Character Critique Thread

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Alassë

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Jul 10, 19:25:48
@ssumppg
There's really nothing for me to critique, unless you want me to tell you that I like her personality. You might want to tell us a bit about her history, especially considering how old she is. I'm assuming it has something to due with her ability with time travel, perhaps? I'd love to hear more about this "time" aspect in her name.
Alrighty, I'll get her back-story tidied up and posted. :)

Kittilot

Could you do Bubblegum Blitz? She has a short bio, so it shouldn't be too hard.

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=8281.msg643065#msg643065
Shave and a haircut..

Shadechaser

This is my character. Any thing don't like or want to know just say.
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=8276.0
Your Brony Personality Test reveals...
Twilight Sparkle?!
Judge not, unless thee be judged first in the kingdom of God.
Mathew 7 1:3

Bane Emural

Can you do mine? This is the first time I have made a bio of my OC.

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=8177.0
As Time passes by, so does the winds of the Storms, the water of the Seas, and the rock of the Earth. As all things go, from Life to Death, the sands of Time passes by. ~ Bane Emural

Ebony Inkwell

I'd love it if you could critique mine! :)

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=8306.msg644146#msg644146

He's not meant to be anything special - just an average 'lil pony.
Hey, everypony! I'm Ebony Inkwell, but you can call me Inkwell!


PrincessMorningStar

well I have added more onto it, hopefully its a bit better. Might be a little corny though, I was up at like 12 am writing and editing, so lets see what you other ponies think.

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=8287.msg643244#msg643244
A Princess does not only rule, but she also serves the Ponies of Equestria.


Alassë

Quote from: ssumppg on 2013 Jul 11, 00:08:40
Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Jul 10, 19:25:48
@ssumppg
There's really nothing for me to critique, unless you want me to tell you that I like her personality. You might want to tell us a bit about her history, especially considering how old she is. I'm assuming it has something to due with her ability with time travel, perhaps? I'd love to hear more about this "time" aspect in her name.
Alrighty, I'll get her back-story tidied up and posted. :)
Back-story added! :D http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=7962.0 ;   Certain parts of her history are meant to coencide with events in the Doctor Who universe, fyi. :nod:

GoldenTerrabyte

I updated them a little. Can you give me a critique for basically all of them at once. Eventually I'll put together a more solid list of likes and dislikes for each of them.
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Gracie Sky

Gah, this is more requests than I was anticipating! I should've seen this coming with the pre-alpha testing and all.

Okay, I'll be speeding up from casual to not-as-casual-as-casual.

Since most all the requests have provided links, I will give my opinions on those topics, rather than trying to address them all at once here in the same post. The following users I have acknowledged and will critique shortly:

bauccgia0
Kittilot
Shadechaser
Bane Emural
Ebony Inkwell
PrincessMorningStar
ssumppg
Yellowpikmin476

Quite the list, isn't it?
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Shadow Mare

Don't know why I bother but just so curious, want to critique my ocs?

Shadechaser

Could you critique my new OC? Raincrystal
link is in sig.
Your Brony Personality Test reveals...
Twilight Sparkle?!
Judge not, unless thee be judged first in the kingdom of God.
Mathew 7 1:3

0jackie0

I know you'll be busy and probably won't be able to get around to it quickly enough, but I'd like to add my name to the list, if that's not a problem.
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=8458.0

I have four, with a fifth one halfway completed, which I'll post later. There's quite a bit of reading, so if you only pick one, or even none, I'll understand. xDD

Gracie Sky

Jackie, I would like to critic your OCs, but I did request that any links stay within the forums. Not that I'm afraid of following foreign links... well... actually... maybe I am. >.<

I'd feel much better if you would just copy and paste it somewhere for me.
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GoldenTerrabyte

You should be! DeviantArt can be dangerous!
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0jackie0

2013 Jul 20, 22:59:54 #174 Last Edit: 2013 Jul 21, 01:35:38 by 0jackie0
Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Jul 20, 19:06:50


Sorry about that, I had to be that jerk that didn't follow the rules. ^_^; I'm on my phone right now, so I'll jump on my laptop in a bit and type it up. Please don't hate me. > o <


Post Merge

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2013 Jul 20, 19:06:50


There, I fixed it. Once again, sorry about that. Dx

tiny.parcel

Hello again, Gracie~

I have another character that I would love to hear your opinion on.

He also needs a name, and considering how you handled Razz Fangle, I think you're just the mare for the job. <3

byndbored

2013 Jul 29, 23:13:30 #176 Last Edit: 2013 Jul 29, 23:15:06 by byndbored
I want to remake my ocs story again but in order to do so I think I may have to make a world with it's own characters and it own mythos and so on and so forth, should I do it? I have some ideas I could try if so.
Said no to being given a Lucario Pokemon X.
My oc board is in my Signature
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=2268.0

Bane Emural

I remade my OC's background.
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=8177.0

And I am trying to make it a bit secretive about his past.
As Time passes by, so does the winds of the Storms, the water of the Seas, and the rock of the Earth. As all things go, from Life to Death, the sands of Time passes by. ~ Bane Emural

Gracie Sky

@byndbored
That may be the best road, if you want to use your characters as you have them now. Of course, it's a lot of hard work to develop an entirely new world and do it well. It might just be easier to change your characters to be more Equestrian like. It's your choice, however.

@Bane Emural
Uh... I don't see what you changed, honest. Sorry.
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TheCreeper3

Sorry to bother but, you remember my character right, Bad Harmony?
Anyway, you were right, I didn't make much of a story for him and I decided to go by that and create more detail.
I was hoping that if you weren't busy, you could take a look at my OC Harmony/Bad Harmony once more.
The link to the page can be found here-

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=7546.0
I have found both freedom and safety in my madness; the freedom of loneliness and the safety from being understood, for those who understand us enslave something in us
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