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2014 May 08, 05:05:44 Last Edit: 2017 Sep 12, 23:37:13 by LunarDusk
Decided to post my OCs since I haven't yet...

Edit: I've added limit breaks to the characters.

When in battle they are only triggered when the pony is on the verge of fainting and are used as a last resort or desperation attack. They can only use them once during a fight for balance issues to avoid being permanently OP.

The power scale goes off of PeaceKeepers Tier Scale
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The lowest tier on the list. At this tier, the character basically has no fight ability whatsoever, and if the character did, it is so terrible that anything can beat the character. It is considered broken in this tier because the character has NO fight potential, basically a liability to anyone who ventures in combat as a pair. ALWAYS avoid fights at all costs, even if it is against the next tier on the list.

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Terrible terrible TERRIBLE fighter. Not as bad as F-tier, E tiers somehow has some fight, even if it is a pathetic display. They would be brave, but lack fight knowledge, if any is learned.

This tier also applies to those who have no need to fight, but will put up one if the situation calls for it when absolutely necessary. But you won't be seeing some oh-so superpower ability, its not at all, just a fight-of-flight situation that goes naturally, and pretty much wouldn't be bothered much for such need to fight.

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NOW we are getting to those who are willing to fight. At D-tier, they plenty like to fight, or are just big and strong and would stand up to anyone who opposes. However... they seem tough, but that sometimes goes over their head. May just be strong, but lacks proper fighting skills. Its like the big bully in school, just big, but no skill. relies only in brawn skill. Not to say the character would be like a bully, but would lack the skill like one. Let's say they try going karate and epic fails.

Also this tier can be for a beginner training fighter. Those who just started. Of course they don't have any good knowledge, but that is where they start. Though they are better focused than the school bullies with no skill, they are not ready to take on just anyone yet.

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This tier is where we now having fight potential. In the C-tier, the character has learned a decent skill of fight. This is the minimum potential for royal guards to be at. Capable of subduing most common characters, can stand up against griffons or equivalence. High C-tiers would tend to be the best fighter of their hometown or of any town.

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B Tiers have great skill in fight. Nearing the sight of championship potential, these fighters are capable of facing decent offenders such as timberwolves and bears. They have skills and strengths to throw and submit such animals. Magic at this level is well-known in combat. They tend to have good skill in spells, and power output of the magic are able to lift timberwolves and toss them. The B-Tiers tend to be champions of their hometown, county, or even their state.

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A-Tiers are the go-to fighters that are incredibly skilled and trained. These fighters are in championship condition and may be masters of fighting at this level. Such great skill makes them fearsome, capable of fighting off a group of about 3-5 D-Tier ponies at once. Magic is also astounding, capable of a good number of combat spells, and telekinesis able to lift a cart. The A-Tiers tend to be state champions, or even country champions.

Characters notable at this tier level are Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Daring Do

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This is where masters will be. S-Tiers are masters of fighting. This is the maximum acceptable tier list. The characters would be masters of fighting capabilities, learning every technique in their arts. At this fighting potential, the character is capable of fighting 5-7 C-Tier ponies at once. They are near-unrivaled potential in their capabilities and commonly championship material. Magic is also extraordinary, with many spells learned, and high magical output that can carry an Ursa Minor. At this tier the character is a champion of the country or even continent.

Character notable at this tier: Twilight Sparkle (pre-alicorn), Shining Armor.

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This is where we stop. Here is where things are not commonly acceptable. This is known as the SS-Tier., or the OP tier. Characters at this tier are beyond good, masters of many arts, and are super strong. This tiers will have no issue taking on A-Tiers and would give S-Tiers a run for their money. These characters practically have a lot of their flaws covered, almost no weakness. Some would have flaws, but their fight and magic potential more than make up for it. Magical capabilities are unrivaled, capable of spells, in which they are incredibly difficult to execute, with ease, and telekinesis to lift a house. May not be very strong, but perhaps fight with such skill and evasiveness they seem almost untouchable. AT this tier they easily become master of the continent in combat.

Notable characters: Trixie (Alicorn Amulet), Twilight Sparkle (Alicorn)

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NO, just NO! Here is where cheap is taken to the extreme. At this tier, its basically a cheat code in combat. Characters in this tier tend to be God-like, or Mary Sues. Characters with such potential in fighting they tend to always hit, sometimes 1-hit-KOs or they always seem to dodge all attacks without breaking a sweat. These characters also would be, in some cases, change the universe, change time and space, can break anything, become invincible, overpower everything, well... you get the point.

So NO PLEASE don't be this tier. Its cheap, its broken, its not even funny, and ruins everything.
However he hasn't included the SS's tiear thats beyond that but lower than BRO-Ken

SSS- This would be the strength that would possibly be around where the Ursa Majors are at

SSSS-This is where we go into the territory where you we go for gods like the princesses not much to say

SSSSS- this is where we go into the levels of gods reflecting that or DBZ that could wipe out the planet if they wanted to or if left on checked...or possibly even blow it up if taken further than that.

SSSSSS- This is where it goes to universal influence...Think Hyper God of Death Asriel, or Shin Megami Tenseis major antagonist YHVH but none on this roster goes beyond the former tier level. Beyond that is where Bro-ken lies.



