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Messages - Renatan

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To rhyme well is not a thing of mine
for time after time, I will miss a line
I do my best to speak the words
but they always end up quite absurd
I want to get better
So maybe I shall send a letter
To Zecora the zebra for help
So I won't sound like such a whelp!

(.... I'm sorry you had to sit through that  lol )
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Oh, mweor  :] How I love you.
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In game:

Click Clack thought it over. It was their duty as of the moment to defend the village, but.... Maybe joining the orcs could give them a chance to defeat them all and free all the other villagers. She wasn't sure. Iussu sat by her side, panting happily.
A few moments passed before Click Clack spoke. "You." she said, looking up at the orc steadily.
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Banned for having a plan that I don't know about!
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Real world:

"Ah, worst attack ever. I completely missed with that command!" Click Clack groaned.

In game:

" Iussu! Attack again! " she cried, her body shaking with the excitement of combat. As before, her dog lunged, but the attack was clumsy and didn't do much damage.

Orc Grunt lost 1 HP!

(OOC: Due to being lvl. 1, I'm purposely making Click Clack and Iussu weak and mostly untrained. The more they level, they better they'll get  ;) Just felt I should mention that in case anyone was wondering why I was making them miss the first time and have a weak second attack .)
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Real world:
"Alright! Let's do this! " Click Clack exclaimed, grinning widely.

In Game:

The dog faced the orcs, tail raised and teeth barred, waiting for Click Clack's command. " Iussu! Take one down! "she cried, pointing her hoof at one of the invaders. Without hesitation the dog lunged, trying to land a bite.
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Real world:

" Hey, Rain! Glad you were able to make it. Had me worried for a moment! " Click Clack said, waving to him with a smile before turning back to the game.

In game:

Click Clack dashed through the streets, a dog following after. Glancing around the area, she looked at the signs. Finding the one she was after, she opened the door slowly, peeking inside. She saw who she was looking for, as well as another mare who must have arrived before her. Stepping inside she walked towards the Shepard, dipping her head in greeting. " I assume you are the one who posted, yes? " she asked, her dog sitting quietly beside her.
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Click Clack trotted into the store happily. " I'm heeeerrrreeee! " she called out before going upstairs. " Hello, my fellow players! " she said with a wink. She looked at the game board and pieces. "Cute." she said before continuing " So, who all are we missing? Anypony? "
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Hurp a derp, I had a link  :P
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Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Nov 05, 22:23:01
Well, first off, I'd like to get all the logical flaws out of the way.

I was wondering if there was a particularly good reason her parents named her Dark Grave. Unless both of them were also practitioners of dark magic, which didn't seem to be the case from what I read, an Equestrian family naming their daughter Dark Grave sounds a bit out of place. It sounds like a case of naming a pony after her special talent, which she didn't have when she was born, thus the flaw.

The maddened pony you mentioned should have a bit of foreshadowing or at least further explanation. He appeared out of nowhere for the sheer purpose of getting killed and then was never mentioned since then. I ask for an explanation because maddened ponies who demand all your belongings and then attack you because you have none I can't see existing, even as a plot device. Furthermore... not too sure a single blow from a broken tree branch would do a pony in. Of course, these all are just details; the whole point of this is just for Dark to see magic being used to kill another pony. I also happen to disagree with murder in Equestria, but that's just preference.

Now... necromancy... hmm. I'm not going to touch that subject, nor will I ask how and from where she was able to learn such arts for the purpose of being able to use magic without a horn.


Thanks! X3 As it turns out, though, most of this is covered in the uncensored version o3o "Skipping all the gorier details". That was my way of saying "more stuff happens but I have to not include it or LOE mods are going to chew me out angrily". The mad pony was actually meant to die from.... well, I can't say it here either  >.< I had to be very careful with my characters Dark Grave, Loath Flash, and Crooked Path so as not to break rules. They have censored bios, so some things aren't included (such as exactly how Dark Grave came to existence. Her parents actually did use dark magic.... I have to leave it at that  :()
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Guys, we really need to neigh off the puns!
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Music / Re: What are you listening to?
2013 Nov 08, 18:03:13
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Quote from: Yellowpikmin476 on 2013 Nov 08, 17:12:03
Drew it myself.

10/10
Just looks awesome.


I didn't draw mine  :s I know. For shame, I used a template. I may update it.
Soon.
Someday.
Maybe.


