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Original Characters / My story part 3 Edited

2016 Jun 22, 13:50:01

This is the third part of my story. Fluttershy, Rainbow and I just moved into Ponyville.  Fluttershy told me to meet her there. I looked for her for a while, but I had some difficulty finding her. 'Where IS she....?' I thought. Eventually,  I spotted her by a large fountain. I flew down to meet her.
"Hey, Fluttershy. Why did you tell me to meet here? Is something wrong?" Fluttershy shook her head. "No, Fire...it's just that...I have something I've been meaning to tell you for a while now..it's about Rainbow Dash..."
"What about her?"
"Well....you see....Rainbow has a crush on you."

"Wait, what?! This can't be....I'm going to go ask Rainbow, to see if it's true. I'll be right back, Fluttershy."

"Well...okay. But remember, you didn't hear it from me...okay?"

"Sure.....by the way, how did you find out?"

"It's just something girls do."

"Oh...okay....well, be right back!"

Fire flew up into the sky to look for Rainbow Dash. As he flew, he thought, 'I guess we really are old enough to get coltfriends and marefriends, haha! Seems like it was only yesterday we were at flight camp....ahh, good memories.' Fire eventually spotted Rainbow near her residence. Rainbow quickly noticed him, and flew at him, hooves out to embrace him. "Hehe, hey, Rainbow! Good to see ya!"
"Good to see ya, too, Fire!" Rainbow replied.

"Say, Rainbow...I have a question for you."

"Um, sure. What's up?"

"A little birdie told me that you had a crush on me...is this true?"

Rainbow looked at Fire for a moment, then sighed. "....Yes. It's true...I do have a crush on you...I've been meaning to tell you, but I was afraid to...."

"To be honest, Dashie...I've really liked you for a while now....so I have a crush on you, too....and along with having a crush, I wanted to ask you....will....will you be my special somepony?"

"Are you serious? You're not pulling my hoof?"

"No...I'm being honest..I truly do like you."

".....Then...then, yes, I will be your special somepony, Dashie." Rainbow replied, and beamed.

Firedash smiled back, and the two ponies tightly embraced each other. At last, they shared how they truly felt for each other...and finally developed the love they yearned for..

To Be Continued in Part 4, which will come out in maybe a month.

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Original Characters / My Story Part 3 FireDash

2016 Jun 22, 12:43:30

My story part 3 me Fluttershy and rainbow dash was just moved to ponyvilleFluttershy did tell me to meet her here. I cant see her. Where is she oh there she is. Hi Fluttershy. Why did you call me. Is there something wrong. no FireDash its just i got something to tell you. About Rainbow Dash What is it Fluttershy?. She she... has a crush on you.... What in Equestria!!!!. Is it true... Fluttershy? i think Im gonna ask. Her bye Fluttershy. Just dont say i did tell you ok?. Dont worry Fluttershy. But how did you even find out?. Its just something girls does FireDash Okay Fluttershy. BYE ;3 *FireDash flyes over to rainbow dash* hmm i guess we are old enough to get Girlfriends and boyfriends ha ha its like we was on the fly camp yesterday good memories oh theres Rainbows house and Theres Rainbow *FireDash lands in her garden Rainbow flys over to him and hugs him* Hey Rainbow i have a question for you Yea what is it Fire? a Source did tell me you had a crush on me is that true Dashie? ........yea it is i got a crush on you Dashie i actually have a crush on you too and will ... will you be my special somepony? *Rainbow thinks its a dream*is this for real no joke Fire? is this for real?!? yea i like you Dashie ok if its real yea i wanna be your special somepony FireDash YES!! sorry im just so happy *Rainbow and FireDash Hugs* part 4 comes out soon maybe next month hope you enjoyed it and thanks to my editor Loyal Defender Bye

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Original Characters / My Story

2016 May 30, 12:47:10

my story starts now i was a little alicorn and i was the element of fire i did train to protect the land of equestria and my mom princess luna helped me but a day there did come a mighty pony with unbelievable powers more rare than mine and we fighted in hours and hours to last i was so hurt that i couldnt fight anymore and i couldnt regen myself and then the mighty pony did make the final move and mom was suprised that i did survive in such a long time i was just a little filly but then mom did get so mad she tryed to kill the mighty pony and she was smashed into a wall then my body started to burn it was my powers being activated my cutiemark started to glow and i kicked the mighty pony long away then i maked a fireball and shoot it on him and he flyed away i runned over to mom and did get her to the hospital at the hospital mom did wake up and the first thing she said was FireDash w-where are your horn my horn was not on my head i-i was just a pegasus know we cryed such a long time and i did know it was after my power activated fully i did know it was horrible for me but it was also good i activated my powers fully but i needed to travel i was sad but also glad a whole new life cause i was never into the prince thing then i did move to cloudsdale and i did have my own house i should on the fly camp and it was there i met rainbow dash and Fluttershy we did have lots of fun together and after the camp we did go to rainbow dashes home to play i still remember shes parents first words was y you are the pegasus prince the story is that your gave your horn away for your powers or something like that and then they did give me high hoof and we played in the house part 2 if it was good