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Quote from: Naura on 2014 Aug 28, 01:00:06Quote from: Reginald27 on 2014 Aug 25, 22:47:56Quote from: Naura on 2014 Aug 24, 07:06:48
Anything that can be improved with Naura? (My main oc)
when she comes buy these homeless lost filly's she takes them in and it just expands her family,
I just want to know if its a typo or not, but when you say lost filly's, Bright Grace has a family, but when they are gone on long buisness trips, Naura is her foalsitter.
Quote from: GlassMirror on 2014 Aug 25, 23:33:23
what do you say of my OC Relic?
link in my signature
Quote from: krono Angelo whooves on 2014 Aug 26, 00:52:11
ok well I know mine seems well a bit bland and more of a oc intro I need more background into it here it is the link that is http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=13168.0
Quote from: Naura on 2014 Aug 24, 07:06:48
Anything that can be improved with Naura? (My main oc)
Quote from: Maplewood on 2014 Aug 25, 20:26:36
Thanks for the tips (btw if you haved guessed that cutie mark is for him) well now that you think about i was going to write that a mare on which he had a crush and was planning on asking out on a date did die but i was afraid people would think that was to clicha (hope i spelt that right) so i didnt write it in.
Quote from: hazardtime on 2014 Aug 25, 22:12:20
That also brings up a good question I wanted to ask - What is yours/everyone's opinions on bringing a character into an RP who is single and shipping them later with another one of your OCs?
In my opinion, I really don't like doing this unless it is absolutely necessary, such as with my noble OC, Pure Duty. He obviously couldn't marry just anypony, and considering how no one I know really has another noble character, I had no choice but to write in a love interest.
However, as for OCs who do not have such limitations, I feel that it is negating a good amount of character development. This is because it either goes several ways - In one case, you have the "doll house" scenario as I call it, where both characters were literally made for each other, the romance goes without a hitch, and they all live happily ever after. The other case can only occur when the RPer actually thinks over the OCs and gives them realistic flaws and interests that clash with each other.
As I said in my last post, I have never gone out on a date before. As such, I'm really paranoid about portraying romantic relationships incorrectly, either making them unrealistically sappy or unintentionally loveless.
Quote from: Maplewood on 2014 Aug 24, 02:31:18
I wondr if my oc is in need of improving
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I am very bad with personalities. Mostly because my own personality is a mess. ^^''
Well, as you can imagine, she looked quite unusual. There are no likes of her in Equestria and she was often picked on by bullies. And whenever she visited Canterlot with her brother, she was looked down upon by nobles. She developed a very fiery character at a time, often getting into fights with bullies. Her scales defended her from rocks and her fire struck fear into kids of nearby settlements. It was getting worse until one incident where she ran away from home and was attacked by a pack of timber wolves in the Everfree. With no restraint she used her magic, accidently setting this part of forest aflame. Larger pack of timber wolves was scared and ran in direction of the farm. Luckly, her brother was there and had defended the farm. And Scale who arrived after that helped chase off the rest of the wolves. From that day onward she tried her best to show more restraint. She still more of a hothead, but applies a lot of effort to restrain herself. She also avoids cities unless there is a need to visit them. Like making a delivery if her parents can't do it. She also visits Canterlot from time to time. Thanks to her brother, Royal Guards act kindly towards her. Nobles still give her glares, but she ignores them.
Hm...kinda like that.
Quote from: -ReiMar- on 2014 Aug 23, 15:52:18
Well, ya already looked through my character, but still I'd like to hear any thoughts on what I might improve) ^^