Lunar Dusk

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Name: Lunar Dusk
Strength Level: A
Fury Form: S
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Cutie Mark: Crescent Moon with a black circle within it, in other words an eclipsed moon which is to reflect that of the incident from burning the school down and his realization during prison of his non-deserving title of archmage prodigy he would've had is somewhat intact but having no interest in retaining it and at this point if he were to apply for a profession, his record would be tainted.
Height: 2'7 ft 82.cm (this goes off the head canon that the average mare size is bout 3'0-3'5 while stallion 3'5-4'0)
Born: Ponyville
Morality Range: Gray-Black  Chaotic Evil(Age 13) Chaotic Neutral(After Prison Break)
Personality: greedy, sadistic(former), calm(former), narcissistic, hyper active, can be a bit childish at times
Element:Ice
Strength: Moves and attacks very fast although this would only count if he is up close to someone as he prefers to fight from a distance yet using punches and kicks in order to fire those projectiles.(like the benders in avatar the last airbender) When attacking upclose he would freeze his hooves solid or sometimes form ice claws to hit harder he repeated attacking speed would be 186,000 mph per punch or kick. If his first 3-5 warning shots are done he will take bait and prediction tactic when going on the offensive. IF he's going on the defensive he will attempt a stealth or counter tactic by either freezing the entire ground to sink under and eventually ambush the opponent and strike them from under or behind. In order to deal with fire based opponents some of his ice attacks involve the use of liquid nitrogen to prevent them from completely making him helpless. Due to his primary element and magic he focuses on, he will get stronger and even faster  in colder or wet areas. Just because he focuses on ice magic doesnt mean that he's only restricted to it, as a unicorn and archmage like his mother he still has access to other magic spells specifically elemental ones to prevent being to predictable. Like the beartrap like bracelets on his hooves, they can be opened and thrown at the opponent and when they are opened, it produces a cage like electrical current that will severely injure the pony if they made direct and full contact with it. Although for the most part he uses it as a fake out to punish whoever focuses on it due to its lack of range
Weakness: As he attacks fast and could hit hard and lay a smack down on even stronger foes if they are too complacent, he really isnt built to take a beating in return  more specifically physical ones despite being more of a physically active unicorn but not as much as earth ponies. Due to this he has to rely on evading attacks and ending his opponents as quick as possible. Like the opposite of cold or wet environments, he will gradually be at a disadvantage and be weakened when the temperature has risen and is in a heted environment and if he's hit by a fire attack it will drastically hurt him and possibly make him go down in 1-2 shots depending on its strength putting him into glass cannon range.
Limit Break: SpiritBomb-leaps into the air and charges up a giant sphere of frigid air in the shape of a crescent moon and hurls it towards the ground
Limit break 2: Freezing Dusk-transforms into a semi alicorn for limited period of time
Likes:  causing mischief, reading, studying about the world, trying to perfect his magic
Dislikes: Anyone that tries to stop him(former slightly as he is starting to know when things have been taken too far and setting standards for himself), younger foals(infant aged), being pursued by the police. Due to his experience he really doesn't tolerate being bullied or belittled in a way at the point of it being like his berserk button.
bio:  Lunar is a young pony who was a prodigy in performing magic, especially elemental magic, taking the title Archmage. Despite this he had a intense liking to Ice magic that he'd have it as a primary element. Over the course of years he sometimes would find a tablet that can give him access to a new spell to learn and eventually use whether it is weak or strong. Ever since his mother's death from sickness, he became an outlaw due to griefing other individuals around Canterlot, even resulting into brutally attacking anyone that show resistance. He is currently being hunted by a pony hired by the police, who was once his childhood friend and rival, Solar Flare. If too much stress goes to his head he undergoes a transformation losing his mind in the process.
Backstory: Lunar was born in an environment the was barely on the edge of the EverFree forest. At an early age he was a foal blessed with incredible magic, but despite this he would sometimes strike himself by mistake in the middle of playing with his magic outside. His mother Night Star, watching her child would giggle at the staggering foal while helping him back onto his feet. At age 8 his mother moved to Canterlot for the purpose of enrolling Lunar in a school. Little did Night Star know that Lunar would  be bullied for his appearance or just out of jealousy from the other students being overlooked by the authorities as obvious and more noticeable it got. Each day Lunar would burst through the door, with sadness in his eye then criying in his mothers arms who was comforting the young foal.
2 weeks after the first day Lunar met an older pyrokinectic pony by the name of Solar Flare. Seeing how evenly matched they were while in training they became friendly rivals supporting each other. With a 4 year period of bullying, the personality of Lunar began to grow sour while showing disgust over almost everyone in the school. At age 12 Night Star had fallen ill with Lunar devastated in the process. Night Star smiled at Lunar. "List...en....no matter what everyone else says...y..you are your own pony...and don't change y-yourself just for their own...am...a...ugh..." were her last words before she shut her eyes passing away. With his mother gone Lunar dropped out of school becoming a wanderer wearing his mother's rings to remember her by. For 3 months Lunar stormed inside the Everfree forest training nonstop vowing revenge on the students that loathed and shunned him from the impression of him being a bad guy with a hint of jealousy.
After 3 months of nonstop training, thirsty for vengeance Lunar snuck to the top of the school during nightfall while the students were asleep in their dorms. "You wanted a monster?..Well you've got a monster." was what the archmage said before he set the school on fire by striking it with lightning and fleeing in the process. "Hehe that actually felt....good". He started to enjoy the fact that he was causing misfortune to others for a change. Ever since the incident Lunar started causing chaos around Canterlot  for pleasure, making a bounty for himself. But the other side of his nature of being competetive and wanting to be the best like when he was still a prodigy if he even deserves to be called one rose so not only he'd grief just for the heck of it but also viewed it as a form of training provoking and taking any retaliation as a challenge especially to a brown zebra named Oil Slick. Seeing the archmage as a threat the guards moved up his bounty as one of the highest ranked outlaws. After 2 months of intense struggles Lunar was captured after he was severely wounded by a pony by the name of Shadow Dagger that ambushed him erasing all evidence of his involvement and tied up while near in a volcano crater weakening the helpless archmage. Being sentenced life in prison, Lunar was in isolation, even from other prisoners, he was, alone, with no one to see. While in this situation he began to ponder over what has happend. What was the point of maiming others, he's already carried out his vengeance on the students. What will he do with himself now that his mother is gone and no contact with his friend Solar.  He considered going for parol but that would be pointless. "Heh, No...you cant change someones personality, I'm already am too far to 360 it, but you can only change your actions, Im enjoying it too much. Still though I see no point in maiming them if they cant defend." Through the cell bars he see a tablet far away with unusual language. He didnt know what it did but with the patterns of it, from what he remembered while training in magic he's seen a pattern like that before signaling a spell of some sort. Taking the chance whether it could've been dangerous or no effect he repeatedly muttered the language on the far away tablet over and over to get it right. Soon after his hooves began to glow shooting a large sphere at the wall as if it was a mini spirit bomb. Obviously at this point he had gained a new power. This was his chance to escape, he ceased this opportunity before anyone noticed until it was too late that he was already long gone. Sometime within the 2 year time span he makes two friends that become close with him and form a trio with each other. Azure, nicknamed Azure Doom, a blue colt who with a broken horn and mechanical wings created for him, having a thing for engineering who was found in Everfree Forest injured by a mysterious "bat pony" and is taken care of as if he was a sibling. IronBlade a former member of the Royal Guard who had volunteerism joined with the duo after acknowledging the archmages skills in battle, whose a very formidable fighter who could take on an entire fleet of opponents almost at the point of holding his own with someone at Celestia's level of power. He makes sure to keep the two hooligans in check from doing anything too drastic and preventing Lunar from losing his resolve to continue on independently. Also with his mind set, a cutie mark in the shape of a crescent moon with a dark new moon within it appeared on his flank. No doubt that with this, and the combination of the thoughts of the comments , slander he'd taken would cause him to turn into what seemed to be a winged pony with stripes emulating an alicorn if he had underwent amounts of pressure and finally snapping. Lucky this has not happend.....yet, but such a transformation will be imminent when he'd have to engage his rival SolarFlare, who is out for his blood, which he doesn't know yet. Currently he wanders around Equestria doing his own thing minimizing his mischief to thievery while constantly stopping in the northeastern part of the Everfree Forest, his new home to rest. Little did he know that his mother really was alive and out there somewhere due to not dying but was put in a coma from an attempted assassination by Shadow Dagger who poisoned her drink.
Extra Info/Fun Fact: Despite wearing goggles, he is wearing red contact lenses underneath that reflect light giving the illusion of them glowing. He uses those for as an intimidation factor.

