This is my OC information any and all feedback will be read and appreciated to improve my OC.
Name: Redhoof (Prefers to be called Red)
Race: Unicorn
Age:18
Height:Tall
Appearance: http://nimaru.deviantart.com/art/For-his-sister-request-328603702
Quick description: Tall Dark red with onyx black maned tipped with red has platinum grey eyes and a summoning circle cutie mark.
Backstory:Redhoof discovered his cutie mark at a young age learning he was proficient in spell circle based magic he spent a lot of time practicing. When his father passed away in a construction accident and his mother simply passed away soon after Red began to take care of his younger sister Pink Blossom. After a few years Red and Pink Blossom moved to Ponyville where red did odd jobs around town while his sister went to school. Red spends the later hours of the day practicing his magic and reading books he borrows from the local library.
(Any feedback and tips to improve this is appreciated)