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Original Characters / Re: Character Critique Thread
2012 Nov 08, 20:11:14
Wow, sorry. I didn't even realize about half that. Thanks for being Honest 
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Canterlot Archives / Re: Teal's Roleplay!
2012 Nov 08, 19:59:09
((I will gladly join, and I think others would too, but I think you threw people for a loop with the "special" conditions))
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Original Characters / Re: Character Critique Thread
2012 Oct 18, 22:51:47
Hi, I know you addressed my first OC, but I think I'm doing a lot better now. Less dismal and more real, I think.
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=4523.msg353487#msg353487
Thank you, by the way for putting this up. It really makes us (well, at least me) feel good to know someone at looked at our stuff with the will to make us better. Thanks!
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=4523.msg353487#msg353487
Thank you, by the way for putting this up. It really makes us (well, at least me) feel good to know someone at looked at our stuff with the will to make us better. Thanks!
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Original Characters / Re: Luminescence
2012 Sep 15, 09:23:37
Umm... No I don't know Mist. Who is Winded? I think you have me confused with someone else. Sorry 
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Original Characters / Luminescence
2012 Sep 15, 00:05:51
Alright, let's have another go at this shall we? Technical information will be at the bottom for any who cry foul
Name Luminescence (nicknamed Lumi for short)
Gender Stallion
Species Earth Pony
Age 23
Mane A Deep Rose. Not a vibrant red though. Short, except for the back this reaches to the bottom of his neck, ragged, and center parted. There almost always is bits and pieces of wax stuck in his mane though.
Tail Same color as mane, frayed and also with its smattering of wax
Coat Light Sage Green
Eye Color Slate Grey
Physique On the slight side, but capable of carrying his weight
Hometown Manehatten
Current Home Usually the train or an Inn
Profession Candle Maker
Cutie Mark A lit candle on a bronze holster with a small rose petal in the holster dish
Cutie Mark Story Luminescence gave a special candle, one made almost entierly out of cherry blossoms on a small pedestal for his parents anniversary.
Family Rose Blossom, a scents and bath shop owner Bronze Spark, an professor in botany
Talent Making Candle Wax
Personality Free Spirited, Very open, Enjoys a good time, Slow to react or realize things
Likes Light and Dark (literal not cosmic) Tea, Lotus Flowers, Silk, Candles
Dislikes Pure Black and White, when things go awry, Angry or Unwilling pony's
Strengths Willing and Happy
Weaknesses Slow and Color
Accessories and Clothing
A single Silver Earring in the left ear, a small Olive colored bandanna he hangs around his neck, A large Black Cauldron he lugs around on his little wooden cart, several lengths of twine and string, a mortar and pistil, 2 baskets(one full of candles, one full of materials)
One last thing before the bio, He is monochromatic colorblind.
Bio
Luminescence had a pretty easy past. Living in the upstairs residence of the shop, Lumi learned many things about fragrances and soaps and oils and how they make pony's feel, or could make them feel better. He vigorously studied and learned all Rose Blossom could teach him of her craft. He found it amazing how fragrances could change peoples mood. He devoted himself to learning these things, and he loved it.
Most other ponies found many other things to enjoy, but Lumi enjoyed light. Being so severely colorblind, he found many things others found enjoyable rather dull. Thanks to being in such a different family from the cut and dry Manehatten family, he wasn't discouraged from these endeavors. Unfortunately, everywhere he looked, all light was provided by magic. From little streetlamps to the sun, all lighty stuff was magic based. "Now, how does a earth pony like me deal with light stuffs? It's like a unicorn trying to move the clouds, sure there's probably a way, but it it's hard. " This and similar thoughts often occupied his conciseness.
Then one day when helping Rose out in the spa, it dawned on him. Whenever a high end employee came for a soothing or gentle spa treatment, Rose laid out candles. Candles! "They're just burning plant stuff, right? Dad ought to know all about that!" With that in mind, Lumi set out to find Bronze Spark, despite Rose Blossom's calls. Galloping into the mini home office, Lumi had barely touched the floor when he had started explaining his idea. Slowly, comprehension dawned to Bronze Spark as for what Lumi wanted to do. Reaching down for a couple books, he gave them to Lumi and told him which types of plants would be most helpful and told him to go at it.
