Original Character Creation

[Mr.Darkling]

OH you should do mine... WARNING it has A LOT of information...
(post was WAY to long so i shortened it ^3^)

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=100.0

This will be interesting.

[The Wandering Magus]

OH you should do mine... WARNING it has A LOT of information...
(post was WAY to long so i shortened it ^3^)

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=100.0

This will be interesting.

*sigh* here comes the rant...

[bananamustang]

OH you should do mine... WARNING it has A LOT of information...
(post was WAY to long so i shortened it ^3^)

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=100.0

Ok.. Um.. well I read all of it.

I cannot go into each section because it is easier to keep things as a full over view.

For RP and in some or all cases of a fan fic. This is a perfect example of a God Mod/ OP character...

Additionally this is a character/being that doesn't fit in with the world of MLP:FiM. Meaning that he is too grimdark/gothic/or what ever else can go along those lines.

In the RP rooms I have been in they have strict rules about these things you have done with the character. The picture looks nice, but he isn't something that would belong in the world of MLP.

He has no direct special talent.

And if he is to be something along the lines of, let's say the Changling Queen, then he needs to have some weaknesses and ability to be defeated.

The only way's to improve this character is to make him a villain and work him to have a noticeable weakness with out giving it away. Otherwise as a good guy he would need to change completely and possibly just be removed.

Now I know of the way some view you so I will say this first. The reviews I give are my professional opinions. I offer this help on my own accord to ensure that I can still remain creative so that when I return to the game full time I can write the quests that you all would want to play.

Do not take what I say personal because those comments will be ignored.

[Ozzy]

OH you should do mine... WARNING it has A LOT of information...
(post was WAY to long so i shortened it ^3^)

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=100.0

Ok.. Um.. well I read all of it.

I cannot go into each section because it is easier to keep things as a full over view.

For RP and in some or all cases of a fan fic. This is a perfect example of a God Mod/ OP character...

Additionally this is a character/being that doesn't fit in with the world of MLP:FiM. Meaning that he is too grimdark/gothic/or what ever else can go along those lines.

In the RP rooms I have been in they have strict rules about these things you have done with the character. The picture looks nice, but he isn't something that would belong in the world of MLP.

He has no direct special talent.

And if he is to be something along the lines of, let's say the Changling Queen, then he needs to have some weaknesses and ability to be defeated.

The only way's to improve this character is to make him a villain and work him to have a noticeable weakness with out giving it away. Otherwise as a good guy he would need to change completely and possibly just be removed.

Now I know of the way some view you so I will say this first. The reviews I give are my professional opinions. I offer this help on my own accord to ensure that I can still remain creative so that when I return to the game full time I can write the quests that you all would want to play.

Do not take what I say personal because those comments will be ignored.

[Mr.Darkling]

OH you should do mine... WARNING it has A LOT of information...
(post was WAY to long so i shortened it ^3^)

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=100.0

Ok.. Um.. well I read all of it.

I cannot go into each section because it is easier to keep things as a full over view.

For RP and in some or all cases of a fan fic. This is a perfect example of a God Mod/ OP character...

Additionally this is a character/being that doesn't fit in with the world of MLP:FiM. Meaning that he is too grimdark/gothic/or what ever else can go along those lines.

In the RP rooms I have been in they have strict rules about these things you have done with the character. The picture looks nice, but he isn't something that would belong in the world of MLP.

He has no direct special talent.

And if he is to be something along the lines of, let's say the Changling Queen, then he needs to have some weaknesses and ability to be defeated.

The only way's to improve this character is to make him a villain and work him to have a noticeable weakness with out giving it away. Otherwise as a good guy he would need to change completely and possibly just be removed.

Now I know of the way some view you so I will say this first. The reviews I give are my professional opinions. I offer this help on my own accord to ensure that I can still remain creative so that when I return to the game full time I can write the quests that you all would want to play.

Do not take what I say personal because those comments will be ignored.

*videosnip*

I applaud your applause. 

[Equestrian]

OH you should do mine... WARNING it has A LOT of information...
(post was WAY to long so i shortened it ^3^)

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=100.0

Ok.. Um.. well I read all of it.

I cannot go into each section because it is easier to keep things as a full over view.

For RP and in some or all cases of a fan fic. This is a perfect example of a God Mod/ OP character...

Additionally this is a character/being that doesn't fit in with the world of MLP:FiM. Meaning that he is too grimdark/gothic/or what ever else can go along those lines.

In the RP rooms I have been in they have strict rules about these things you have done with the character. The picture looks nice, but he isn't something that would belong in the world of MLP.

He has no direct special talent.

And if he is to be something along the lines of, let's say the Changling Queen, then he needs to have some weaknesses and ability to be defeated.

The only way's to improve this character is to make him a villain and work him to have a noticeable weakness with out giving it away. Otherwise as a good guy he would need to change completely and possibly just be removed.

Now I know of the way some view you so I will say this first. The reviews I give are my professional opinions. I offer this help on my own accord to ensure that I can still remain creative so that when I return to the game full time I can write the quests that you all would want to play.

Do not take what I say personal because those comments will be ignored.

