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"Yay! We found you!" Lollipop said with the kind of smile a small kid has on their face when winning a game of tag: a little tired, but happy and victorious.
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Um, I can't make a character. It says there are no character selecting rooms open, or something like that. What does that exactly mean?

EDIT: It's working!!!  :D
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"There she is!" Lollipop said happily, and started trotting after the mare she spotted in the crowd.
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"That pony didn't answer? That's impolite." Lollipop said, and immediately started walking in the direction she thought quiet mare headed. She really wanted to ask her what was wrong. "Are you two coming with me?" She asked, looking back at the others.
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"Woah, knowledge broker? You must be so clever!" she said, really excited. The word "knowledge" could easily make her look up to anypony. She seemed to completely ignore everypony else.
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Lollipop accepted the help of the unfamiliar mare in front of her.

"Thanks!" she said with a friendly smile. "Yes, I am fine. This happens a lot to me." she added, smiling at the other pony too.

"I'm Lollipop Swirl. You two are?" she said finally.
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-154 I won't let you colts win this time!  :D
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Lollipop Swirl was walking down the streets of Ponyville. She was heading towards the Apples' market stand, to buy some of the sweet fruits. She was humming a song, one that was usually sang for little fillies. The day was perfect, and she felt like nothing could ruin it. She looked left and right, admiring the way the sun reached the walls of the familiar houses. She was so distracted by the beauty of this quite everyday view, that she bumped into the stand she wanted to reach.
"I'm so sorry!" She quickly said turning towards the young salespony. The mare selling the fruits didn't look like somepony from the Apple family, they probably hired her. Lollipop Swirl put the few apples that fell down to the ground after the collision with the stand in front of the other pony. She added some more apples to the small pile, then smiled at the salespony and bought the apples she put in front of the other mare. Placing the fruits into her saddlebag, she said goodbye to the other pony, and turned around humming a song.
But soon, getting distracted again, tripped in a stone. She hit her nose on the ground, and the apples fell out of her bag. But she didn't do anything. She was so surprised by simply falling that her brain froze for a short while. She just stared forward blankly, trying to understand that she wasn't walking anymore. Some ponies stopped and stared at her, for she could have seemed like she was seriously hurt, others, who knew her already, just walked past her, knowing this happened to her millions of times a day.
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Original Characters / Re: Lollipop Swirl
2014 Nov 28, 16:31:43
Thank you for the good advice. i'll break this up to smaller paragraphs some other time, I'm too bored now.... ^^"