Month's faded away as Lumi lost himself into the art of candles. From starting from understanding the plants needed and on to different wick types, he learned all he could. Eventually, he moved on from the hypothetical to the practical. Small misshapen cylinders littered the counters and table side lamp stands, he only grew in determination. As his determination developed so did the candles. Slowly, they became liken unto his typical candle, a tall vanilla colored candle with a rose carved on the side.
As the months passed, Luminescence grew to want to show others his candles. That, and the house was filled with far too many candles. Settling his debts with some of the locals, he set out on his business venture. Wishing him luck, his parents loaned him enough bits for a couple train tickets and he set out. With the world on the tip of his hooves, he went forth to find his place, and his new life.
Alright now for technical information
Tell me what you think. Hope it's better and more believable.
Name Luminescence (nicknamed Lumi for short)
Gender Stallion
Species Earth Pony
Age 23
Mane A Deep Rose. Not a vibrant red though. Short, except for the back this reaches to the bottom of his neck, ragged, and center parted. There almost always is bits and pieces of wax stuck in his mane though.
Tail Same color as mane, frayed and also with its smattering of wax
Coat Light Sage Green
Eye Color Slate Grey
Physique On the slight side, but capable of carrying his weight
Hometown Manehatten
Current Home Usually the train or an Inn
Profession Candle Maker
Cutie Mark A lit candle on a bronze holster with a small rose petal in the holster dish
Cutie Mark Story Luminescence gave a special candle, one made almost entierly out of cherry blossoms on a small pedestal for his parents anniversary.
Family Rose Blossom, a scents and bath shop owner Bronze Spark, an professor in botany
Talent Making Candle Wax
Personality Free Spirited, Very open, Enjoys a good time, Slow to react or realize things
Likes Light and Dark (literal not cosmic) Tea, Lotus Flowers, Silk, Candles
Dislikes Pure Black and White, when things go awry, Angry or Unwilling pony's
Strengths Willing and Happy
Weaknesses Slow and Color
Accessories and Clothing
A single Silver Earring in the left ear, a small Olive colored bandanna he hangs around his neck, A large Black Cauldron he lugs around on his little wooden cart, several lengths of twine and string, a mortar and pistil, 2 baskets(one full of candles, one full of materials)
One last thing before the bio, He is monochromatic colorblind.
Bio
Luminescence had a pretty easy past. Living in the upstairs residence of the shop, Lumi learned many things about fragrances and soaps and oils and how they make pony's feel, or could make them feel better. He vigorously studied and learned all Rose Blossom could teach him of her craft. He found it amazing how fragrances could change peoples mood. He devoted himself to learning these things, and he loved it.
Most other ponies found many other things to enjoy, but Lumi enjoyed light. Being so severely colorblind, he found many things others found enjoyable rather dull. Thanks to being in such a different family from the cut and dry Manehatten family, he wasn't discouraged from these endeavors. Unfortunately, everywhere he looked, all light was provided by magic. From little streetlamps to the sun, all lighty stuff was magic based. "Now, how does a earth pony like me deal with light stuffs? It's like a unicorn trying to move the clouds, sure there's probably a way, but it it's hard. " This and similar thoughts often occupied his conciseness.
Then one day when helping Rose out in the spa, it dawned on him. Whenever a high end employee came for a soothing or gentle spa treatment, Rose laid out candles. Candles! "They're just burning plant stuff, right? Dad ought to know all about that!" With that in mind, Lumi set out to find Bronze Spark, despite Rose Blossom's calls. Galloping into the mini home office, Lumi had barely touched the floor when he had started explaining his idea. Slowly, comprehension dawned to Bronze Spark as for what Lumi wanted to do. Reaching down for a couple books, he gave them to Lumi and told him which types of plants would be most helpful and told him to go at it.
Month's faded away as Lumi lost himself into the art of candles. From starting from understanding the plants needed and on to different wick types, he learned all he could. Eventually, he moved on from the hypothetical to the practical. Small misshapen cylinders littered the counters and table side lamp stands, he only grew in determination. As his determination developed so did the candles. Slowly, they became liken unto his typical candle, a tall vanilla colored candle with a rose carved on the side.