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Solar Flare


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Name: Solar Flare
Strength Level: A
Fury Form: S
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Cutie Mark: An Eclipsed Sun (unable to be seen due to suit)
Height: 3'2 97cm
Born: Canterlot
Morality Range: Grey-Gray Lawful Good(former) Lawful Nuetral(current)
Personality:  short tempered, high spirited, energetic
Element: Fire
Strength: Hits hard and is skilled in pyrokinetics, is stronger when it is hot and sunny
Weakness: water, lacks 100% self control and could go berserk if provoked
Likes:  helping others in need, training to perfect his magic, competing with others that match his strength or is better than him
Dislikes: being called hero, seeing others down, swimming, cold areas
Limit Break: Flame Tornado-focuses his energy to summon a fire tornado for limited time
Limit Break 2: Blazing Flare- Transforms into a semi alicorn for limited period of time
bio: Solar Flare is a pyrokinectic pony who is a childhood friend and rival of Lunar.Due to an incident where he almost burned other ponies and even himself by accident, he wears a fireproof suit and is constantly training nonstop trying to perfect his pyrokinesis so he can control his powers. At age 8 Solar was known for being a big helper who was earning respect from the staff members around the school. Determined to learn about pyrokinesis, each day he would go into the library reading about the ways of controlling fire without burning himself along with the support of his older cousin PavisFlare. At age 10, while in training, he meets a younger Lunar Dusk who caught his attention who seemed to be evenly matched with him. Ever since the encounter they would be rivals yet friends trying to support each other. However Little did Solar Flare know that the 4 year friendship would soon end when he spots Lunar striking the school with lightning, causing it catch on fire at night. After seeing the archmage escape prison and eluding capture, along with being tasked by the police forces Solar Flare hunts him down to bring him back dead or alive. He knows that he wouldn't do so without a fight which would give him the perfect opportunity to settle the dispute on whose the stronger fighter. Bearing the task of stopping a chaotic pony and saving lives, automatically being in the "white" and bearing the burden of those that would be harmed was something he chose. "True Justice for All" was the words he kept in mind. It wasn't as much easy helping others in their time of need, especially when he himself still has an the inability of controlling his powers and his short temper. In the middle of his travels he meets a bat like pony that he asks to alert of him of the archmage's whereabouts and a kid changeling whom forms a small bond with. Somewhere over the course of 3 years both his physical appearance and personality drastically change. At first he was a a hot head but caring enough to make sure that the those with malicious intent are kept in check to a remorseless pony who is stoic or almost as if he was stone having absolutely low chance of care in the world not being afraid to release his full power vs holding back completely clouding his judgement and thought of "justice". It could possibly due to the fact that the bittersweet successes and/or failures, and betrayals have caught up to him. 1 example could be a moment in Manehatten when 5 bandits  were robbing a beggar. Solar being caught in the crossfire decided to route them as in his mind, heart and instinct told him to. Within 8 seconds he let lose a wave  of fire engulfing the area in a sea of fire which eventually expanded. This was an outcome he had not anticipated happening, another result of him slipping up. Within the flames no one except Solar was in sight. The bandits....and most likely the beggar was turned into ashes at the hands of the "hero". In a combination of fear and guilt after other ponies approached the scene but avoiding him, Solar left Manehatten gaining an imfamous reputation that would lead to shunning, being fired from the police, unintentionally burning property of those that do take him in as the guilt and paranoia messed with his concentration which made it even worse in terms of control, leaving the poor pony with no one to turn to except his siblings and parents which he cant even contact. "I do what is right, I fight for others that can't help their selves in their moment of weakness, My mindset is pure but tainted by this fiery curse and misfortune that is ingrained into my life...Is there nothing a fool like me can do right...Is there no one I can protect in this world?" he thought as tears streamed down his face when he looked down. Soon after He clenched his hooves before rising up "In comparison to the monsters, perhaps I'm no different, but worse...maybe even worse that him? No...we're similar but our motives are vastly different." Within a few seconds a cutiemark started to appear on his flank in  2 years after this realization he hardened his heart to everyone, refusing to make friends or even acquaintances, along with changing the style of his fire suit, shades and even his mane which seemed to now have streaks of red running along the edges. This could possibly be a result from him finally having full control of his powers...or perhaps from getting even stronger than ever. Regardless, with every setback and distraction aside his reason for Lunar's demise was personal and instead of trying to save everyone, he'd have to reduce the amount of casualties than there needs to be.
Extra Info/Fun Fact: His favorite food is stir fry. As stoic as he is he's really ticklish and tries hard to avert that.
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Night Star
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Name: Night Star
Strength Level: S 1/2
Fury Form: SSS
Age: 38 (21 in rps)
Gender: female
Cutie Mark: Blue Star
Height: 4'0 120cm
Born: Cloudsdale
Morality range: White-Gray
Personality:  level headed, perky, caring, somewhat devious
Element: Wind
Strength: Is skilled in magic and is best at countering other magic attacks except certain spells but can take a beating
Weakness: gets tired easily
Limit break: Elementum-Fires a laser beam thats combined with Fire, Water, Air, Electricity and Earth towards the foe
Limit Break 2: Pollux- Engulfs herself in a sphere of fire to enable her to flyfreely and ram the foe (similar to sonic or pikachus final smash)
Likes:  helping others, reading,drawing
Dislikes:  seeing others sad, arrogance, hot weather
bio:  Night Star is a level headed unicorn who is Lunar Dusk's mother.  At an early age Night Star was raised in Cloudsdale with a group full of mage unicorns.  Curious and determined to go further, she would research in a library to find each and every one of elemental spells to count. After several years of nonstop training, at age 22 her incredible talents were getting recognized by the group of unicorns and even other residents.  Hearing about this, Night Star tried to perfect the highest levels of spells until later on, on her 23th birthday the leader of the group of mage unicorns summoned her to promote her to archmage. Grateful for the respect she was getting, she was wondering whether she was going to attract some jealousy. 3 months later, she began to give birth to a colt who would yet end up as the infamous Lunar Dusk. Seeing how she wanted to live a normal life with the newborn colt, Night said her goodbyes then moved to ponyville just by the edge of the Everfree Forest. After 15 years of raising Lunar, Night Star ended up falling ill and passed away smiling with a devastated Lunar watching her.
Extra Info/Fun Fact: Has a phobia of snakes due to a moment she had with them during her training.
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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OCs
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=11752.

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Extreme action 9999 chain hit ultimate army killer super fun time! Ya!

I suggest you join the Fire Emblem RP in the making if you plan on doing so.

LunarDusk

2014 Jul 16, 04:27:29 #2 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 18:18:11 by LunarDusk
2 more OC added I will add the rest of them 2-3 at a times

Azure Doom
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Name: Azure Doom(nickname)
Strength Level: C
Fury Form/Limit Break:B
Gender:Male
Age: 8
Born: Ponyville
Height(foal): 2'5
Height(Adult): 3'2
Morality Range: Grey-Gray
Personallity: Bratty, Bashful, Prideful
Element: Electricity
Strength: Relies on gadgets including a gauntlet he has on his right leg which uses electrical attacks, or just its brute strength, and can be a surprisingly good flyer due to his mechanical wings
Weakness: despite using electrical attacks he cant take it in return due to being weak to it and phobia of thunderstorms, is crippled from using magic due to his broken horn
Limit Break: OverDrive-Pushes his guantlet to its limit encasing himself in a barrier of strong electricity and travels freely along the air or ground to ram the foe (think of pikachu or sonics final smash)
Likes: messing around with Lunar and IronBlade, when things go his way, messing with the CMC, watching Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon messing with the CMC
Dislikes: Storms, when things dont go his way, Diamond Tiara and SilverSpoon
Bio: Azure Doom is young colt born as a resident in Ponyville and student at the Ponyville Schoolhouse who seems to get in trouble a lot. He is best known for having a broken horn due to an accident at the Everfree forest from attacked. A sympathetic Lunar stared at the helpless colt laying on the ground. While helping him recover he constructs mechanical wings to make up for his broken horn. Azure was told that his his horn would grow back when he reaches adulthood which bummed him out. He currently remains in the school while outside Lunar takes care of him and is like a sibling.
Extra Info/Fun Fact: Out of all the foals 12 and under he's the tallest
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Akuma

