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Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2014 Aug 12, 17:46:13
I'm not a fan of half breeds, but this one seems to be fine. I don't see any abuse of power in this character, although I do have some questions about his role in society.
What exactly does he do? Does he guard a mountain or guard ponies from a mountain? Where is this mountain anyway (if that matters)?
I would like to know more about what this guarding business involves. What does he protect from? I'm guessing monsters and maybe even rowdy ponies, but that would make him an embodiment of law enforcement. How does he protect? I'm asking what abilities, weapons, and attacks does he use? Those battle stats you listed are completely out of context to me and make it look like he is a character out of a game, instead of out of a story.
You also got a lot of sentence structure problems.QuoteCutie Mark~ A crescent moon within a magical circle. A symbolism of his devotion name, Moon Glow's ability on lunar illuminations onto his wings whenever the moonlights reflects on. Other than that, under the agreement of a powerful noble unicorn envisioned of the dragon's arrival and his several generations services for the Royal Sisters especially Princess Luna. Note that only his pegasus form, the cutie mark exists.
Except for the first and last sentence, I cannot make heads or tails of this.
Quote from: GlassMirror on 2014 Aug 12, 16:42:09Quote from: M00nGl0w on 2014 Aug 12, 16:39:39Quote from: GlassMirror on 2014 Aug 12, 16:30:01
Another Dragon pony! welcome to the Dragon Pony club!
other than that, I like his design, as well as everything else, even though the word immortality does sound a bit off...
That's why I made it clear to many other ponies that he's isn't immortal ANYMORE... He just have a very VERY large age pool.
Thanks for the welcoming btw, GlassMirror.
I understand the large age pool. my character is 6000yrs old, but theirs a tremendous age gap with it
(that first picture really gets me. Its awesome! )
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2014 Aug 12, 16:44:06
then get rid of that immortality nonsense.
Quote from: GlassMirror on 2014 Aug 12, 16:30:01
Another Dragon pony! welcome to the Dragon Pony club!
other than that, I like his design, as well as everything else, even though the word immortality does sound a bit off...
Quote from: DawnsEmbrace on 2014 Aug 11, 19:55:59
Conclusion:
As Blue just mentioned, Behold a Pale Horse is the winner with 12 votes.
While I agree with M00n a little, this was a fair poll, and Behold a Pale Horse won.
Message of the Week:I'm a day late again
Now that the OSW is over, I expect the site to slow down a little more. Hopefully the chat will come back up soon.
All in all, I don't really have a topic for this week.
Quote from: Blue Shield on 2014 Aug 11, 20:20:32
If I may intergect, I do have a suggestion. I was thinking all the leadership; you, Chibi, Stan, his second-in-command, Alex, his second, Ramisha and myself, all get together in a pm or something and throw things in for our weekly messages. That way, we'll have more information from the columns, and have more news to spread.Kind of like a council of a sort.
Quote from: PlatinumJoystick on 2014 Aug 11, 12:27:27
Forward Unto Dawn...
The theme is Behold A Pale Horse from Halo 3...
Checks out.
Quote from: ForwardUntoDawn on 2014 Aug 11, 12:38:21
OC name: Dawn Star
Race: Pegasus
Talent: Attack and Defense (mutiple version of this do to RP restriction in other places,and a bit confused nervous too )
Quote from: Grizzly on 2014 Aug 09, 15:14:32
Somepony save me!!! i'm lost in evershade, surrounded by monshters :'(