As the months passed, Luminescence grew to want to show others his candles. That, and the house was filled with far too many candles. Settling his debts with some of the locals, he set out on his business venture. Wishing him luck, his parents loaned him enough bits for a couple train tickets and he set out. With the world on the tip of his hooves, he went forth to find his place, and his new life.
Alright now for technical information
Spoiler: show
Tell me what you think. Hope it's better and more believable.
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MLP: FiM SD Archive / Re: Worst Possible Thing that could happen/ Best possible thing
2012 Aug 25, 11:49:35Quote from: Book Smarts on 2012 Aug 23, 19:23:02Quote from: Zbizo on 2012 Aug 19, 20:34:22
best: there won't be g5 and few seasons later we back to 22 minutes long episodes
worst: hasbro decide to make it girly and childish as it was before to destroy brony fandom, keep short seasons and discontinue show for few months to make g5 with new main cast
That wouldn't destroy the fandom
The Fandom exists despite the somewhat girly aspect of the show. Even if the seasons get shorter or is discontinued, the brony culture will still exist. If it gets shorter seasons, we have hope that it continues and who knows? They might be working on something else, like a movie (hope)
If it is discontinued, we have a open templet for continueing with fan fiction and ideas, without worldbuilding that would stop it. Think positive! It helps
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Pony Off-Topic / Re: How did you become a brony?
2012 Aug 13, 13:24:55
I was looking up social conventions and new fandoms for my paper. Finished with some generic anime/manga from a very disturbing section of the bowels of the internet. I decieded that maybe a lighter type of fandom would be nice to recover with. I looked for some less soul consuming fandom and found ponies.How this came up as less soul consuming I'll never know I tried to look at it in a observant light, but it was too good of a fandom. It took me in. I never left. 
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Pony Off-Topic Archive / Re: I'm so emotional, it's funny...
2012 Aug 13, 12:49:17
Where I live, it was mid seventy last winter. No snow for me.
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MLP: FiM SD Archive / Re: How far do you think MLP:FIM will make it?
2012 Aug 13, 12:21:15
I chose to look at it in this perspective.
I have looked into other large fandoms, such as Star Trek / Star Wars, Naruto, Bleach, Nintendo in general, Halo, a little bit of WoW, and some, well, less friendly stuff. *shudder* Point being, MLP: FiM has one of the largest fandoms out there! Not only that, but it
Looking at it in this light, I believe it will stick around for quite some time. Will it be FiM? Maybe not, but they'll definitely have MLP. Oh, and the animation will most likely stay, what with all the animation fans out there. I have no worries that it will last.
I have looked into other large fandoms, such as Star Trek / Star Wars, Naruto, Bleach, Nintendo in general, Halo, a little bit of WoW, and some, well, less friendly stuff. *shudder* Point being, MLP: FiM has one of the largest fandoms out there! Not only that, but it
Looking at it in this light, I believe it will stick around for quite some time. Will it be FiM? Maybe not, but they'll definitely have MLP. Oh, and the animation will most likely stay, what with all the animation fans out there. I have no worries that it will last.
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Introductions Archive / Re: Bonjour, Hei, Dia duit, and otherwise known as, Hello
2012 Aug 10, 10:54:30Quote from: The Wandering Magus on 2012 Aug 07, 18:11:26Quote from: Lunar Eclipse on 2012 Aug 06, 10:45:41hello and welcome back
Hello! I am (semi) new to LoE. I do, however believe that introductions are in order!
I am old enough to have a brain and young enough to use it.
I read far more than is considerd the norm, but I don't consider myself a book conisure by any strech of the imagination.
I enjoy watching how things unfold almost as much as changing them myself.
I may not say much, but I always weigh what I could say before I say it.
I love Old English, and am quite fluent.
I do hope to see you around, err, so to speak.do you roleplay?
I would like to try, but I do not know quite how or which to join. Simplicity, as you might imagine, isn't exactly my strong suit. Depth and detail I take particular delight in, but I am unable to successfully convey this without simple bluntness. An interesting oxymoron indeed.