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Name: Akuma
Strength Level: D
Fury Form:SSSS
gender:Male
Age:7
Born:?
Height: 2'0
Personality: silent, self reserved, curious
Morality Range: white-grey
Element: Air
Limit Break: Razor Wind- Stirs up the winds to build into a fierce gale to blow at the foe
Likes: traveling, reading, being at disadvantages or difficult situations
dislikes: being routed, Chrysalis, anyone that's ignorant or immature, being belittled for being too young to travel
Bio: Akuma is a nomadic changeling that used to be in the changeling empire. His location of birth and parents are unknown and wants to have no relation to Chrysalis or anyone in the empire due to being disgusted with Chrysalis ruthlessness. Sometimes whenever he's stops to stay in places the other ponies would questions him for being a nomad for one so young. Despite this he ignores it, currently Canterlot is where he would stop by the most as if it was a home to him.
Fun Fact: Is the shortest and weakest fighter out of the group of OCs, but has the strongest fury form.
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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OCs
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Shadow Mare

Are they all alicorns?

LunarDusk

"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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OCs
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Luminescence

Oh! A group of them! Well, I'll give you my personal and bias report on each.

Lunar Dusk
     Goodness gracious! So, he is a super power unicorn with issues because of constant bullying. And then, despite his dying mothers last words (cliche) he became the biggest bully by trying to destroy his school and causing rampant destruction. Because REASONS! Um, I can't really tell much other than the fact that he is using the excuse of past problems to be vandal. Also, the reasons for the bullying "appearance and spite" seem rather vague. What is wrong with his appearance that caused this? Did he not go to anyone for the bullying? Prison Escape?!
He seems to be rather vague in his excuses, and future goals. For a future archmage, that seems, well, rather odd.

Solar Flare
     Well, he seems to be striving forward to improve his magic, because he almost hurt ponies before. Okay, that's a good goal. And then the rest of his life only seems to appear around Lunar Dusk.
. . .
Is this an actually pony used for RP on its own or in conjunction with Lunar Dusk? If it is the second, okay, but if not, it seems rather bland. Sorry if I'm being mean, but It looks that way.

Night Star
     Okay! This one is really nice! It tells some good non-pertinent back story to Night Star. I really like the fact she specializes in elemental magic, but that is just me.  I really can't say a whole lot about this one, other than how was she, a unicorn, born in Cloudsdale. Oh, and the majorly glazed over detail of the father doesn't exist.

Azure Doom
     It has Doom in the name, so that is a question in itself. This mysterious pony seems to come out of thin air in Ponyville and lives in the shuffled away recesses of their mind. Which is to say, who is his real parents, and how do they feel about Lunar, essentially stealing him, despite Lunar being an outlaw. And he was attacked by a flying plot device. That could be handled, um, differently. But he was built wings by a magic evil pony, so it's okay. Soooo, yeah.
I'm sorry I don't even know what to do with that.

Akuma
     Soooo, a runaway changeling pony in Canterlot. Been there. Done that. Bought the T-Shirt. Rather run of the mill in that aspect, so I can't say a whole lot. Some background please?

OH! And we don't know the colors of their manes or coats, except Lunar. Or what their cutiemarks are, which is kind of important.
I believe the shape of happiness resembles glass. Even though, we don't usually notice it, it's still definitely there, we merely need to change our point of view slightly, and that glass will sparkle whenever it reflects the light. I doubt that anything else can argue its own existence so perfectly

