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((Que time jump now))

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((Ok so Ssumpgg said I can do the time jump. So...que time jump!!))

The sun is now rising.
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((That's right. I forgot Dream was now in the dream realm.))


The colt, now Veridian Wing, writes a few notes. He opens the small wooden box and pulls out a green necklace and a remote of sorts with a single button. He quietly walks over to each of Blob's, Dream's, and Pumpkin's tents leaving a note at each entrance held down by a small rock. He then walks over to Alasse's tent. He quietly walks in so as not to disturb her and sits down next to her. He places the note for her with the remote holding it down and the green necklace with it. He very softly places a hoof on her shoulder saying a silent goodbye.

Veridian Wing walks back out of Alasse's tent and looks around at the various ponies sleeping in their tents or keeping watch. He has a slight sad smile on his face. [glow=green,2,300]Guess it's time to go... I wish I didn't have to. They were all so nice to me and I will miss them. [/glow] He looks up and sees a small but bright light in the sky that only he can see. [glow=green,2,300]Do I have to go?... yes...I've never felt so at peace. I was always so alone.[/glow] He looks at the ponies again and smiles. [glow=green,2,300]I'm not alone anymore. [/glow] Thank you everypony...

Veridian Wing flies up into the sky and disappears into the light. To anypony else it would seem he simply faded away and disappeared completely.

[glow=green,2,300]...You opened my heart and showed me what love was...Thank you...[/glow]


Notes:

Blob,

Thank you for the stuffed animal! I've never actually had a toy of my own before! The fact that it's the one that you had growing up just makes it that much more special. If I had something to give you in return I would but this is all I have. I will keep it with me always.  ^-^

Veridian Wing



Dear Pumpkin,

Thank you for the food. I really appreciate it. If that's what it's like to have siblings I wish I could have had some. It would have been nice to have a friend that I would always have. By the way, I really like your hat. It looks good on you. It seemed fun to play with. :) Don't worry about not being up to par or scaring people away. You're so nice and honest I don't think anyone could hate you. :) You're a good friend.

Veridian Wing



Dear Dream,

Dream, Thank you for being so kind. Thank you for singing to me and holding me and helping me feel comfortable. If it weren't for that I'd probably still be hiding in that trash heap having doubts not even bothering to try to come out and face you all but your songs gave me a little courage to face everypony. Sure I was hoping you were all just leave after awhile but I started to learn that all of your intentions were good. I've never had someone hold me like that. It was new but it was really nice. I hope that someday you will find your family. Actually I'm sure that one day you will. Don't ever give up hope. I had given up hope and it turned me bitter and cold to the world. I hid myself away just so I didn't have to face the fact that I was so alone. Doing that though made me lose all chance of ever finding anyone that did care. So don't ever ever ever stop looking for you family or give up hope of finding them. You will some day. Thanks for everything Dream. By the way you have a pretty voice. :)

Veridian Wing

PS Thanks for the name too! I like it. I will from this point on be Veridian Wing. :D



Dear Alasse,

What can I say... you felt like the mother that I never had...I was cold, alone and deeply deeply hurt. You wanted nothing but to help me. You wanted nothing but to try to heal that hurt. I used to sit and watch everyone be so happy and wondered why they were so happy. How could they be so happy? I would see the kind things that other did for them and wished that I could have that too but I only ever got cold uncaring people. So finally I just ran away. I had no where to go so I came here. I had accepted that I would be alone forever. But then you came along. I was terrified but you sad there quietly talking to me. You did push yourself at me. You just let me know that you were there.
That moment that you walked away to talk to that stallion with the mechanical wings I was afraid. I was so used to everyone just leaving me behind. They'd walk away telling me they'd be right back and never come back... But then you came back. You made sure someone was there for me and then you came back. And on top of that you were just as happy to see me as before if not happier. I wish I had had a mother like you...I may have then had a happier and likely longer life. Thank you for showing me what love really was and that there was somepony that could love.

Love,
Veridian Wing

PS the button will help you get out of here. Yeah it seems like a dead end but it's not. I just happened to find it buried in the trash pile one day.