But in a word, yes I do roleplay.
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Introductions Archive / Re: Bonjour<3!
2012 Aug 06, 12:52:21QuoteBonjour à toi, cher compagnon! Je te souhaite de bon moment ici, sur le site et de comprendre ce que j'ai écrit
I'm sure Leafy understands. Regardless, Welcome and enjoy the show! It's sure to be, ah, interesting to say the least.
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Introductions Archive / Re: Hi <3
2012 Aug 06, 12:40:46
Salutations! So you enjoy Luna? Interesting... I do have to say, I will enjoy seeing you around the forums. May your stay be long and enjoyable.
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Introductions Archive / Re: Ello luv
2012 Aug 06, 12:29:18
Welcome to LoE! May your stay be long and happy.
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Introductions Archive / Re: Bonjour, Hei, Dia duit, and otherwise known as, Hello
2012 Aug 06, 12:18:01
Thank you for your greetings.
Thank you for understanding the need for change Madness. I feel we will cross paths on these forums yet. I look forward to that day.
As for you Shy-Blood, I am comfroted that this community reaches beyond cultures. I am, however, not very fluent in Irish, but I do enjoy the languages feel.
Night Pony, I have seen you much on these forums. I look forward to seeing your oppinions' more.
Ryo, I do enjoy the occasional duel, but I only use the old cards.
Thank you for letting me see the vastness of this community.
Thank you for understanding the need for change Madness. I feel we will cross paths on these forums yet. I look forward to that day.
As for you Shy-Blood, I am comfroted that this community reaches beyond cultures. I am, however, not very fluent in Irish, but I do enjoy the languages feel.
Night Pony, I have seen you much on these forums. I look forward to seeing your oppinions' more.
Ryo, I do enjoy the occasional duel, but I only use the old cards.
Thank you for letting me see the vastness of this community.
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Introductions Archive / Bonjour, Hei, Dia duit, and otherwise known as, Hello
2012 Aug 06, 10:45:41
Hello! I am (semi) new to LoE. I do, however believe that introductions are in order!
I am old enough to have a brain and young enough to use it.
I read far more than is considerd the norm, but I don't consider myself a book conisure by any strech of the imagination.
I enjoy watching how things unfold almost as much as changing them myself.
I may not say much, but I always weigh what I could say before I say it.
I love Old English, and am quite fluent.
I do hope to see you around, err, so to speak.
I am old enough to have a brain and young enough to use it.
I read far more than is considerd the norm, but I don't consider myself a book conisure by any strech of the imagination.
I enjoy watching how things unfold almost as much as changing them myself.
I may not say much, but I always weigh what I could say before I say it.
I love Old English, and am quite fluent.
I do hope to see you around, err, so to speak.
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Original Characters / Re: Eclipse's Oc
2012 Aug 06, 10:13:17
Sorry, didn't realize that there were semi-real standard posting regulations, err I think. I tried to correct it. Hope you like it.
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Canterlot Archives / Re: The Silverdale Saga (Sign-up and OOC)
2012 Jul 24, 19:58:33
Oh, sorry. I didn't know that, umm... Sorry And thank you! I will try make a better OC next time. Thank you for the review though.
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Canterlot Archives / Re: The Silverdale Saga (Sign-up and OOC)
2012 Jul 24, 16:19:11
Ok... Took me about a day and a half to build the courage to write this. I haven't really worked on a RP, or been in one before. So sorry if the application is faulty!
Name: Eclipse
Gender: Male (colt, stallion, it's all personal preference to me)
Age: 18
Race: Pegasus
Appearance: Eclipse has a lighter grey coat, somewhere between charcoal and ash. Semi-long to long mane, midnight blue, with a very unkempt and old, dirty look to it, no matter how clean it may be. Same for the tail, though the hair becomes more detached from the central mass of hair at the end. Soft, yellow green eyes, almost perpetually with a confused or sorry look upon them. More on the slight side of a medium build.
Special talent: Making strange, almost chilling songs or paintings.
Cutiemark: A full moon, obscured by a cloud.
Additional skills: Listening, and carving.
