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Original Characters / Re: Zarky's OC's :3
2014 Jun 03, 11:24:53
So because alicorns just appeared in the MLP show a few times (celestia, her sister Princess Luna, Twilight and that mentioned Cadance) makes any alicorn OC's a more difficult to be believable. Because, for be an alicorn, the ponie/pegasus/unicorn has to get the magic of somewhere, and this needs a good explanation and story to make it believable.
and my character lacks of a true good explanation of how she gets the magic needed to becoming an alicorn.
that's one of the things that makes people react so bad to my character (and the fact of be a dragon (he) turned into a mare (she), and have uncommun powers XD. Maybe i have too much open/free mind (and weird ideas) for this forum-.- well i will try to fit in XD)
i will do my second character more.. believable. You know. A young happy dragon, named Zarky, that just wanna get fun and doesn't use his powers because he make a deal with a friend of don't use them while he was in equestria. He just is allowed to use his ice breath. That character sounds more believable? XD
and if i give to Vauker an explanation of how she turned an alicorn (maybe be learning a spell that steals magic from alicorns nearby or even the magic of dragons) will she be more believable or she can't definitely be an alicorn?
if only worthy ponies can deserve be alicorns, Vauker will be forced to stop his evil ways. She will have to help a lot of ponys, that way she will slowly become a very good pony in order to achieve the right to be alicorn, and then to have the magic needed to return to his dragon form. That would also explains why she stops being mean with everypony and become good
And that vauker turns good was the intention of the witch when she turned vauker into a defenceless pony 
Does that sounds better?or i will have to let the alicorn thing? XD
PD: Don't be afraid of write long posts Tiger ^^ i like to read so i don't get bored reading long posts, and if you wanna say more things about my characters feel free to do it, as long as it is a constructive critics and not just insults as some people does ^^
and my character lacks of a true good explanation of how she gets the magic needed to becoming an alicorn.
that's one of the things that makes people react so bad to my character (and the fact of be a dragon (he) turned into a mare (she), and have uncommun powers XD. Maybe i have too much open/free mind (and weird ideas) for this forum-.- well i will try to fit in XD)
i will do my second character more.. believable. You know. A young happy dragon, named Zarky, that just wanna get fun and doesn't use his powers because he make a deal with a friend of don't use them while he was in equestria. He just is allowed to use his ice breath. That character sounds more believable? XD
and if i give to Vauker an explanation of how she turned an alicorn (maybe be learning a spell that steals magic from alicorns nearby or even the magic of dragons) will she be more believable or she can't definitely be an alicorn?
if only worthy ponies can deserve be alicorns, Vauker will be forced to stop his evil ways. She will have to help a lot of ponys, that way she will slowly become a very good pony in order to achieve the right to be alicorn, and then to have the magic needed to return to his dragon form. That would also explains why she stops being mean with everypony and become good
And that vauker turns good was the intention of the witch when she turned vauker into a defenceless pony Does that sounds better?or i will have to let the alicorn thing? XD
PD: Don't be afraid of write long posts Tiger ^^ i like to read so i don't get bored reading long posts, and if you wanna say more things about my characters feel free to do it, as long as it is a constructive critics and not just insults as some people does ^^
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Original Characters / Re: Zarky's OC's :3
2014 Jun 03, 07:48:11
to shadow mare: with your comment i can't know what you was meaning XD now i do, but next time please say somthing more than a what so i can understand what you wanna say XD and i see you use pony-dragons too? 0w0
to midnight breeze: well that wasn't really nice of you XD if you say that i need a proofreader have the decency to at least mention the things that are wrong so i can correct it. Just how Glass Mirror do. If you dont have more to say then don't be offensive at least.
to Glass Mirror: Thanks for comment all the errors (all of them XD) i will change it, if the character is too strong, then i will make her least powerful. She wont be able to make ponys kill others or die. She now just can make ponies go nervous. If it is allowed. if not, then she just do bad things to ponys (using magic tricks like Trixie does) and be mean to them (has if she was a school bully XD)
About the thing of her gender. She is a girl in her pony form. But in the dragon form (the original form) was a male. If it is too weird. i will let the character as a "she".