.... Never.
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7/10

Not a huge fan of the art stye  :C
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The Retirement Home / Re: Corrupt a wish
2013 Nov 07, 17:07:50
Quote from: lemongrass on 2013 Nov 07, 11:43:52
Granted but it is 1/10!


Wish?  >.<
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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Personality:
Short Description:

In-game character:
Class (warrior, mage, archer, etc):
Weapon (no firearms):
Appearance:
Short Ability Description:


(( It's a sign-up form for a RP in the LOE RP forums lol ))
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8/10. Could use a proper sky backdrop  ;)
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Name: Click Clack
Age: 14
Gender: mare
Race: earth pony
Personality: upbeat, competitive, playful, friendly, always up to a game
Short Description: light yellow coat, peachy colored mane and tail, long hair, bright green eyes, has 3 marbles as her cutie mark.

In-game character:
Class: beast master ("Beast" here refers to common animals. No creatures like Hydras or whatever.)
Weapon: She has a knife, but doesn't use it most of the time.
Appearance: She is about the same as in real life. She is just a bit more battered with a few scars and she wears a tiger tooth necklace.  She calls it a good luck charm. She also ties her mane back into a ponytail.
Short Ability Description: She is able to communicate with animals very well, thus allowing her to command them in battle. It is rare for an animal to ignore or disobey her, but it will sometimes happen. She keeps at least one animal near her at all times; commonly an animal such as a dog, ram, or large cat. She doesn't keep something like a bear nearby as it is harder to move around and harder to work well with. (The bigger the animal is the harder it is to use)
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The Retirement Home / Re: Corrupt a wish
2013 Nov 06, 19:13:02
Granted, but it confuses everybody and now no one will ever know what time it really is!
I wish I was in Equestria as an alicorn even more powerful than Celestia!  B)
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Would you be able to do my OC Dark Grave?  ^-^ I'm just worried she could be improved and I don't even see it. I won't take anything offensively, so don't hold back. I mean, from what I've seen you're more descriptive then "your OC sucks, and you suck  >:/"

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Name: Dark Grave
Age: 16
Gender: mare
Race: pegasus
Cutie Mark: a pony skull
Family: none known
Talent: dark magic/necromancy
Likes: solitude, nature, any weather, night
Dislikes: lots of noise, most fillies/colts, bright lights, Celestia or anyone who could interfere with her talent
Enemies: None officially addressed
Friends: Although she never says it, she considers her apprentice, Loath Flash, her friend
Fears: Death, some white magic, powerful ponies, dogs
Bio: Dark Grave was born somewhere uncharted to most ponies, and grew up being taught by her parents. She had no siblings, so she had lots of attention. Her mother was always willing to help her, meanwhile her father worked to keep them alive by gathering food and protecting them from any wild animals, such as Timberwolves. One thing about them, though, was that her father was actually a unicorn; her mother was a Pegasus. Her father had taken her into the woods one day to teach her to gather food that was safe to eat, and to show her what not to eat. While they were there a seemingly mad pony confronted them, demanding them to hand over whatever they had. Of course, this was nothing, for they hadn't even gathered anything yet. This angered the pony, causing him to attack. Dark's father acted quickly, doing the first thing he though of: fight back.
Using his magic he tore a tree limb off, swinging it at the pony.
A sharp crack echoed around the area as the pony slumped over, blood trickling from his head. Dark watched as her father chucked the body away with levitation. He quickly hustled her back to the cottage and told her to stay there for the rest of the day with her mother. But Dark realized something from that experience: she would do anything to use magic. The limits to it were endless. She thought of Celestia and Luna, how they could move the sun and moon! Amazing! She was a Pegasus, but she would still try to learn. In her own way, of course.
Skipping the more grim details, Dark learned magic through using old black magic, long forgotten. She changed things about them so that they could be done with blood, flesh, and bone. No horn needed! To this day she is still practicing, raising her powers. She avoids society as much as possible so as to avoid questions or suspicion. After all, she takes lone, sometimes lost foals and kills them, or cuts off just what she needs and lets them go so long as they don't tell anyone about her.
If they don't bleed to death before they reach anyone first, that is.
(How she met Loath Flash will be described in Loath's bio)
Born in: Unknown
Lives in: A forest some ways away from Ponyville
Theme: none yet
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