Occupation: Songwriter and traveler.
Strengths: Kind, Caring, Wise, Quiet, and Loyal.
Weaknesses: Slow at accepting others, Very withdrawn, Scatterbrained, Not terribly Strong
Bio:
Inventory-
Tools-
Saddlebags-
Quill
Scrolls with songs
Flute
Personal Effects
None to speak of
Additional information: Good with Plants
Include Link http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=3747.0
If your done accepting people, sorry to bother you
Name: Eclipse
Gender: Male (colt, stallion, it's all personal preference to me)
Age: 18
Race: Pegasus
Appearance: Eclipse has a lighter grey coat, somewhere between charcoal and ash. Semi-long to long mane, midnight blue, with a very unkempt and old, dirty look to it, no matter how clean it may be. Same for the tail, though the hair becomes more detached from the central mass of hair at the end. Soft, yellow green eyes, almost perpetually with a confused or sorry look upon them. More on the slight side of a medium build.
Special talent: Making strange, almost chilling songs or paintings.
Cutiemark: A full moon, obscured by a cloud.
Additional skills: Listening, and carving.
Occupation: Songwriter and traveler.
Strengths: Kind, Caring, Wise, Quiet, and Loyal.
Weaknesses: Slow at accepting others, Very withdrawn, Scatterbrained, Not terribly Strong
Bio:
Spoiler: show
Inventory-
Tools-
Saddlebags-
Quill
Scrolls with songs
Flute
Personal Effects
None to speak of
Additional information: Good with Plants
Include Link http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=3747.0
If your done accepting people, sorry to bother you
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Original Characters / Eclipse's Oc
2012 Jul 24, 12:22:01
I'm trying to work on making another OC, Preferably less dismal this time.
Unfortunantly, I have no idea for what.
Name: Eclipse
Gender: Male (colt, stallion, it's all personal preference to me)
Age: 18
Race: Pegasus
Appearance: Eclipse has a lighter grey coat, somewhere between charcoal and ash. Semi-long to long mane, midnight blue, with a very unkempt and old, dirty look to it, no matter how clean it may be. Same for the tail, though the hair becomes more detached from the central mass of hair at the end. Soft, yellow green eyes, almost perpetually with a confused or sorry look upon them. More on the slight side of a medium build.
Special talent: Making strange, almost chilling songs or paintings.
Cutiemark: A full moon, obscured by a cloud.
Additional skills: Listening, and carving.
Occupation: Songwriter and traveler.
Strengths: Kind, Caring, Wise, Quiet, and Loyal.
Weaknesses: Slow at accepting others, Very withdrawn, Scatterbrained, Not terribly Strong
Bio:
Music. Soft enchanting music drifting on the night breeze. This was my first memory. I awoke that fateful day with only the memory of a dark night and enchanting melodies flowing through my head. I hadn't a inkling where I was. Desperate to find a place to call home, I tried traveling alone, tried finding where I was from, but when your 7, it was never a very good prospect on your own. I learned to remain very quiet, and to distrust people. The music from that night always stayed with me though. Strange, how the only constant in my life was the very thing that I knew the least about. The world can seem terribly cruel when I was young. Ponies, they always tried to "help me." Help me with what? They never even bothered to ask why I was running. Only the lies of family and new beginnings. How can you begin anew when you know nothing of the old?
When I was 9, I found a forest that behaved, well, differently. I couldn't hear the music that had plagued me since that terrible night. It was here I was determined to stay. I decided to built a hut on the remains of some old ruin, deep in the middle of the wood. Here I stayed and watched and listened and learned the secrets of the forest. The mysteries of the forest enchanted me and always will. I was, well, happy there. It was only later that I found out that my place of happiness and comport was the bane of the same for others. It seems all too fitting looking back now.
