Title: Julian's OC's
Post by: julian on 2012 Jul 21, 18:38:34
Post by: julian on 2012 Jul 21, 18:38:34
Name: Caramel Starling
Race: Earth Pony
Gender:Colt
Age:13
Eye Color: Blue
Coat color: Light yellow
Mane:Light orange with brown
favorite colors: teal,white,pink,blue
Personality: He likes being sweet and nice to everypony. He is usually really shy and quiet; way sensitive too. He likes treating ponies with respect; He cares a lot about his friends. He can be very unsafe about himself.
Cutie Mark: None yet
Likes: Dancing, music, fashion
Fears: Being alone,,mirrors at dark,dark,evil,blood.
Dislikes: rude ponies, being insulted, being ignored, hypocrite ponies.
Bio: He was born in ponyville and he lives with his parents and his sister Vanilla Starling
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Name: Vanilla Starling
Race: Earth Pony
Gender:Mare
Age:12
Eye Color: Green
Coat color: Light yellow
Mane:Light orange with brown
favorite colors: teal,white,pink,blue
Personality: She likes being friendly and talkative. Mostly of the time she is trying to help others in whatever they need and she is usually very protective with her friends; she wouldnt let them go somewhere dangerous alone, she cares too much about her family and friends. Altough she can be really nice she sometimes overreacts over something and can get in problems easily. She likes stalking her enemies and being vengative.
Fears: spiders
Likes: Gardening, Helping ponies
Dislikes: Insults, rude ponies, hypocrite ponies.
Bio: She was born in ponyville and she lives with his parents and his brother Caramel Starling
CutieMark: a shield since she can be very defensive and motherly with her friends and family.
Race: Earth Pony
Gender:Colt
Age:13
Eye Color: Blue
Coat color: Light yellow
Mane:Light orange with brown
favorite colors: teal,white,pink,blue
Personality: He likes being sweet and nice to everypony. He is usually really shy and quiet; way sensitive too. He likes treating ponies with respect; He cares a lot about his friends. He can be very unsafe about himself.
Cutie Mark: None yet
Likes: Dancing, music, fashion
Fears: Being alone,,mirrors at dark,dark,evil,blood.
Dislikes: rude ponies, being insulted, being ignored, hypocrite ponies.
Bio: He was born in ponyville and he lives with his parents and his sister Vanilla Starling
Spoiler: show
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Name: Vanilla Starling
Race: Earth Pony
Gender:Mare
Age:12
Eye Color: Green
Coat color: Light yellow
Mane:Light orange with brown
favorite colors: teal,white,pink,blue
Personality: She likes being friendly and talkative. Mostly of the time she is trying to help others in whatever they need and she is usually very protective with her friends; she wouldnt let them go somewhere dangerous alone, she cares too much about her family and friends. Altough she can be really nice she sometimes overreacts over something and can get in problems easily. She likes stalking her enemies and being vengative.
Fears: spiders
Likes: Gardening, Helping ponies
Dislikes: Insults, rude ponies, hypocrite ponies.
Bio: She was born in ponyville and she lives with his parents and his brother Caramel Starling
CutieMark: a shield since she can be very defensive and motherly with her friends and family.
Spoiler: show
Title: Re: Julian's OC's (i need help with dis please x3)
Post by: Gracie Sky on 2012 Jul 23, 19:37:28
Post by: Gracie Sky on 2012 Jul 23, 19:37:28
ovO Cure the run on sentence problem with both characters' profiles before I tell you what I think of them.
Title: Re: Julian's OC's
Post by: julian on 2012 Jul 23, 20:47:21
Post by: julian on 2012 Jul 23, 20:47:21
Okay i fixed it
I think it actually looked terrible o.O
what do you think now? x3
I think it actually looked terrible o.O
what do you think now? x3