LunarDusk

2015 Sep 09, 00:54:35 #6 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 18:16:56 by LunarDusk
Ah, havent done this is a while even though I had this duo...along with my other 6 OCs for like 2 years straight.....but since im using them in rps now I might as well give them a bio.
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Name: Scarred Shadow (nicknamed Scar because of his left eye)
Strength Level: S
Fury Form: S
Age:19
Species: Pegasus
Born: Ponyville
Cutie Mark: Claw Swipe
Morality Range: Grey-Black
Personality: Hyper, Mentally unstable, normally acts in the manner of a foal.
Height: 3'6
Element:  Wind
Strength:  Has a lot of endurance and moves in erratic patterns to attack especially with his dangerous horn accessories that he can detach and hook them to his rings like claws.
Weakness: Is a bit of an airhead in terms of intelligence, Electricity
Limit Break: A Thousand Slashes-leaps and rapidly swings his horn at the foe 1000 times in 2 seconds
Likes:  doing his own thing, having company with him, jumpscaring/pranking others, Solar Flare(slightly)
Dislikes: Being misunderstood, his parents being mentioned(at the point of crying instantly), changelings
Bio: In others eyes Scar is a young stallion who wanders aimlessly around any place that he comes across doing whatever on a whim. Due to growing up without being raised properly and being in  a wild environment for too long his mind hasn't matured like most ponies in Equestria and acts exactly like how a foal would act. Despite being born in Ponyville Scar called his home the Everfree forest since he was left there in a safe place at age 4 before his parents vanished into the mist.  Ever since then he was forced to survive off of plants and adapt to the environment costing him his sanity if it wasn't for isolation and being convinced that his parents ditched him to rot in such a dangerous place. From age 14-16 he managed to fully know the Everfree inside and out along with what goes on at what time. However his curiosity led him to roam around Ponyville day or night sometimes thieving along with running into a younger changeling along the way. 2 years later he meets a silver haired stallion who seems to form a bond with him. He asked the pyrokenetic stallion about a pony who sometimes stop by the center of the Everfree from time to time. Picking his interest Solar asked him to bring the archmage to him the next time he comes across him. Agreeing without any form of pondering Scar only continued his usual routine. However he rose with excitement when he saw a small silhouette of a blue unicorn walking along the forest road. Using the traditional stealth most animals use for their prey he managed to follow the young colt until he stopped in his tracks. With a sudden gust of wind all that was heard was a loud smack and scream from the blue colt as his horn was snapped in half rendering him unconscious. A hint of anxiety and guilt caused Scar to panic as he realized it wasn't the right pony he was meant to get. This led him to flee Ponyville erasing all trace of anything that just happened besides the unconscious colt. Currently he lives in Canterlot as a minor rogue trying to take every opportunity he can for any form of education such as sneaking into certain school spots along with becoming close friends with a unicorn who tutors him.
Fun Fact: Others tend to mistake him for a bat pony despite being a pegasus. But due to the fact that his cousin is a bat pony he technically can qaulify as one despite being unaware of it.
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Name: Silver Earth
Strength Level: D
Fury Form: B
Age: 14
Species: Unicorn
Born: Neighjing
Cutie Mark: Scroll
Height:2'6
Morality Range:  White-Grey
Personality: Calm, Intelligent, can be a bit naïve
Element: Earth
Strength:  Can use nature based magic very fluently and has a lot of range.
Weakness:  Bruises easily, Ice and Fire
Limit Break: Frenzy Plant- Summons large tree vines from the ground to strike the foe repeatedly from all angles and poisoning them
Limit Break 2: Plant Armor- Summons and covers the user with thick vines with thorns and the strongest types of plants to become an earthlike mech buffing his abilities.
Like: Studying and reading
Dislikes: being teased on how short he is, cold areas
Bio: Silver is an outsider from Equestria who was born in a farther region called Neighjing, the equivalent of an area in China.  Wanting to study more about spells that aren't known in his country, his parents sent him down to a school in Canterlot which helped significantly. For four years he constantly stayed in the library at every opportunity he got, even bringing some of those books back to his dorm to practice. Eventually, while he was studying he saw a bat like pony with a scar on his eye in his window causing him to freak out at first until Scar spoke to him about the number of book he has.  Out of desperation the rogue asked him to teach him as he was stunned on how intelligent he was.  This shocked Silver as he's never taught before and he didn't know if he could trust this pony. However all he could do was teach him the basics for now. Day after Day Scar would come by at night for a lesson by the younger pony. Since then they slowly formed a bond between each other at the point of becoming close friends.
However, after a few months have passed, the school was completely set aflame due the rage of a purple unicorn and too was evacuating with the students and staff. This forced him and the students to be relocated to Ponyville's school until the repairs where done and there were no signs of Scar anywhere. Although short lived, Silver ran into a grey colored unicorn who would become acquainted with each other during the move in. But, on their way to ponyville to get settled, the chaingling were laying siege to Canterlot getting the duo caught in the crossfire leading to them getting surrounded by a hoard of changelings with a taller one in the center of one. No doubt this one stood out in the crowd and the one in charge.
"I am Beelzebub, not even bystanders whether stallion, mare, or foal will be excempt from the wrath of the changeling." he said before charged up an electrical attack and shot it towards the grey unicorn. As quick as a flash without a 2nd thought, Silver yanked the paniced grey unicorn back and shielded him taking the full blow of the attack.
"[glow=indigo,2,300]Siiiiiiilveeeeeeeeeeeeer!!![/glow]" the unicorn cried
He let out a scream as before he slumped to the ground with vision fading and the changeling general walking past him paying no attention to the grey unicorn who had frozen with the combination of fear and sadness.
When he had opened his eyes he was somewhere that definately was not where he was earlier. It seemed to be of a stone structure like a castle On a path he saw a pillar of light prompting him to approach it. On his way he heard a voice call out to him getting his attention.
"Can you hear me, kid?"
He nodded.
"I see, its about time someone with some sense showed up."
A figure started to appear in front of him in the form of a pale colored stallion with a black bob styled mane with red streaks.
"[glow=maroon,2,300]i am Lucifer, well not like the lucifer you think of in the books hehe but named after him. I sometimes pop in here along with another alicorn ocassionally to check up on the souls when a war is going on. Im sorry to tell you but, what you're in is the road that leads to the underworld. In the short span of your life you were just a normal student who was just in the wrong place and your friend will be the same as well soon. but together, that can be changed.[/glow]"
Questioned were starting to flood in Silvers mind.
"[glow=maroon,2,300]You see, the changeling war that goes on is only the beginning, that taller changeling that attacked you has the intend of betraying Chrysalis and overthrowing her to take the thrown himself to turn equestria into a parking lot along with its inhabitants and making changelings the only survivors. Also, there's a conspiracy with a navy colored unicorn in relations to an army in a continent in the east who have already taken half of the world. Both with the intent of attacking Equestria, but it matters not..I myself have been having plans of taking the changeling hive and weeding them out to set them straight and establishing a base there myself. Im sure you'd want to get him back yes? It wont be easy and chances are he wont be going peacefully. Be my right hand pony, and I will bring you back to life.[/glow]"
It wasnt right away but the unicorn accepted the offer and his friend could have possibly been injured by now and he wasn't ready to have the burden on his shoulder.
"[glow=maroon,2,300]Good choice kid. You better make haste You're friends in danger.[/glow]"
In response Lucifer's hoof shined and Silver felt power coursing through himself with the scent of nature making his vision turn white. In the real world his scratch marks and fatal wounds were filled with a green color and healed. As he awakon he found himself in the same spot with no sight of the changelings nor Beelzebub. But, upon closer inspection there was a group of changelings near the courtyard  surrounding an unconcious body of the grey unicorn whos horn was comepletely broken. But before one of the changelings could funish them off he stepped into the crowd and swung his hoof down causing thick vines from his hoof to knock away the changeling getting the others attention and surround him. With Virtuos behind him he looked as his hooves to notice this new power and as they leap at him at once his horn glowed and a surge of magic was expelled blasting them off in various directions. To a safe place, he carried the grey unicorn and left him to recover before going somewhere as the war was ending. Since them, he serve Lucifer as his partner in conquest to eventually take on the changeling hive to stop Beelzebub.
Fun Fact: Fighting wise he is the weakest out of the OC's, but has a catch. His attacks strength depends on the opponents scale on the alignment. When fighting others who are evil his attacks are at their most lethal (even at or beyond Alicorn levels if the opponent is that sick in the head like pinkamena for example) when they contact causing a severe after pain like poison
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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LunarDusk

2016 Jan 18, 16:42:02 #7 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 18:15:40 by LunarDusk
Ill give backstories for these two laters, seeing how their purpose  is for rps for the moment.


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Name: IronBlade
Strength Level: SS
Fury Form: SSS
Cutie Mark: Short Sword
Age: 18
Gender: Stallion
Height: 6'1
Morality Range: White-Grey
Element: Fire/Steel
Strength: Relies on the brute strength of his horn as if it was a spear rather than magic, has outstanding stamina as if he was an earth pony
Weakness: Earth and Water, can be complacent, has a hard time with airborn opponents or ones too far away.
LimitBreak: Eruption- jumps into the air and slams his horn into the ground starting an earthquake to open up the ground causing fire to erupt from those fissures
Limit Break 2- Almighty Push- I dont even need to explain this do I...
Limit Break 3: Final Slash- summons a large magic sword in the air and slash it forward causing several other magic swords smaller to appear and rain down on the opponent finishing with a last explosion.
Personality: Judgmental, Honorable, Strict, and mostly level headed
bio: The 3rd member in Lunar's gang that acts as their tank or body guard aka the heavy. He is a level headed Stallion that used to be a mercenary within the Canterlot walls. The reason why he is with the two unicorns remains unknown. It could be a possibility that he's doing it to keep an eye on the two.
BackStory: TBA
Fun Fact: Is the strongest out of all of the OC's in base form so strong that he single handedly routed 1000 changlings in a section of Equestria that they had to make sure they avoided him and lay siege to Canterlot and that Tirek and Discord had to blind side him to take his magic during their conquest.
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Zealous Wave