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((Well that was rather dramatic and kinda sad... Funny how that plays out when you let the character go on it's own.))
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He smiles at Blob and trots off. He heads back to where the trash pile is and pauses next to Dream. Hey Dream? The name...Viridian Wing. I like it. I think I will call myself that. Thank you! [glow=green,2,300]Viridian Wing...:) [/glow] he walks into the trash heap and comes back out with a box some paper and a penil. He walks over to the fire and begins writing on the paper.

((for the next part I need ponies to either be asleep or not pay him any mind. After that last thing we can time jump to morning.))
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(( >A< I'm really sorry guys seriously.... my home life tends to be really crazy and stressful and our internet is limited to one room right now, to which everyone crams into at the same time on a daily basis.  >:O I will try to get this wrapped here so we can move forward without you guys having to wait on crazy me.))


The colt looks back at Harmony. Oh nothing really just wanted to say hi.  ^-^ He sits there for a while. Greatfully accepts the toy from Blob. You'd really give me something so special to you? Thank you...but why? The colt looks at it and hugs it gently. Kind of talking to himself. This is all so new to me... I've never had even one pony truly be nice to me let alone so many... I see now though that there is good in this world... He sits there for a while enjoying the company.


Fairy, after looking at the stars for a while stretches, yawns and curls up in the opening of her tent. She watches the fire for a while and slowly drifts off to sleep.
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((Yes emotional chaos. It was chaos. Although I've have more chaotic emotional chaos. That can turn in a kind of scary chaos....at least for other people ovO ))
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The colt, at first surprised by Dream picking him up begins to relax as she sings. He smiles at her. When Blob comes over and introduces himself the colt just looks at him for a moment, then smiles. Hi Blob! He then reaches out and bats playfully at Pumpkin's hat. He then grabs the pear that was handed to him and holds it with both hooves looking at it. He sniffs it and just smiles. He does eat it though as he's already eaten his fill for the evening.  He lays there in Dreams arms quite content listening to her sing and the conversations of the other ponies. Upon hearing about their siblings he gets a thoughtful look on his face. I've never had any siblings... at least not that I know of. What's it like? Asking any and all who are around.


Fairy after seeing that Blob is alright she walks over to an empty tent meant for her and then sits between it and the fire looking up at the stars. She looks over at the colt and sees that he is happy and smiles. I'm glad he's warmed up to us. She walks over to the pile and pulls out a square piece of paper and folds it and makes and origami dragon. ((this is one specific to my own make and is based off of the crane)) She feeds it a little life energy. Just enough so it could move on its oven and fly. It flies over to the colt and flutters a couple of hooves above his face for a bit and then lands on his nose.


The colt surprised at the paper dragon he looks at it, looking almost crosseyed. He looks over in the direction of where it flew from and sees the one that had first tried to come into his shelter. He smiles and laughs as the little dragon falls off his nose. He hops out of Dreams arms and walks over to her. Looking a little shy.I'm sorry I kicked you earlier. I was was afraid....


It's ok little one. :) I can understand. I shouldn't have just barged in when obviously you were afraid. So I kinda deserved it since I should have known better  X3 She reaches out and touches hooves with him. ((Kinda like a brohoof but calmer)) He walks around a little bit trying to meet the other ponies. ((By the way he's now a full bright green color almost like Blob.)) He walks up to Harmony and sits down next to him not looking at him. After a moment he looks at him smiling. Hi!  ^-^



((Sorry I took so long to post guys. Some crazy stuff happened and I've been dealing with the emotional chaos from it. I'm alright now so I should be posting more often. :) By the way I'm waiting for most ponies to fall asleep, in their tents or busy with other things before finishing this test. Thanks!))
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((sorry guys. Things got crazy. I'm posting with my phone so no colors.))

Colt: He looks up and sees Dream fall from the sky and everything happen. He slowly gets up and walks over to her and nuzzles her to get her attention. "What's your name?... You have a pretty voice."


