My OC...?

[IceWolf134]

UPDATED INFO! Thinking about changing her colour if I can... I like dark colours because it expresses what has happened to me in my life so far...
http://icewolf134.deviantart.com/art/My-MLP-Character-462133171?ga_submit_new=10%253A1403247538

Name: (I have three names that I can't choose from, SoundlessNight, SilentNight and NightSong)
Age: 100
Gender: Female-Filly
Type: Alicorn

Body Colour: Almost black, deep teal muzzle
Mane/Tail: black, deep teal(I think it's teal)
Cutie Mark: Moon with music notes and sparkles

Attitude: (Around Strangers)
Shy, Mature, Cold, Short-Tempered, Mysterious, Secretive, Quiet, Gives other ponies a blank expression, Quick Thinker

Attitude: (Around family and friends)
Kind, Mature, Short-tempered, Outgoing, Happy-sort of, Tries to smile, Helpful, Funny, Sometimes silly, Competitive, Quick Thinker, Quiet sometimes

Friends:
Family(Duh XD), Luna(Maybe?), Celestia(Maybe?), Forest animals, Zocora(Dat how you spell it 0.0), Chrysalis(Helped her find a secret home in the forest), Trixie(Dat how you spell it 0.0).

Likes: Night time(Moon also), Soft music(Joyful and Sad, Techno), Playing her flute, Autumn, Winter, Spring, Animals, Water, The forest, Ghostly beings, Moon flowers(Yes, I made that up...), Reading books(Different types, no real fav), making things to sell, singing, helping the sick-lost-injured, flying, anything including magic and/or teleportation and being alone from time to time.

Dislikes: Day time, loud music (Rock etc.), Summer, being treated as a royal(People bowing all the time etc.), big crowds, girly-girl things(some dresses), annoying noises, Strangers, Talking about the past. (Still thinking)

Family:
Stars Bliss- Little sister- Lost her at the age of 80- Thought dead
Comet Rocket- Big brother- Passed to the next life
Galaxy Star- Mother- Alive
Shadow Moon- Father- Alive

Lives: In a tree house on a hill in a grassy meadow surrounded by a thick forest, 4 days travel to ponyville.

Life Story:
Still thinking about it, will try and update soon...
But she hates being a royal that's why she's living in a tree in a grassy meadow... In a forest

Ok, soooo yeah... This is my character, please don't judge I'm still editing a few things like I said at the top of this post...
I'm VERY shy when it comes to rping, so don't expect me to go in willy-nilly and rp... I'm still trying to get over a few bad things that happened the last time I rped with a group...

[Ramisha]

Ok, This is my character so far but I might change her, depends if I can be bothered to....

Oh god please do change her. 

[IceWolf134]

Ok, This is my character so far but I might change her, depends if I can be bothered to....

Oh god please do change her. 

Well that hurt my feelings, I not going to change her... She's a reflection of me so please deal with it...

[Ramisha]

Good, good, but... don't you think she's... *whispers* a.. Mary Sue? 
Alicorn, 18 000 years old (?), a very dark colour scheme, doesn't like being royalty, a ton of magical pets...

[-ReiMar-]

I'm bad at critique and all) But I have to say: she's not Lore friendly. It's good that you have an imagination and made an OC with Chrysalis' palette, but try make her more fitting within world of Equestria) It's no fun RPing with fifty Alicorns, who lost their parents and lived longer than Celestia)) X) Well, actually we have more than fifty of those) ^^''
Don't take offence, ask people what they want you to change and either make a change, or find a reasonable explanation to leave things as is)

[IceWolf134]

There we go ^_^
Changed some things...
Please help me with the name, there are three I can't choose from

And I didn't mean to use Chrysalis' colour palette, I just kinda made her while listening to music XD
If you have any ideas for her colour please tell me!(Must be dark-I'm gothic/emo...)
Post Merge

Good, good, but... don't you think she's... *whispers* a.. Mary Sue? 
Alicorn, 18 000 years old (?), a very dark colour scheme, doesn't like being royalty, a ton of magical pets...

Sorry I snapped at you... I was having one of my emo moods... I apologise, please forgive me

[Ramisha]

It's ok. I didn't want to be mean to you either... but right now your oc makes no sense. She's not lore friendly, but some people manage to make good Alicorn ponies that fit in. You just have to make her stand out, but don't try to make her stand out too much. What's her talent anyway?
Ok, nevermind that. Her colors are too dark and monotonous. I was thinking maybe yoi should change her hair colors.
What do you think? In case you can't see the colors, it's dark blue, purple, teal, green, dark blue, purple, teal, green.
Oh, also, if you need any help with the character (I'm not so skilled at making characters myself) you could ask Gracie Sky. http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?action=profile;u=28 That's her profile.

[IceWolf134]

It's ok. I didn't want to be mean to you either... but right now your oc makes no sense. She's not lore friendly, but some people manage to make good Alicorn ponies that fit in. You just have to make her stand out, but don't try to make her stand out too much. What's her talent anyway?
Ok, nevermind that. Her colors are too dark and monotonous. I was thinking maybe yoi should change her hair colors.
What do you think? In case you can't see the colors, it's dark blue, purple, teal, green, dark blue, purple, teal, green.
Oh, also, if you need any help with the character (I'm not so skilled at making characters myself) you could ask Gracie Sky. http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?action=profile;u=28 That's her profile.

Thank chu ^_^