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Name: Zealous Wave
Strength Level(past):C
Strength Level(Curent):S 1/2
Fury Form:SSS
Age: 36 (20-24 in rps)
Race: EarthPony
Gender: Male
Born: Israel
Height: 4'0
Morality Range: Grey-Black
Strength: Relies on magic that involves hexing or necromancy from his necklace, extremly strategic as he's an experienced tactician, if in fights he prefers to drag them out to see the opponents move style before placing him under his trap to crush them, is well prepared
Weakness: Lacks Physical Training despite being an Earth Pony, electricity
Limit Break:  Haunting Scald- conjures balls of boiling hot water to form in a giant emblem in the shape of his cutie mark and send it flying towards the foe with the force of a tsunami
Limit Break 2: Fury Form: Turns into a pure alicorn for limited time surrounding himself in a ghostly aura and floating balls in the shape of his cutie mark amplifying his power up to 11 rivaling that of tirek and the princesses.
Personallity: Quiet, can be polite with others, responsible and acts and in a mystery way in manner of a shady snake with a cold deep voice (think of sephiroths advent children VA)
Element: Water
Bio and BackStory: Zealous Wave is a former tacticatian with a fascination with a dark type of magic called Hexes. How and why he had developed this fetish is a mystery but he started around age 7-10 and uses a necklace that he claimed to have "borrowed" at age 5 but in really stole it. Originally born in Israel he lived his first 15 years as an orphan that shortly relocated into Manehatten right after he turned 3. What he did during his foal to teen years in his life of poverty was taking from others as methods to eat with the persona as bad guy which would be no different as he's just another one of the scoundrels running around in Manehatten. However he wasn't going to be learning as much in the area he resided in and eventually started moving to other places along Equestria with the desire to learn more spells and hexes from 15-18. Meanwhile a navy colored mage was advancing her magic when he stopped by inside Cloudsdale and noticed there were a group of mages training. Piquing his curiousity he decided to stay with them for 2 years. But wasn't that well liked, especially Night Star who called him out on his ruthlessness in using innocent pony's or animals as a test subject for whatever spell he learns. One was successful in which was used on a mare who would eventually give birth to a red unicorn. On the third year the last straw was when he decided to test a curse on a foal that could possibly be permanent which caused a fight between him and Night ending in a stalemate. Eventually Zeal left Cloudsdale figuring that he would end up getting the attention of the government. Right after this  in a 14 year span he somehow joined a military in the Saddle Arabian region working his way up to chief strategist. Others including his acquantences feared him as they never knew what trick the stallion had up his sleeve. Still he constantly was on the move over other continents but during the last of those 7 years he was back in equestria posing as a Canterlot military soldier and one of the Staff members in the Canterlot School acting as as if he was a 00 agent to tell the Saddle Arabian faction of what goes on. Still, when they were about to plan a full out conquest, Zeal on the phone advised them not to get involved just yet due to the fact that at the same time, Chrysalis was laying siege on Canterlot Castle and it would be a bad idea if they were to get involved just yet which would eventually lead the two to face them either now or later. 1 month later he was trotting along the Everfree forest as means to finding better test subjects for his hexes which he found 2 parents that he thought who were creatures due to it being too dark. This outcome left him wounding the two parents simultaneously and putting a scar on a younger pony that got a glimpse of him a few hours after his parents disappeared into the mist. He looked at the scared foal smirking but couldn't help but feel sorry for him. "My apologies, but I cant take you out here..." he said before grabbing hold of the foal who was kicking at him and used a hex to strengthen him at least to survive in the forest and eventually be served by the bat like pony as an adult when he sees him again. He then back tracked the way he came leaving everything that just happend as history. Eventually in a few months he took a visit to Neighpon when he met an injured shinobi by the name of Shadow Dagger that he eventually befriends before taking a 2nd return to Equestria. As he was working in Canterlot he noticed what was going on about a purple unicorn  along with his rivalry with a red one as well who were getting bullied. At first this didn't seem to interest him but when when Solar mentioning his mother, that got his attention.  Out of revenge for the side effect he had after the fight with her leaving him to be a blank flank and her getting pregnant from the side effects of his hex, he decided to make a small oz of poison and gave it to Shadow Dagger. As the unicorn was sleeping, Dagger infiltrated the house and her room eventually pouring the poison in her ear and leaving before it was dawn. The next day she was feeling quite ill causing the 5 hours to lead to her demise. The satisfied stallion who was strolling through the halls flinched when he heard lightning strike the place starting a fire which lead to him leaving quickly as the crowd of panicking student evacuated. Dagger who was wandering around the outside of the school informed, while Solar spoke to him that Lunar set the school on fire causing him to smirk.
"The archmage has seemed to have snapped...this could be dangerous but I'd like to see how far this can go on before the police takes action giving my country the opening it needs..."
During those 2 years when the kid was imprisoned and eventually escaping, he heard rumors of a navy unicorn with a medium blue mane somewhere in Equestria. Zeal eventually started to question himself whether or not it was what he thought it was but Dagger showed him a photo of the mare. There was no mistaking it, NightStar was not dead but was put in a 2 1/2 year coma from the poison and she on instinct was trying to find her son while keeping a low profile. Zeal showed no signs of disappointment nor anger at this outcome but instead was satisfied that he at least got something out of this. The archmage being a vandal, the red vagabond hunting him while trying to fight him, a teen pony with a scar putting others on the edge, the strange things happening each season in Equestria and him and Dagger monitoring Canterlot from the inside with the ability to transport information to Saddle Arabia. The cards were all in place. Currently he plays the waiting game for when Arabia makes its move and to watch how far the rivalry between Lunar and Solar will go on.
Fun Fact: During time in hexes he somehow managed to get leprosy, but somehow managed to remove it before he showed up in Cloudsdale
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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LunarDusk

2016 Feb 27, 12:38:49 #8 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 19:51:24 by LunarDusk
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Name: ShadowDagger
Strength Level: A 1/2
Age:27
Gender:Male
Cutie Mark: Dagger
Height:3'8
Morality Range: Grey-Gray
Element: Wind
Strength:Is an expert in stealth as all ninjas should be, moves and attacks faster than Lunar and Scar, is able to get away whenever in close danger
Weakness: Has weak defense and lacks defensive techniques and strategies outside of using Counter
Limit Break: Lethality- Jumps into the shadows and does a surprise critical blow to the opponent with his horn to either KO or Severely wound them(think of the lethality skill from Fire Emblem
Personality: Self Reserved but faithful, almost never speaks
Bio: An assassin originally born on a continent from the east. To others in Equestria what they think of him as an enigma who obviously doesnt seem to originally reside there. Currently he is a body guard for ZealousWave who was  in Neighpon at the moment and saved him when he was wounded by a dark blue unicorn that used his flaw against him despite being at a disadvantage. He serves him without question and tries to find a way to get even better to not repeat the same mistake that happened those 2 years ago
BackStory: Not here for G rated reasons but plays a part in IronBlade, Lunar, and Oil Slick's tales
Fun Fact: Even though it may not seem like it, he is actualy blind which is why he wears shades, eventually this led him to have hyper senses due to having to relie on feel, smell, and hearing for 20 years.
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Name:FrigidMoon
Strength Level: S
Fury Form:SS
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Alicorn
Height: 3'4
Personality: Quiet, a bit submissive, has a calm demeanor
Element: Ice
Morality Range: Grey-Gray
Strength: Is an expert in elemental magic and very acrobatic for close quarters
Weakness: Is frail and cant take physical hits well
Bio: A mysterious pony that travels from place to place but seems to avoid Canterlot, running into SolarFlare,IronBlade, and Azure for some reason. Some wonder about him as he hasnt showed up until 4 years after Lunar was confirmed dead from an unfortunate battle with a stallion with a scar. It could be a possibility that this pony is really Lunar who has either faked his death or miraculously survived and has taken a different identity to live a normal life as a traveler to explore new places.