And about the change of forms. I don't know it was so weird. Just see in MLP series that Twilight Sparkle (the unicorn) turns into an alicorn. So why my character can't? XD (maybe im wrong and it was a fanmade video and never happens in the real serie? 0w0)
it is weird that a pegaso turned into a unicorn and then into an alicorn. It was an error when i write.
it is more logical that it was a unicorn that turns to an alicorn.
So the character was first a dragon that was turned to a pony (against her will) and after she got some magic she turns to a unicorn then a alicorn and when she finally has enough magic she will be able to return to her dragon form for at least a few minutes. But her dream is to return to her dragon form full time.
i will roleplay with that character starting when she is a pony and make her develop/grow up through the roleplaying.
She isn't a flat character, she is a round character (that in literature means characters that are complex and undergo development; physically and psychologically)
So: dragon-pony-unicorn-alicorn-dragon again. And she will change her way of think about ponies, and she will be less mean and become to be more good with them. (if she, while roleplaying, found a reason to stop hate ponies)
Is all of this not allowed? XD i better do a flat character?
to midnight breeze: well that wasn't really nice of you XD if you say that i need a proofreader have the decency to at least mention the things that are wrong so i can correct it. Just how Glass Mirror do. If you dont have more to say then don't be offensive at least.
to Glass Mirror: Thanks for comment all the errors (all of them XD) i will change it, if the character is too strong, then i will make her least powerful. She wont be able to make ponys kill others or die. She now just can make ponies go nervous. If it is allowed. if not, then she just do bad things to ponys (using magic tricks like Trixie does) and be mean to them (has if she was a school bully XD)
About the thing of her gender. She is a girl in her pony form. But in the dragon form (the original form) was a male. If it is too weird. i will let the character as a "she".
And about the change of forms. I don't know it was so weird. Just see in MLP series that Twilight Sparkle (the unicorn) turns into an alicorn. So why my character can't? XD (maybe im wrong and it was a fanmade video and never happens in the real serie? 0w0)
it is weird that a pegaso turned into a unicorn and then into an alicorn. It was an error when i write.
it is more logical that it was a unicorn that turns to an alicorn.
So the character was first a dragon that was turned to a pony (against her will) and after she got some magic she turns to a unicorn then a alicorn and when she finally has enough magic she will be able to return to her dragon form for at least a few minutes. But her dream is to return to her dragon form full time.
i will roleplay with that character starting when she is a pony and make her develop/grow up through the roleplaying.
She isn't a flat character, she is a round character (that in literature means characters that are complex and undergo development; physically and psychologically)
So: dragon-pony-unicorn-alicorn-dragon again. And she will change her way of think about ponies, and she will be less mean and become to be more good with them. (if she, while roleplaying, found a reason to stop hate ponies)
Is all of this not allowed? XD i better do a flat character?
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Original Characters / Zarky's OC's :3
2014 May 26, 04:02:42
Name: Vauker
gender: Mare
Species: pony (but she will become, a unicorn, alicorn and finally will return to be a dragon)
Story: He was a evil dragon. he have fun stressing every creature he found, causing troubles and deaths. But one day he annoyed a witch that turned him into a mare so she cant hurt anyone and stop her from conquer all the cities and villages has she want. Since then, Vauker will search for the way to return to his dragon form, and she will have to found the way to be magic to finally return to be a dragon. So thats why she was searching how to turn into a magical creature, and turned a unicorn, with some spells. But that wasnt enough magic to retirn to his dragon form. So she studied magic and become a alicorn while she was learning how to change forms. Finally she learn enough about magic to return to his dragon form, but just for a few minutes. She want to return to his dragon form full time, thats why she will try to learn the definitelly spell.
hability: she can speak and make dragons do her bidding because she once was one of them and a stronger one. She was often accompanied by big adult and agressive dragons.
Element: whose element was stress. (he can make anybody turn very nervous, acting mean or dumb)
Position: She was the evil guardian dragon of stress.