Fairy: upon entering the dreamrealm she's surprized by the huge trash. "Bolb? Are you in hear?" Suddenly a Giant Blob appears and upon closer inspection she realizes it's made of many smaller Blobs. "HOLY TIMBERWOLVES!!! What in all Equestria...?!" She stands there stunned as she watches a battle commence and the real Blobking win. Blod tells her that she needs to leave so he can wake up. "oh sorry Blob" she quickly hops out of the portal.
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((Sorry guys I was dealing with life the last couple of days.))
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((Either way is fine. I think I prefer Fairy. ;) My user name was just quickly thought up and doesn't really fit.))
After calming down a bit he looks up and notices that the pink Unicorn was gone. Where'd she go? He nudged Alasse. Hey, where'd the pink Unicorn go? The one with the pretty voice?...What's her name anyways? She was nice.


((Fairy is waiting for a response from Blob to know what she sees in the dream realm or what's going on there so she can know where to go.))
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((Oops sorry Pumpkin... I had missed adding his response to that in there. There were a lot of things to respond to... sorry))
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The colt picked up a couple of rocks close to the pile and walks over to the fire wood. He starts hitting the rocks together creating sparks and the balled up paper lights. He fans it a little with his wings to get it to catch the wood, steps back a bit and sits down. He sits there staring into the fire a bit when Alasse walks over with a bag of fruit. He looks at it in surprise. There's so many different kinds.... I can have any of it...? The while he's sifting through the fruit trying to choose which to start with she drapes a blanket over him. It's been so long since I've had fresh fruit I don't know what to....huh? He looks up at her in surprise not sure what to think or say. Stunned he just looks at her as she tells him she'll be right back and walks away. He blinks a couple of times. He just stares down at the fruit unsure. He starts to get a green tinge to his shadowy coloring. [glow=green,2,300]I don't understand.... what's going on..? Why are they all being so nice to me? Why am I feeling like this? WHAT am I feeling? I'M SO CONFUSED!![/glow] Overwhelmed with emotion he pulls the blanket and begins to tear up a little. Remembering that there are others around he quickly wipes away the tears.

After a few minutes a pink mare sits down next to him and puts an arm around him. She asks him his name. He looks up at her surprised for a moment not sure how to react to it. My....name? He looks down and thinks for a moment and then looks back up at her. I don't have one... I was never given a name.... He listens to what she has to say about the hints to her past and her song. You have a pretty voice. He looks back at the fire unsure of what to do. Nervous about letting himself get close to ponies but at the same not wanting to pull away from Dream. So he just stares at the fire and listens.


Fairy hears Blobs sleep talking. She walks over to investigate the portal. Hello in there!![glow=teal,2,300]I guess he needs help.[/glow] She jumps into the portal and begins looking around.

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The colt had started to drowse as the song, the warmth and the closeness lulled him. He started at Alasse's sudden return and her laying down in front of him. He stares at her a few seconds in surprise and then suddenly... He leaps at her holding on to her as tight as he could and starts sobbing. His color quickly turning a brighter green. I don't want to be alone anymore!!! No more!! No more!!...Please don't ever leave me alone again!!! He continues sobbing latched onto her neck basically kneeling on the ground next to her.
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((Well maybe you said what you said for a different reason but it sure fit.))
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Upon hearing Alasse coming over his eyes snap open. He hurriedly wipes away the tears and plasters a moody look back on his face. Now watching her as she comes over and lays down in front of him. My parents were like me....and they were the ones disliked me the most.

He notices the oat bars offered to him. He snatches them and scarfs one of them down. [glow=green,2,300]Why am I being so rude? They haven't done anything wrong.[/glow] he looks up at Alasse and sees her smiling at him. He then looks back down at the ground. Hhhhuuuuhh... he looks back up at her. Sorry...I'm not usually this rude. I guess I'm just not used to other ponies being around anymore. He looks back down and begins to gently paw at the dirt. Still listening to Dreams song...

