Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)

Started by Reginald27, 2015 Mar 05, 22:07:37

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this is off topic but I need help naming this I drew it up yesterday and I really like it but I don't know what to really name it/him  O:
an ask blog of mine id love for you to check it out https://www.tumblr.com/blog/10-souls-ask-blog

my regular art blog https://www.tumblr.com/blog/ask-ameliorate-kvasir

not sure what i can say about me that is of interests, but if you would like to ask me something ill be more than happy to answer!

waaaaaaah

I AM FIRE AND WATER, EARTH AND SKY! I AM POWER INCARNATE! YOU SHALL KNEEL BEFORE ME AS A WORSHIPER WOULD PROSTRATE BEFORE HIS GOD!"
-Me

My OCs
Book Keeper - Sketch Art - Star Diver

Randam Saiko

Mix and Match Suggestions:

1: Ravenous, Insatiable, Bottomless, Corrupted, Jagged, Carnivorous, Razor

2: Jowls, Maw, Abyss, Devour, Consumer, Variant, Dweller, Abomination, Hermit, Intake, Fangs, Hook, Jowl

Emit, you mischievous little...
My OCs

Reginald27

Quote from: waaaaaaah on 2015 Jun 05, 10:38:16
Looks pretty good  ^-^

I dub thee...Scrall!

Quote from: Randam Saiko on 2015 Jun 05, 10:40:05
Mix and Match Suggestions:

1: Ravenous, Insatiable, Bottomless, Corrupted, Jagged, Carnivorous, Razor

2: Jowls, Maw, Abyss, Devour, Consumer, Variant, Dweller, Abomination, Hermit, Intake, Fangs, Hook, Jowl


Some one suggested a name to me that had "jaws" in it, and I like that idea so something with jaws
an ask blog of mine id love for you to check it out https://www.tumblr.com/blog/10-souls-ask-blog

my regular art blog https://www.tumblr.com/blog/ask-ameliorate-kvasir

not sure what i can say about me that is of interests, but if you would like to ask me something ill be more than happy to answer!

Naura

Feel free to check out my [URL=http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=11982.0]Oc page[/URL]!

Reginald27

WHAT AM I DOING WITH MY LIFE RIGHT NOW!? DD:

well that's a good question, I'm sorry for not updating much at all on any blog but here is the long list of things I am working on at the same time so if you care to read go right ahead.

On the main mod tumblr blog @ask-ameliorate-kvasir I am working on a fan fiction story arch called "Rise of the Frost King" it's a project I have been laying off for months now mostly because I asked everyone to submit people's oc's that want to be in it as background and tried to figure out how to fit them in the story without changing there character because everyone has there own uniqueness to them and I didn't want to change that. However that Made it difficult for me and I was trying too hard, so I decided to disband the idea while I was ahead, I also decided that it would be better for me to script the whole thing so I can decide how I wanted this story to go, before actually started drawing it, thus can for sure get the actions emotions and the texts into a comic format that I can better picture.

So this project will take a while longer to actually be produced because I will need to draw up every character for the storyline and script the whole thing beginning to end before drawing it all out.

Moving on

There has been a very old blog that is over due for a year now called @10-souls-ask-blog that I have stopped for 2 reasons, I need to script before I draw out because I am god awful with dilog as well as how inconcistant I have been with my characters faces and bodies as well as perportions. So I literally have spent a year learning how to use "Blender" a 3d program and built a fully rigid model I can use for poses and movement refrence for my characters for future use. The only thing left I have to do is begin scripting and then find a photoshop program I can afford because it is something I really would enjoy having because of all the features it has to offer.

Last but not least the most recently active @ask-steve-the-pony this has been on hold for afford few months now, more then I'd like. A portion of the delay has been because my motivation had plumited for a while and is on a steady rise to being better, but also because my next update is going to be a video of Steve actually flying in the simulation, I'm doing this with source film maker program that everyone knows and loves but I am JUST learning how to best handle the program witch will obviously take some time, on top of that I am having a very hard time adding new things into the program like new models and created ones, I have asked for help before but no in really has done much exempt shown me how to sites and I still don't know what I do wrong.

Lastly I wanted to kick start rsrgamers again (and you tube channel), it's only having one problem right now because in the new call of duty black ops 3 game, there has been hardly anyone talking even though everyone has mics you can't hear or speak to anyone, it's an Xbox one issue and myself Steve and Reginald are having the exact same problem, I'm hoping it gets resolved soon but for now we may be going back to call of tudy ghost on Xbox 360 till the issue is resolved.

But that all for now I wanted to do this in a video but I'm just not giving myself the time to do it. it is just one step at a time it guess, I am very sorry for the wait but I apreciate your paitences, or that you have completely forgotten, whatever works... thanks for reading and have and wonderful day/night

-MOD/Rick
an ask blog of mine id love for you to check it out https://www.tumblr.com/blog/10-souls-ask-blog

my regular art blog https://www.tumblr.com/blog/ask-ameliorate-kvasir

not sure what i can say about me that is of interests, but if you would like to ask me something ill be more than happy to answer!

Reginald27



I cant believe its been a year since i started working on this comic but here is just some progress and differences of me rebooting this comic, all i have to say is, i hate books, all of them, they are simple but tedious as hell.

but anyways, just showing im alive.
an ask blog of mine id love for you to check it out https://www.tumblr.com/blog/10-souls-ask-blog

my regular art blog https://www.tumblr.com/blog/ask-ameliorate-kvasir

not sure what i can say about me that is of interests, but if you would like to ask me something ill be more than happy to answer!

Reginald27

Here is the new art style to the comic Page 1 O:
an ask blog of mine id love for you to check it out https://www.tumblr.com/blog/10-souls-ask-blog

my regular art blog https://www.tumblr.com/blog/ask-ameliorate-kvasir

not sure what i can say about me that is of interests, but if you would like to ask me something ill be more than happy to answer!

PrincessButton

It's very nice, I like how you made Spike look. :) It's great to see such improvement!
[Avatar drawn by Dusky Hues; Thank you!]

Reginald27

an ask blog of mine id love for you to check it out https://www.tumblr.com/blog/10-souls-ask-blog

my regular art blog https://www.tumblr.com/blog/ask-ameliorate-kvasir

not sure what i can say about me that is of interests, but if you would like to ask me something ill be more than happy to answer!

annosrules

2016 May 25, 23:42:28 #30 Last Edit: 2016 May 25, 23:44:30 by annosrules
Looking good, and defiantly a fair bit of improvement with the remaster. Would like to offer some critique, but can't trust my own brain late at night. :D

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