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Roleplay Board => Original Characters => Topic started by: Cyberian Misfit on 2014 Jun 30, 21:24:14

Title: My OC (Definitly a bit.... different.) REVISED COLORING
Post by: Cyberian Misfit on 2014 Jun 30, 21:24:14
Name: Drafir
Age: unknown
Gender: Female
Breed: Pegasus

(http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s361/cyberianmisfit/DraFirRevised_zps60b495cb.png)

Backstory:
When Drafir was a newborn foal, her parents were moving from Canterlot to Manehatten. Along the way they sadly got caught up in one of Discords many perilous 'transformations' in the Everfree Forest and died in a collapse of trees and rocks. For days Drafir cried out and sobbed looking for her mother and father. Unfortunately, there was never any answer.

About 5 days passed and a young female dragon named Illiana was wandering through the forest. (Why she was alone is another story ENTIRELY.) She heard the faint calls of a weak filly and quickly found the baby Pegasus. Feeling alone herself, Illiana took the pegasus under her wing and raised her as her own in the far mountains.

For years the Dragon did not know what to call this strange little creature that had come to her, until one day when the little Pegasus coughed and breathed out a puff of smoke! Absolutely delighted at this development, Illiana decided to name the filly Drafir, meaning Dragon-Fire. It seemed the long years of the pony being with the dragon caused her to gain a bit of Dragon Magic in the form of breathing fire! At that moment a small light shone and a mark of a Dragon circling a small flame appeared on each side of the filly's rump.

From that day on, Drafir was raised in the ways of a dragon. Until the day finally came when she had to leave her sudo-mother. There were many happy tears shed between the Dragon and the Pony, then she flapped her wings and flew off in excitement and anticipation of what she will experience next!

So what do you guys think? I know she is far from a 'normally colored' pony, but I don't want an OC that is just another face in the crowd.
Title: Re: My OC (Definitly a bit.... different.)
Post by: Ramisha on 2014 Jul 01, 09:23:04
The story is cool (except for the bit where her parents died), but why are her wings GREEN? Why green? It just doesn't fit!
Title: Re: My OC (Definitly a bit.... different.)
Post by: Cyberian Misfit on 2014 Jul 01, 21:28:31
I have been getting that a lot.... Honestly.... I think I am going to just change them to blue...
Title: Re: My OC (Definitly a bit.... different.) REVISED COLORING
Post by: Ramisha on 2014 Jul 02, 01:15:16
Oh, it looks nice this way  ^-^ Sorry, didn't mean ti offend you but it just didn't fit x3 especially with the orange-red hair
Title: Re: My OC (Definitly a bit.... different.) REVISED COLORING
Post by: Cyberian Misfit on 2014 Jul 02, 19:48:27
No, I appreciate it!

I just honestly don't know what I am going to do now.... Part of me thinks I should keep the Green wings and say that there is more than just the Fire aspect that she absorbed from Dragon magic.... the other part of me says I should just conform and get it over with.... I am really confused.
Title: Re: My OC (Definitly a bit.... different.) REVISED COLORING
Post by: Ramisha on 2014 Jul 03, 02:42:37
I sent you a message! :) I think a few scales here and there would look good (e.g, on her legs, back or nose).