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Original Characters / Re: My OC, White Prism
2013 Jan 23, 21:28:02
Thanks, im glad you like it 
And also thanks for proofread it, as I appointed before, english is my 3rd lenguage (and yet im one of the few people on spain what can say he is good in....) and I try my best when come to writte properly 
And also thanks for proofread it, as I appointed before, english is my 3rd lenguage (and yet im one of the few people on spain what can say he is good in....) and I try my best when come to writte properly
1785
Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 21:17:53
"My name is White Prism, im a new student here in the Academy, and Mister Ryo told me to pay a visit to the Medical Bay when had chance. They invited me for learn how to control my powers, learn more, as well maybe have something to do with my mastery of alchemy... A pleasure Mister....."
White looked at Kai whitout say anything more, since he didnt know his name.
"By the way Mister, if you add some processed ashes to that flask what you have in the burner, the quality will raise"
White looked at Kai whitout say anything more, since he didnt know his name.
"By the way Mister, if you add some processed ashes to that flask what you have in the burner, the quality will raise"
1786
Original Characters / Re: My OC, White Prism
2013 Jan 23, 21:13:18
Well, there, I maked some changes. Hope you like them
1787
Original Characters / Re: My OC, White Prism
2013 Jan 23, 21:05:46Quote from: Morning Glory on 2013 Jan 23, 20:56:48
[spoiler]
Thanks for the critice
No one teached him, but the experience of live and survival, necessity is a great teacher. About the Orphaned thing, he remember nothing but him since the start of his memory, that's why I tought about making it an orphan and not a loner. And yes, the circles is both an application of alchemy and magic together for make new magic or powers, the raw magic is good, but a mean of focusing or amplification as alchemic circles and runes is never bad in my opinion, they can even help into a faster cast form. About the power part, it was meant as experience and the fact is afraid of the magic inside him, since he dont want to harm anypony. But ill follow the tips and take off the part appointed.
1788
Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 20:55:39
Walking at his own peace, White enjoied the scenery outside the Academy windows, as kept walking to the Medical Bay.
"Mmmhh...I wonder how much time ill be here...Anyways..isnt like if I had anything to do" he mumbled to himself.
Finally, after more walking, he arrived to the Medical bay door.
"Mmmhh...I smell some herb compound, I wonder what kinda of tonic or medicine is being prepared"
After build up a bit of courage, he knocked the door.
"Excuse. I been appointed to visit the Medical Bay by Mister Ryo...I dont have the clue of why, but here im"
"Mmmhh...I wonder how much time ill be here...Anyways..isnt like if I had anything to do" he mumbled to himself.
Finally, after more walking, he arrived to the Medical bay door.
"Mmmhh...I smell some herb compound, I wonder what kinda of tonic or medicine is being prepared"
After build up a bit of courage, he knocked the door.
"Excuse. I been appointed to visit the Medical Bay by Mister Ryo...I dont have the clue of why, but here im"
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Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 20:40:32
((Yep,shadow and dark magic teacher, and im sure I will ))
Arriving to the dorms and entering in his own, White started to unpack the chalk, the flaskes and the ingredients, setting an alchemic circle of ice and another one of heat, moving over them the delicated ingredients.
"Good, they didnt rooted...For now....im not sure about what I can do...Maybe my 1st step as a student is check the Medical Bay...I dont know how that will help me to control my inner power but I have nothing better to do..."
Saying that, he stored another chalk in a small pocket bag with the map and the dorm key, then walk out heading to the Medical Bay.
))Arriving to the dorms and entering in his own, White started to unpack the chalk, the flaskes and the ingredients, setting an alchemic circle of ice and another one of heat, moving over them the delicated ingredients.
"Good, they didnt rooted...For now....im not sure about what I can do...Maybe my 1st step as a student is check the Medical Bay...I dont know how that will help me to control my inner power but I have nothing better to do..."
Saying that, he stored another chalk in a small pocket bag with the map and the dorm key, then walk out heading to the Medical Bay.
1794
Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 20:23:34
White giggled in his insides at the situation what just happened.
"Farewell, till the next time we meet Mister Ryo, ill be sure to pay a visit to the Medic bay when I have time"
Bowing sightly, he started walking to the dorms, a bit worried about some ingredients what need very low temperatures or high ones to dont root or be useless.
"Farewell, till the next time we meet Mister Ryo, ill be sure to pay a visit to the Medic bay when I have time"
Bowing sightly, he started walking to the dorms, a bit worried about some ingredients what need very low temperatures or high ones to dont root or be useless.
1795
Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 20:17:04
((Dont think so, ask Magus, I think he will suggest or put that class in somehow ))
))
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Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 20:09:10
White stored the key and the map in his backpack as bowed gently to the mare.
((Dont worry))
"No, that's all what I needed to know, thank you for your time Mistress and have a nice day"
Walking back to the doors, he closed them slowly. Waving to Ryo.
"Im done here Mister Ryo, thanks for your guidance, whitout you, I bet I will be still wandering the halls, I think ill go to my dorm and unpack the flasks, the ingredients what need a special treatment and some of my materials, it was a pleasure to meet you"
Bowing again gently, he waited the reply.
((Dont worry
))"No, that's all what I needed to know, thank you for your time Mistress and have a nice day"
Walking back to the doors, he closed them slowly. Waving to Ryo.
"Im done here Mister Ryo, thanks for your guidance, whitout you, I bet I will be still wandering the halls, I think ill go to my dorm and unpack the flasks, the ingredients what need a special treatment and some of my materials, it was a pleasure to meet you"
Bowing again gently, he waited the reply.
1798
Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 19:55:28
((Oh well, we can do nothing about that I guess))
White signed elegantly in the letter then handed it back after read some odd words in the letter.
"There's anything more I have to do Mistress?"
He looked with a patient but curious face to the mare, awaiting an ansenwer from her part.
White signed elegantly in the letter then handed it back after read some odd words in the letter.
"There's anything more I have to do Mistress?"
He looked with a patient but curious face to the mare, awaiting an ansenwer from her part.
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Canterlot Archives / Re: Royal Academy of Magic (Jump-In!)
2013 Jan 23, 19:38:30
"So far, runes never hurted me, I experimented before with the alchemy and seals since they are related, and seems they have no effect on me if they are harmful, maybe is just instictive protection, since the last time I blowed half mountain trying to mix the runes of fire and earth for summon ashes for the flask, drawed by error explosion instead fire alone...but im sure of nothing, that's all I can say Mister Ryo, and I think there will be no problem with the teachers"
White knocked the door and entered slowly.
"Hello? There's anypony?"
White took off the letter and make it rest on the desk, looking around.
"I came here for deliver the letter and fill whatever I need"
White knocked the door and entered slowly.
"Hello? There's anypony?"
White took off the letter and make it rest on the desk, looking around.
"I came here for deliver the letter and fill whatever I need"