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Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2014 Aug 24, 18:43:20Quotewhy yu no Japanese trailer?!
http://www.gamefaqs.com/ps3/824720-digimon-all-star-rumble/data

Quote from: Reginald27 on 2014 Aug 24, 11:07:10Quote
I am very bad with personalities. Mostly because my own personality is a mess. ^^''
Well, as you can imagine, she looked quite unusual. There are no likes of her in Equestria and she was often picked on by bullies. And whenever she visited Canterlot with her brother, she was looked down upon by nobles. She developed a very fiery character at a time, often getting into fights with bullies. Her scales defended her from rocks and her fire struck fear into kids of nearby settlements. It was getting worse until one incident where she ran away from home and was attacked by a pack of timber wolves in the Everfree. With no restraint she used her magic, accidently setting this part of forest aflame. Larger pack of timber wolves was scared and ran in direction of the farm. Luckly, her brother was there and had defended the farm. And Scale who arrived after that helped chase off the rest of the wolves. From that day onward she tried her best to show more restraint. She still more of a hothead, but applies a lot of effort to restrain herself. She also avoids cities unless there is a need to visit them. Like making a delivery if her parents can't do it. She also visits Canterlot from time to time. Thanks to her brother, Royal Guards act kindly towards her. Nobles still give her glares, but she ignores them.
Hm...kinda like that.
Now with that explanation makes it better to understand how her emotions developed to how they are now.
Here is a tip
A great way for your character to grab the interests of others is "relate-ability." some times you'll find characters that are either really positive, something they just love doing, they have something stressful in their life, or they are legitimately going through a trauma of some sort.
Now im not saying make every character have a grim dark back story no no no, some people find characters "inspiring" when you present a challenge (good or bad) to the character, and he/she handles it in their own way because of their reasoning. if you make a character that people can understand on a personal level they will want to know more.
Your on the right track for that as long as your not presenting a problem that your character simply just "gets over" get in depth, what is her thought process before, AND after when she still walks through canterlot and she still gets looks.
1.dose she not care but deep deep down their is still something making her sad? (that would explain why she is shy around strangers)
2. or dose she truly not care (because the opinions of your self is more important than the opinion from others)
3. could she have meet some one there, in spite of all the rejection and hate, that befriends her.
4. or could her shyness keep her away from everyone, and we see both sides of when she is around everyone she dose know, and when she is on her own
their is a boundless number of possibilities the only challenge is how you word the situations, you cant say "she ignores them" or "she likes them" get in depth and give us her reason why so we may understand her side\
(DANG THATS A LOT OF TYPING HOPE IT HELPS)
Quote from: StormDancer01 on 2014 Aug 24, 08:35:34
Wow. Choosing a theme song is the hardest decision I've ever had to make. I'll probably change it a few million times, too.
BUT. for now, I'll go with this. (assuming I can figure out how to post a video.)
Post Merge
MEEEEEEEEH.
Try again?
Post Merge
Whatever. I'll figure it out someday. But until then... I'ma just post a normal link.
Maybe this one'll work.
Post Merge
SUCCESS.
![Eeyup. :]](https://forum.legendsofequestria.com/Smileys/default/ajawyea.png)
Quote from: Reginald27 on 2014 Aug 23, 17:00:12Quote from: -ReiMar- on 2014 Aug 23, 15:52:18
Well, ya already looked through my character, but still I'd like to hear any thoughts on what I might improve) ^^
With everything about your character,
you made a well developed character, it has its own original style, abilities, and history that you get into great detail about. I can grasp your character very well with who she is; however the only thing i find "dry" about your character is her personality, reading along i could not quite grasp her personality except that she is the quiet type (why is she a quiet type to strangers? is their a reason she isn't more outgoing?) and that she can easily get exited or quick to anger. the 2 traits seam to conflict with me without deeper detail of why her personality is that way.