After a few minutes he chances a glance at Alasse out of the corner of his eye. [glow=green,2,300]She's being so nice to me even after I've been so rude....I wish I could just trust her...But what if she just ends up leaving me too?! Growing cold just like the others...?  :c ....I just don't want to be alone anymore....but I don't to be hurt either....[/glow]

It's beginning to get dark and the mist is starting to set back it. He looks up at the sky realizing this. It gets kind of cold here at night... He gets up and walks over to a tree that had fallen and been cut up with broken saw next to it. He rolls a couple of the logs over and grabs a couple of pieces of balled up paper from the trash heap and puts them next to the logs in the middle of the clearing in front of the heap. He then proceeds to look around for a couple of rocks that he uses to light fires.

((Nice Shade you knew what was going on in his mind before I said anything.  :D ))
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His ears perk up at the sound of the song. His breathing becomes deeper and more visible with the surprise of the sense of the music but he then slowly closes his eyes and begins drift. Tears slowly begin to leak from his eyes..

((Ok I really need to go to bed I will continue this tomorrow. Night Dream! ^_^))
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((I am going to bed now. Night all!))
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His doubt and mistrust setting in again but the fear is beginning to subside a little. Pshaw friends.... Who needs them. All they do is make you realize just how purely alone you really are. This little colt does not understand the concept of friendship. All the experience that he's had is just people who pity him and are kind to him out of such.

His head resting on his front hooves now looking at them. *sigh...* There's no way I'm going to get you guys to leave me alone is there?....huuuuuhhhhh fine. He gets up, shakes off all the dirt on his coat and then walks out aaaaaannnnd walks right past them all. He goes out in front of the trash heap and sits down.

All sense of curiosity gone from his face but now a look of brooding takes over. Do you guys got any food? [glow=green,2,300]Why did they have to come and interrupt my life and my silence. I was doing just fine. At least I didn't have to worry about anypony else and whether or not they were going to pity me or treat me like a piece of trash. [/glow] He sees a can close to his foot and kicks it Ha! piece of trash indeed. [glow=green,2,300]Well, it seems they were right.... [/glow] He lays down on the ground head resting on his front hooves just looking at the ground.

The fog seems to have cleared from the clearing a while ago and the sun is starting to set.
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((Sorry guys there was a rather long "detour" on the way home))

Fairy lays down further back behind the group seeing as she had already upset the poor colt once. She quietly laughs a bit seeing the drama unfold in front of her between Alasse and Harmony or rather Rebellious Harmony now. She hears Dream's singing and a thought crosses her mind. Hey Dream! for your next song try singing something calm and soothing. Something sweet and comforting.


The colt (he's probably approximately what we would consider to be about 12 years old) cowers in one of the corners of his shelter with his hooves over his head waiting for everything to calm down. Things start to get quiet and he starts to relax a bit. [glow=green,2,300]Why are they all being nice to me...? [/glow] He cautiously creeps towards the opening just shy of the light just so he could get a peek at everyone outside. There is just enough light that you can see his shadowy face and that he's crouched down really low to the ground. He looks directly at Alasse....you've met thousands of different kinds of ponies and are friends with them...?

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After a few seconds his eyes begin to dart around to the other ponies and fear and doubt begin to set back in. He scoots back a little basically laying on the ground with his hooves under him so he can spring at a moments notice. However curiosity still has it's hold.
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Fairy sees Harmony's sudden transformation. She runs over. WOW! Harmony That's amazing!!! She glomps him.
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The young colt just lies there quietly. Thinking a bit. *sigh...* [glow=green,2,300]How can she understand? They at least gave her a chance to live. I was just left out on the street! No one care! Everyone was repulsed by me![/glow] He begins to cry silently. [glow=green,2,300]I'm sick of being so alone! I don't want to be alone anymore... :'([/glow] Suddenly another outburst of anger. WHY DID YOU HAVE TO COME HERE?! Before you came I could just be alone and ignore the fact that everyone hated me. Why?! WHY?! ... Why...?
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A slight whine comes from within the shadows of the heap. Almost like a subdued sob and a sigh. Said more to self than to Pumpkin They don't care. They never care....who could ever love a pony like me. I'm a freak. Psoh. Bat wings. Even my parents left me to die... Now actually responding to Pumpkin Sigh... You probably wouldn't consider it "hurting" me... you're probably just like the rest...