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Name:LightningStrike
Strength Level: B
Fury Form: A
Gender:Female
Age:17
CutieMark: Fist surrounded by electricity
Height: 3'2 1/2
Personallity: Jerk and curt like her younger brother but with a heart of gold
Morarilty: White-Grey
Element: Electricity
Strength:Relies's on close quarters combat adapting a shaolan styled stance, is a powerhouse so she can hit  hard and take it in return.
Weakness: Is a bit of an airhead, her recklessness can backfire on her, moves too slow in terms of evading
LimitBreak: Combo- Electrifies her hooves and body then starts punching and kicking the opponnent repeatedly then finishes with a slam enough to shake the ground.
Fun Fact: Is the heaviest out of the OCs excluding Pavis, Iron because he's a giant and Silver because they're a machine. Physically the 2nd Strongest right below Iron and even odds with Oil
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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LunarDusk

2016 Apr 24, 00:52:07 #9 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 18:11:43 by LunarDusk
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Name: SilverSpark
Strength Level: SS
Fury Form/Transformation:SS1/2
Age: Unknown
Gender: Genderless
Species: Mech
Cutiemark: Blank
Morality Range: Grey-Gray
Element: Ice/Electricity
Strength: Scans the opponents movements and their data and could copy their moves, can be an unstoppable mean machine when in battle, switches between modes such defense, shielding and offense
Weakness: lacks reflexes and becomes confused easily if tricked
Personality:Polite and caring but in battle pulls pulls no punches in attacking
LimitBreak:Final Strike-Opens up the cover on its chest and fires a gigantic laser which would have enough force to shatter 75% of a castle
LimitBreak 2: Transform-Transforms into a shape of anything stronger thats chosen


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LunarDusk

2016 Apr 29, 00:39:09 #10 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 18:09:41 by LunarDusk
Virtuous Ire

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Name: Virtuous Ire
Strength Level:A
Fury Form: SS
Gender: Male
Race: Unicorn
Age:18
Element: Dark
Morality Range: Grey-Gray
Personality: Emotionally fragile, scared easily, low spirited, rebellious, can be a bit  to those he likes, suffers post tramatic stress disorder
Limit Break: Struggle- The broken horn starts to glow with a dark aura that draws out dark hands to grab the foe and have a 2nd set of them punch them then finishing with a dark blast
bio: Ire is an unicorn that's seen better days. As a foal he attended a Canterlot school keeping a steady pace outside of the fact that his parents hardly paid any attention to him. During an experiment at age 10 with testing out a certain spell with electricity, a red unicorn simultaneous was trying one as well except fire themed. Due to a sudden event it caused the red unicorn to accidentally use too much power into the attack causing Ire to be the only pony to get hit full force with the flames giving the sobbing foal blisters that would eventually become permanent burn marks. Let alone the sympathetic Solar Flare who he didnt hold a grudge against despite the blisters, ever since then he would be subjected to constant torment and even rare abuse or being the butt monkey/ guinea pig of elemental experiments from Zealous Wave who was part of the staff at the time. Despite seeking advice from other authorities, the storm hardly subsided which would eventually lead to him noticing a purple archmage who also was going in a rebellious phase which he would then strike the school with lightning. After a few months, during the time when he was wandering about, Queen Chrysalis was laying siege on Canterlot at the time. Ire himself got caught into the crossfire leading him to get mauled by stray changelings after mocking him in a way that would pour salt into the wounds he already had from before causing his horn to break and rendering him unconscious for the time. Completely mind broken with no one to turn to nor his parent, this led Ire into a traumatized state that would last from age 15-17 causing him to loath almost everyone especially the changelings. Eventually he meets a navy colored unicorn that currently take care of him whose name is NightStar which at least seemed to lift his spirits up and give him hope to carry on. Still, he vows revenge on Chrysalis and the changelings at the point of he wouldn't be able to handle them even being mentioned due to his hatred of them.
Fun Fact: He has a sweet tooth for anything dessert related and tends to collect plushes and carry at least one with him for stress relief purposes.

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PavisFlare


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Name:PavisFlare
Strength Level: D
Fury Form: B
Gender: Female
Race:Pegasus
Age:21
Element Fire:
Personality:Caring,Intelligente but can be an airhead
Morality Range: White-Gray
Strength: has a lot of range
Weakness: She cant fly for due long due to being quite chubby with not that much stamina
Limit Break: Meteor: Shoots fire in the air making fireballs rain down onto the foe
Fun Fact: Is etremely fond of drinking cider at the point of it being dangerous.
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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OCs
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=11752.

LunarDusk

2016 Jun 05, 20:57:05 #11 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 19:37:26 by LunarDusk
Radiant Blitz

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Name: Radiant Blitz
Strength Level: C
Fury Form: A
Gender:Male
Race:unicorn
Age:17
Element: Light/Dark
Morality Range: White-Gray
Personality: Highly Confident, tends to act as if a pony from the ShakeSpearian works.
Strength: Is a skilled fencer and magician being a force to be reckoned with
Weakness: Can be easily distracted, has low morale when seeing foes that look stronger, has bad accuracy at times
Limit Break: Astra- Extends the light on his horn acting like an imaginary sword and does a 20 hit combo on the foe healing 50% of damage Radiant has taken.
Bio: TBA
Fun Fact: Is fond of anime
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Name:Oil Slick
Strength Level: A
Fury Form: SS
Gender: Male
Age:20
Race:Zebra
Personality: Short Tempered, Arrogant, yet has a heart of gold
Morality Range: White-Gray
Element:Earth/Fire
Strength: A fast powerhouse, uses his modified kendo stick to create shockwaves and attacks, if getting serious he unsheaths it revealing it to be similar to a light sabor.
Weakness: is a bit stupid and is normally the first one to charge ahead without a plan with a leeroy jenkins parse
Limit Break: Ultimate Musou Art: Unsheaths his Kendo Stick extending it to about 4 ft and swings it around whether on the ground or air then finishes with a slam on the ground creating a large eruption that either sends the foe back with severe damage or hits them with the incoming rocks covered in fire.
Limit Break 2: Summons 2 more unsheathed kendo sticks holding one on each hoof and one in his mouth and swings wildly while engulfed in flame then attaches them together to due one last swing
Bio: Oil Slick one of the Canterlot school ponies and the unofficial leader of the group of vegabonds consisting Lightning, Radiant, Virtuous, and PavisFlare as the strongest one in the group(yet in reality Lightning is the real leader). He tends to fight in a different style reminiscent of the eastern world with a kendo stick with a saber underneath. Where he acquired it is a mystery as he claims to have "Just found it somewhere on the ground". He was born inside the walls of Canterlot and for 17 years enrolled in its school where he met a yellow unicorn and navy colored earth pony. Despite being in such an expensive school he didn't really take it seriously due to focusing more on the sports teams as he was considered one of the best at it due to his natural breed leading him to be cocky and arrogant. This level of hubris caused quite a cause and effect situation as he was the last of the ponies who have bullied the purple archmage before he was pushed to the brink of insanity along with an introverted grey unicorn with a broken horn. It wasn't until after the school had burned down causing its students to transfer that he had become friends with the grey unicorn and eventually the orange chubby pegasus who he had made fun of and seemed to be almost like a different person as he had been more serious about his education. Perhaps this could be due to the fact that somewhere before the school fire, he took notice of a tall grey pony by the name IronBlade that was considered the best of the best in the school, in terms of fighting and even in the top 10 as a valdictorian before he graduated. He considered him as a role model and wanted to become just as strong as him. Also, the second could have been due to being turned down when he asked to apply for the Canterlot royal guard who Iron had been accepted into. The reason they had refused was due to the fact of the Zebra's short temper that was far too dangerous to put up with and this seemed to put him in a state of dilemma until at some point the grey stallion himself had approached and spoke to him. From what he recalled, the advice given was what he tends to recite even in dire times.
"True strength is not just brute force alone but also, endurance and mentality." Since then, he decided to turn things around before it was too late and seize every opportunity he could and made it in the top 10 where he barely ranked 10th place and became a better team captain where even after he graduates, he sets a handicap on himself to make every physical match he has with ponies less 1 sided such as fighting with his kendo stick sheathed. With one loose end left untied, he wants to make a formal apology to the purple archmage who at the time has been ranked an outlaw who had ran into only twice but only the 2nd time when he was captured he was able to make it. With an ungoing chanegling war, he saw this as a test and rounded up 3 of his former classmates and fought along the remote sections of Canterlot. However his last member Virtuous was nowhere to be found at the time but little did he know that he was already there but not quite in one peace until afterwards. Along the way meeting up with a blue colt named Azure, they take hold of a carriage belonging to a show mare Trixie Lulamoon as means of transportation.  Currently, him and his 4 gang members travel around doing as they please while Oil himself sneaks some training with Iron while ocassionally bringing Radiant and Lightning along too.
Fun Fact: Despite his appearance he's really a vegetarian. As much as it seems, he's not really as stupid but over confident that it blinds his knowledge of common sense.
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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2016 Oct 30, 02:55:49 #12 Last Edit: 2017 Mar 23, 18:07:00 by LunarDusk
Hue before this will be a height chart of my first batch of OC's before my 2nd batch will be pasted.