Several years after I had finished the hut and knew many secrets of the forest, I was visited by a dark pegasus, but she had a horn too. Confused at the wonder that was before me beheld, I invited her back to the hut, and I spoke to her there. She spoke to me, and she spoke of a old sin of hers that had caused the life I had. What could she mean? Who does she think she is? Prancing up to my hut and saying, I made you to live here? But then she sang that accursed song! It was her! The one that came in the night! I knew that she indeed had driven me to this haven, to escape the music, to try to find my old life and family. I cried, then and there. I don't know how long I was there, crying. I had many times thought of what to do if I found the one who made the music. Now, I knew none of it would be even close to the torture I had. Even this land of silence had been desecrated by her. I had to leave. This, Luna, had taken everything that he held dear. I had overcome this curse of hers, but she came again to plague me! This music, however was insuperable from my identity now, so I dedicated my life to show others the music, so that they might change it for me. Or so that they too may bear my curse, know my pain. To better this, Luna's, music. To better it, so I wouldn't suffer from it any more. I smiled. A name. Eclipse, to overcome his Luna, Mistress of the Moon. I walked away, unknowing that Luna was the only person that could share my suffering. Whispering the song that changed my life.
A few days later, I realized I had gotten my cutie mark. A simple moon and a cloud. Being currently obsessed with the idea that my purpose was to overcome Luna, Priestess of the Night, I believed that this confirmed my purpose was to taint her reputation in nothing else. Only now do I realize the cloud has another purpose, emphasis. Regardless, I went after causing dissonance against Princess Luna with renewed vigor, creating more cacophony and distrust for the Princess, believing that this was my purpose. Oh how I now see the vile creation I helped inspire, this horrid visage that Equestria sees our Princess as.
Shortly thereafter, Luna tracked me down. I was spreading a old and ancient song that would help none, this she knew well. It was there, in my old home she found me. I had come back to write the story of my life in the bark, inner wood and very being of the forest. She made me stay in my old home, to hear her sorrows. She too, had been hearing the song since that fateful night years ago. Years she had spent finding me and trying to help me, to help her escape. She, indeed, had felt my sorrow. I wished I could be angry at her, but I knew that it would do no good. She told me of how the night she took me, she took many others, and few awoke from the sleep they had been put in. Her sister Princess Celsestia was beyond anger when she found out. It took a very long time for their relationship to recover. She too, it seemed had lost family. I- I was beyond words. All I wanted was for her to feel my pain and sorrow. She had, it seemed and for much longer than I had. I told her that I would do all I could to help her, if she would simply promise me this, " Let me have the songs, and don't tell me my past. She was astonished. I had spent the better part of my life trying to escape all that I said I wished to keep. It was part of me now. I did ask her to tell me more of her songs, and to let me remember them. She blessed my mind to hear more than the one song, and I have spent my life since writing them and telling them to the world. I still talk with her every night. Never pony to pony, but I know she hears. I don't know how she hears, but I know she does. I find the world still as distrusting as in my youth, but I find strength to continue on. People still don't trust me, but who can blame them? I spent most all of my life in the Everfree Forest, and everyone knows that that place isn't normal to say the least. Despite their distrust, I still search the world over though. To tell of her songs is what I said I should do. I will follow Luna to the ends of the earth ...Into the Calm and Quiet ...
What do you think?
Unfortunantly, I have no idea for what.
Name: Eclipse
Gender: Male (colt, stallion, it's all personal preference to me)
Age: 18
Race: Pegasus
Appearance: Eclipse has a lighter grey coat, somewhere between charcoal and ash. Semi-long to long mane, midnight blue, with a very unkempt and old, dirty look to it, no matter how clean it may be. Same for the tail, though the hair becomes more detached from the central mass of hair at the end. Soft, yellow green eyes, almost perpetually with a confused or sorry look upon them. More on the slight side of a medium build.
Special talent: Making strange, almost chilling songs or paintings.
Cutiemark: A full moon, obscured by a cloud.
Additional skills: Listening, and carving.
Occupation: Songwriter and traveler.
Strengths: Kind, Caring, Wise, Quiet, and Loyal.
Weaknesses: Slow at accepting others, Very withdrawn, Scatterbrained, Not terribly Strong
Bio:
Music. Soft enchanting music drifting on the night breeze. This was my first memory. I awoke that fateful day with only the memory of a dark night and enchanting melodies flowing through my head. I hadn't a inkling where I was. Desperate to find a place to call home, I tried traveling alone, tried finding where I was from, but when your 7, it was never a very good prospect on your own. I learned to remain very quiet, and to distrust people. The music from that night always stayed with me though. Strange, how the only constant in my life was the very thing that I knew the least about. The world can seem terribly cruel when I was young. Ponies, they always tried to "help me." Help me with what? They never even bothered to ask why I was running. Only the lies of family and new beginnings. How can you begin anew when you know nothing of the old?