Personality: She is agressive and very nervous hyperactive. Has very crazy ideas. always mad at be a mare and saying that if she was a dragon again will do this and this other. Is always fumming and in a bad humor for be a mare but she gets happy evilly when she can cause trouble to someone. She will always be revel and bad intentioned and will take profit of anything to get fun.
gender: Mare
Species: pony (but she will become, a unicorn, alicorn and finally will return to be a dragon)
Story: He was a evil dragon. he have fun stressing every creature he found, causing troubles and deaths. But one day he annoyed a witch that turned him into a mare so she cant hurt anyone and stop her from conquer all the cities and villages has she want. Since then, Vauker will search for the way to return to his dragon form, and she will have to found the way to be magic to finally return to be a dragon. So thats why she was searching how to turn into a magical creature, and turned a unicorn, with some spells. But that wasnt enough magic to retirn to his dragon form. So she studied magic and become a alicorn while she was learning how to change forms. Finally she learn enough about magic to return to his dragon form, but just for a few minutes. She want to return to his dragon form full time, thats why she will try to learn the definitelly spell.
hability: she can speak and make dragons do her bidding because she once was one of them and a stronger one. She was often accompanied by big adult and agressive dragons.
Element: whose element was stress. (he can make anybody turn very nervous, acting mean or dumb)
Position: She was the evil guardian dragon of stress.
Personality: She is agressive and very nervous hyperactive. Has very crazy ideas. always mad at be a mare and saying that if she was a dragon again will do this and this other. Is always fumming and in a bad humor for be a mare but she gets happy evilly when she can cause trouble to someone. She will always be revel and bad intentioned and will take profit of anything to get fun.
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Introductions Archive / ALO PONYS!! :D
2014 May 25, 18:53:52
Hello ponys! i just made the account for play that amazing game i just see today in a youtube video.
the moment i see you can fly being a pegaso i cant help but download the game >w<
Sad for me that today the servers arent open i will have to wait to play but i dont known when the servers are open (i read that would be opened 24h on friday, im not sure if it is right) XD
im exploring the foro now coz it looks pretty interesting and i will be creating a two OCs for roleplay too ^^
about me, i'm not good at introducing myself, i'm shy, but likes to be alone long times. Im not romantic but i love cutie things, dragons, some anime-manga (but not much just the characters or stories, im not an otaku
)
Have watched just three episodes or so of my little pony serie because of its beautyful and perfect drawing style and well its kinda funny the characters and all.
i love to do animations, flash games, fanfics or storys, comics, videos, songs and lots of things like this but i'm still not pretty good at drawing so.. i havent done much of them. Wanting to learn 3D so i can make a game like that you have got here 0w0 it sure would be very difficult.
Maybe i will post some of my animations and drawings
last thing i want to say, and i think you would have notice is that english isnt my first lenguaje. It is spanish but i try to speak english so.. sorry about my lots of grammar errors im sure its difficult to understand what i write XD
Anyhow im happy to have found that pleace and hope it is very active, and get along well with all of you ^^
the moment i see you can fly being a pegaso i cant help but download the game >w<
Sad for me that today the servers arent open i will have to wait to play but i dont known when the servers are open (i read that would be opened 24h on friday, im not sure if it is right) XD
im exploring the foro now coz it looks pretty interesting and i will be creating a two OCs for roleplay too ^^
about me, i'm not good at introducing myself, i'm shy, but likes to be alone long times. Im not romantic but i love cutie things, dragons, some anime-manga (but not much just the characters or stories, im not an otaku
) Have watched just three episodes or so of my little pony serie because of its beautyful and perfect drawing style and well its kinda funny the characters and all.
i love to do animations, flash games, fanfics or storys, comics, videos, songs and lots of things like this but i'm still not pretty good at drawing so.. i havent done much of them. Wanting to learn 3D so i can make a game like that you have got here 0w0 it sure would be very difficult.
Maybe i will post some of my animations and drawings
last thing i want to say, and i think you would have notice is that english isnt my first lenguaje. It is spanish but i try to speak english so.. sorry about my lots of grammar errors
im sure its difficult to understand what i write XD Anyhow im happy to have found that pleace and hope it is very active, and get along well with all of you ^^
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