This chart goes off the head canon that the average mare size is around 3'0-3'5ft and for stallions 3'5-4'0



Note some may either be not standing properly or sitting *cough* Azure...
Or some may be in their original or revamped appearances.

Ponies from left to right
Azure Doom, LunarDusk,SolarFlare,NightStar,ZealousWave,IronBlade(tallest one) ScarredShadow, SilverEarth, LightningStrike, PavisFlare, OilSlick, VirtuousIre, RadiantBlitz, Akuma, ShadowDagger, SilverSpark, FrigidMoon
From Lightest to Heaviest
Akuma, SilverEarth, AzureDoom, LunarDusk, VirtuousIre, FrigidMoon, SolarFlare, RadiantBlitz, Shadow Dagger,  NightStar, ZealousWave, ScarredShadow, PavisFlare, OilSlick, LightningStrike, IronBlade, SilverSpark.
From weakest to strongest C-SS Tier Measurement Barring Fury Forms or any transformation
SilverEarth, Akuma, PavisFlare, RadiantBlitz, AzureDoom, LightningStrike, OilSlick, VirtuousIre, ShadowDagger, LunarDusk, SolarFlare, ScarredShadow, NightStar, FrigidMoon, ZealousWave, SilverSpark, IronBlade
From White to Black in terms of morality or alignment. Like for the most part from those that are nice to those that are nice but on the chaotic side of the alignment like they are good but their blackest of greyest trait would be just them as complete jerks(Oil, Azure, Lightning) or the later but have commited one of the biggest sins and just put it behind them as they moved on from it (Lunar and Solar). Then some that are capable of doing things that would be pure evil and are just aware of it and enjoy it(Zeal) or if not knowing it(Scar). Or they're just doing the atrocities as their job (Dagger).
[glow=black,2,300]NightStar, SilverEarth, RadiantBlitz, PavisFlare, Akuma, FrigidMoon, IronBlade, SolarFlare,[/glow] [glow=grey,2,300]SilverSpark, AzureDoom, LightningStrike, OilSlick, VirtuousIre,[/glow]  [glow=black,2,300]LunarDusk, ShadowDagger, ZealousWave ScarredShadow
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Credit to Devious Bunny for the chart base.
"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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LunarDusk

Now for the 2nd batch

[glow=navy,2,300]Steel Speer[/glow]


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Name: Steel Spear
Strength Level: A
Fury Form Strength:SS
Age:22
Gender: Male
Race: Unicorn
Height: 4'1
Description: Steel Speer is a stallion of the eastern continent in Saddle Arabia. During Ghalib's revolt against the previous ruler and his conquests he led the vanguard unit and was dubbed as one of his best units on the front line. However, while more than half of Asia was unified he was beginning to have his doubt in the conqueror after he was starting to get a bit too focused in power the more land he gained. Not only that but even his relationship with his retainers was starting to go sour causing him to eventually defect in secret to eventually defeat him. At some point he runs into NightStar in Equestria and becomes her spouse after 2 years.
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Ghalib Faruq

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Name: Ghalib Faruq
Strength Level: SSS
Fury Form Strength:SSSSS
Age:Mid 50's
Race: Black Anatolian Goat
Born: Israel
Height: 5'10 (barely a few inches shorter than Celestia)
Element-Mainly Darkness but it varies
Alignment: Grey-Black
Limit Break:
Limit Break 2: Devil Trigger: Undergoes a transformation to release his full power
Strenghts/Abilites: High Resilience, has access to the powers and attacks of what a deity would have such as high speed, the capability to take a huge beating, and huge power enough to turn the continents upside down but is still only a living being and is not stupid enough to do such a thing because of its consequences. If those weren't involved he has 4 weapons on his rear legs in his arsenal reflecting his profession and is very strong in terms of brute strength to break a building. Due to the genes of his native breed he has high tolerance to diseases and climate changes making him able to adapt and fight through being weakened. Just as his 2nd in command he also has a Fury form from which he grows a 3rd horn and wings boosting his abilities if met with an oppenent who either wont go down or if he's struggling.
Weakness: As powerful as he is he tends there's a time for when he can keep it up before he has to regain his energy since he's still incomplete which is why he tends to hold back and use his powers wisely at the right time.
Bio: Current ruler of a Saddle Arabia and feared Conqueror but a just ruler, standing 152.4 cm tall. Others say that on the battlefield he was a heartless monster who would tear up the field with his enemies in it while anywhere else he's  a very civil but stern person to speak with. His early days revolved around him settling conflict from within Iraq as a general then worked his way up the ranks as the neighboring regions were in full control leading to Saddle Arabia being completely unified eventually taking the title as Emperor. Unsatisfied with this with the desire to make history for himself, he decided to expand his territories outside the borders towards the east for resources due to famine....and eventually the western continent which houses Equestria which had a more stronger government than it seems and has a history that grabbed his attention. Over the course of his conquest he ended up getting involved with forbidden artifacts in certain areas which eventually buffed him up like a physical god so old age wouldn't cripple him during his time. Despite his strength being on par with their rulers he intended for a more strategic approach to avoid casualties and an all out war. In his mind, he'd rather have anyone other than the ruler and his subordinates disabled instead of having its area completely ravaged making it an unsuitable environment to live in making the campaign meaningless. So he'd send his navy colored chief strategist into Canterlot to moniter and send information such as the abnormalities that go on(changeling war,nightmaremoon,tirek, etc) while playing the waiting game so the Arabians can one day make their move and possibly come across the elements of harmony.
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"[glow=blue,2,300]Hue Lunar Dusk archmage of the EverFree at your service.[/glow]"
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