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Original Characters / StarGazer, my OC :3
2012 Dec 09, 20:01:02
Alright, so you might be wondering what I mean by "official".  Well, but official, I mean I have more than one pony-sona, and so this one is just the most...  Relatable.   X3  Anyways, here she is:

Her name is just "Comet" for now--  although I was thinking of giving her a more unique one.  Here are some ideas:

StarGrazer

SpeedRocker

ShootingStar

StarFall

SkyShine

SkyWave

SkyGlaze

StarGlaze

Alright, thats it for names.  (Phew!   lol)  Anyways, now for the details...   ovO

I don't know much about 'Comet' for now, but I do know she isn't just some pony~   ;)  :/  I meant, at first, for Comet to be named "IvyLeague," and be the acclaimed smartest flyer in Clouds-Dale.  ( lol   :I)  But then I thought about it, and decided I would leave her if I wanted a Unicorn OC.  (So no takey takey!   >:O   :D)  Anyways, though, I re-vamped her character a bit and came up with this;
What is she was actually popular?

:l   >.<   O:   o.O   DD:   :s    >:/    :I
Yeah, I know, never been done.  But anyways, the first thing I was sure of was her status.  All the stallions (and mares   :]   >A<   ovO)  were going to either love or envy her.  Maybe I am full of myself for wanting this status, but since I have never ever had that in real life (and, sadly, probably never will  D:), I thought:

"Well, if equestria is like the place of your dreams, in my dreams I would be outgoing and popular among all."  But I would never be a douche, even if I am VERY shy...   >.<

So, since I am pretty unsure of her past (for now  :D), what do you guys think of my OC so far?   ^-^


EDIT:  Don't take any of this previous wanna-be crap seriously.  I want a lovable character, so that is what I shall create!  Here goes, past and all:

Name:  StarGazer  (often says she sees stars in her minds eye, being blind and all.   :s)

Gender: mare

Age: 16

Type: pegasus

Personality:  StarGazer is a blind pegasus pony.  Even with her severe handicap, she tries her best at most activities, and doesn't mean harm to any-pony.  She can be a jealous worry-wart at times, thinking she is undesirable-- or not good enough at something.  Even though she is a shy pony, she tries to make friends with who she feels is 'right' for her, and has a hard time trusting (or relying on) anyone else.  Star is very defensive if poked fun of, and manages to get into many fights.  Even if she was not in the wrong, out of guilt she is usually the one to apologize.  If one manages to get close to StarGazer, she might open up and show her true colors.  Her favorite season is the winter, on account of her fear of water and bugs, (she cannot swim, and bugs feel freaking icky.   :I) although she also enjoys the snow itself.

Cutie Mark/Special Talent:  StarGazer's cutie-mark is a shooting star or comet, on account of the fact that her signature flying technique is a skydive-esque move.  She has spent much time in flight school perfecting this technique, keeping to herself in fear of ridicule.  She also focuses much better when alone.

Appearance:  StarGazer is a blue and white pegasus mare, having a streak of white in her mane and tail.  She often keeps her eyes closed, refusing to wear sun-glasses, but when she does open them they are a mellow red-ish color.

Home: Cloudsdale, hailing from Canterlot-- where she was raised.

History:  StarGazer grew up in Canterlot.  She used to belong to a pegasus family, but ran away after a few years due to physical abuse.  (possible cause for her blindness, but she cannot remember much before then.)  She was found on the streets by a unicorn couple, who she later looked up to.  StarGazer was taught a few basic magic spells, even though they were useless to her.  She loved to be read books aloud, and was always more of a listener then a talker.  Months after she was taken in, she was sent to mandatory flight-school, in Cloudsdale.  Often she was made fun of for her disability, so she kept to herself, eventually perfecting her 'comet' technique.  That is when she earned her cutie mark, and that is where her story ends for now.  Sorry for such little detail so far, but I just want to get this down.

Extra: picture time :D    StarGazer has often been spoken of as having an obsession with the sky and stars and such, being the most beautiful thing she remembers before going blind.  EDIT AGAIN:  I'll update the [picture of her soon, but that IS how she looks.  xD

"Haha, yes, I forgot to add.  xD  She is a little clumsy while flying, and sometimes does crash into things.  I was thinking about giving her some bat-like senses are something stupid like that, but maybe not.  She is definitely not graceful, thats for sure... "  a quite from myself cut from a comment I made in reply to Gracie.  Yes, she can fly.  It is sort of preposterous, but she isn't going to be perfect or anything either.