfoot
Blaze : yea theyre always busy
High winds : all 4 of us are best friends
Surprise : yep

[Rainboom Blitz]

u 4 are so awesome, I'd like to go out with u Misty, if its ok with u?

[Misty Fly]

Misty : i dont see why not
Blaze : mabe we should head back to the sauna
High winds : great idea
*the 4 mares enter the sauna*

[Rainboom Blitz]

I also have a crush on batponies too, the make my motor run so to speak.....can u bite me Misty? I say as I follow the 4 mares to the sauna

[Gamepad]

Game pulls head away from suddenly appearing pone as he tries to pet.

(Just a pointer, try to speak in third person, speak in proper sentences or with standard  English and don`t talk with numbers.

So, instead of  saying u 4 are so awesome. say "You four are so awesome." Said Blitz.
or instead of Surprise: yep. say "Yep." Said, Suprise Simply. Could also try adding some actions instead of just talking.

I get that English isn`t everyone's first language or people are not that good at it, but it would help your posts look more presentable and easier understood.)

[Rainboom Blitz]

"ok...my bad, as you wish my friend"
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" ok. time to sweat some tension out of me" I say as I enter the sauna

[Gamepad]

(Another tip, use brackets () to talk OOC - Out-Of-Character meaning that they are not acting in the RP or replying to things outside of the RP setting)

Game continued to sit and get petted, waggling his tail and purring.

[Rainboom Blitz]

* sits down in the nearest corner in the sauna and I close my eyes, slowly sweating out this past week's tension* "ahh this feels so good" said Blitz
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(( I got to Go now, be back this upcoming Monday or Tuesday...bye))