When I was 9, I found a forest that behaved, well, differently. I couldn't hear the music that had plagued me since that terrible night. It was here I was determined to stay. I decided to built a hut on the remains of some old ruin, deep in the middle of the wood. Here I stayed and watched and listened and learned the secrets of the forest. The mysteries of the forest enchanted me and always will. I was, well, happy there. It was only later that I found out that my place of happiness and comport was the bane of the same for others. It seems all too fitting looking back now.
Several years after I had finished the hut and knew many secrets of the forest, I was visited by a dark pegasus, but she had a horn too. Confused at the wonder that was before me beheld, I invited her back to the hut, and I spoke to her there. She spoke to me, and she spoke of a old sin of hers that had caused the life I had. What could she mean? Who does she think she is? Prancing up to my hut and saying, I made you to live here? But then she sang that accursed song! It was her! The one that came in the night! I knew that she indeed had driven me to this haven, to escape the music, to try to find my old life and family. I cried, then and there. I don't know how long I was there, crying. I had many times thought of what to do if I found the one who made the music. Now, I knew none of it would be even close to the torture I had. Even this land of silence had been desecrated by her. I had to leave. This, Luna, had taken everything that he held dear. I had overcome this curse of hers, but she came again to plague me! This music, however was insuperable from my identity now, so I dedicated my life to show others the music, so that they might change it for me. Or so that they too may bear my curse, know my pain. To better this, Luna's, music. To better it, so I wouldn't suffer from it any more. I smiled. A name. Eclipse, to overcome his Luna, Mistress of the Moon. I walked away, unknowing that Luna was the only person that could share my suffering. Whispering the song that changed my life.
A few days later, I realized I had gotten my cutie mark. A simple moon and a cloud. Being currently obsessed with the idea that my purpose was to overcome Luna, Priestess of the Night, I believed that this confirmed my purpose was to taint her reputation in nothing else. Only now do I realize the cloud has another purpose, emphasis. Regardless, I went after causing dissonance against Princess Luna with renewed vigor, creating more cacophony and distrust for the Princess, believing that this was my purpose. Oh how I now see the vile creation I helped inspire, this horrid visage that Equestria sees our Princess as.
Shortly thereafter, Luna tracked me down. I was spreading a old and ancient song that would help none, this she knew well. It was there, in my old home she found me. I had come back to write the story of my life in the bark, inner wood and very being of the forest. She made me stay in my old home, to hear her sorrows. She too, had been hearing the song since that fateful night years ago. Years she had spent finding me and trying to help me, to help her escape. She, indeed, had felt my sorrow. I wished I could be angry at her, but I knew that it would do no good. She told me of how the night she took me, she took many others, and few awoke from the sleep they had been put in. Her sister Princess Celsestia was beyond anger when she found out. It took a very long time for their relationship to recover. She too, it seemed had lost family. I- I was beyond words. All I wanted was for her to feel my pain and sorrow. She had, it seemed and for much longer than I had. I told her that I would do all I could to help her, if she would simply promise me this, " Let me have the songs, and don't tell me my past. She was astonished. I had spent the better part of my life trying to escape all that I said I wished to keep. It was part of me now. I did ask her to tell me more of her songs, and to let me remember them. She blessed my mind to hear more than the one song, and I have spent my life since writing them and telling them to the world. I still talk with her every night. Never pony to pony, but I know she hears. I don't know how she hears, but I know she does. I find the world still as distrusting as in my youth, but I find strength to continue on. People still don't trust me, but who can blame them? I spent most all of my life in the Everfree Forest, and everyone knows that that place isn't normal to say the least. Despite their distrust, I still search the world over though. To tell of her songs is what I said I should do. I will follow Luna to the ends of the earth ...Into the Calm and Quiet ...
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