I knew you were going to say that
With this professional opinion, I have successfully destroyed a God Mod in my RPs YEAH!!
That means my RPs are OP I will not stop bragging about this until ponies joins my RP (and I'll either get my floors out of retirement or just remake them )

Do me! Do me! I've only "finished" the first two, but the first one is the only one that has real information. I'm trying to get the second one through RP story.
(They also have no place in MLP, I guess)
http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=1936

[The Wandering Magus]

What do you think of my GM characters? (not the last entry, that's for countering oc's like Madness)

That is, Fancy and Bloodblade?  Yes, Fancy is from the show, but he is a GM character from Sweet and Elite, which was set in his house anyways.

[Lord of Madness]

loved your review ^3^ you seemed thou to ignore his weaknesses, they are in there thou A BLU BLU BLU I LIKE TO YELL PUMPKIN PIE 

if a mare comes to close to him, he becomes jelly

If a mare OR stallion mothers him, he becomes their slave and thinks of them as his adoptive mother

if he uses to much energy up, he cant even walk... he uses his magic to stand as his body is to physically weak to stand

without his shield, like if you use a spell that counters shileds, he would fall down to weak to stand, the act of falling off his own feet would break all his bones... and kill him

he very often hurts himself, which uses up his own magic

his body is so frail that without his shield, of you were to... lets say... high five him... in his face... it would fracture and kill him

thats about 6 weaknesses about 4 of them lethal to him
P.S. why all the clapping? and darkling your like... 10 times more powerful than madness from what I've heard about you   Ozzy thou i expected to clap sense he has always disliked me

[Mr.Darkling]

P.S. why all the clapping? and darkling your like... 10 times more powerful than madness from what I've heard about you   Ozzy thou i expected to clap sense he has always disliked me

Wow talk about a jump to conclusions fella.
The clapping is of no personal attack; no one can resist posting such a classic image 
and Darkling 10 times more powerful? Not even the old, godmodding and mary sue Darkling, which I am aware is the one you know the most, is as powerful as that.
That certain IRC chatroom has been dead for quite a long time and Darkling has re-designed over time; he's simply been reduced to my ponysa nowadays. Only strength he has now is the smog thing and that's about it. I find making an actual character based on powers is a bit boring, compared to making an actual character, and being he is my ponysa I can't really change him anything beyond myself.

Anyway, chill your beans, I mean no offense 

[Cutiebone]

P.S. why all the clapping? and darkling your like... 10 times more powerful than madness from what I've heard about you   Ozzy thou i expected to clap sense he has always disliked me

Wow talk about a jump to conclusions fella.
The clapping is of no personal attack; no one can resist posting such a classic image 
and Darkling 10 times more powerful? Not even the old, godmodding and mary sue Darkling, which I am aware is the one you know the most, is as powerful as that.
That certain IRC chatroom has been dead for quite a long time and Darkling has re-designed over time; he's simply been reduced to my ponysa nowadays. Only strength he has now is the smog thing and that's about it. I find making an actual character based on powers is a bit boring, compared to making an actual character, and being he is my ponysa I can't really change him anything beyond myself.

Anyway, chill your beans, I mean no offense 

Chill your beans?

[Lord of Madness]

but i dont like to eat cold beans 

[Cutiebone]

ikr? That's nasty!

[bananamustang]

loved your review ^3^ you seemed thou to ignore his weaknesses, they are in there thou A BLU BLU BLU I LIKE TO YELL PUMPKIN PIE 

if a mare comes to close to him, he becomes jelly

If a mare OR stallion mothers him, he becomes their slave and thinks of them as his adoptive mother

if he uses to much energy up, he cant even walk... he uses his magic to stand as his body is to physically weak to stand

without his shield, like if you use a spell that counters shileds, he would fall down to weak to stand, the act of falling off his own feet would break all his bones... and kill him

he very often hurts himself, which uses up his own magic

his body is so frail that without his shield, of you were to... lets say... high five him... in his face... it would fracture and kill him

thats about 6 weaknesses about 4 of them lethal to him
P.S. why all the clapping? and darkling your like... 10 times more powerful than madness from what I've heard about you   Ozzy thou i expected to clap sense he has always disliked me

You are missing the point I mean when using weakness. Nightmare Moon - Friendship, Discord - Friendship, Changling Queen - True love.

You are talking about mental and physical conditions that would hurt him. I am talking about defeat in a battle of good and evil.

[Ozzy]

P.S. why all the clapping? and darkling your like... 10 times more powerful than madness from what I've heard about you   Ozzy thou i expected to clap sense he has always disliked me

Wow talk about a jump to conclusions fella.
The clapping is of no personal attack; no one can resist posting such a classic image 
and Darkling 10 times more powerful? Not even the old, godmodding and mary sue Darkling, which I am aware is the one you know the most, is as powerful as that.
That certain IRC chatroom has been dead for quite a long time and Darkling has re-designed over time; he's simply been reduced to my ponysa nowadays. Only strength he has now is the smog thing and that's about it. I find making an actual character based on powers is a bit boring, compared to making an actual character, and being he is my ponysa I can't really change him anything beyond myself.

Anyway, chill your beans, I mean no offense 

Chill your beans?

It's British for calm down/chill out/relax

Pardon my Off Topic Post

[Equestrian]

It's British for calm down/chill out/relax

Pardon my Off Topic Post

mmm beans
By Celestia! They're cold

[~Durpy]

loved your review ^3^ you seemed thou to ignore his weaknesses, they are in there thou A BLU BLU BLU I LIKE TO YELL PUMPKIN PIE 

if a mare comes to close to him, he becomes jelly

If a mare OR stallion mothers him, he becomes their slave and thinks of them as his adoptive mother

if he uses to much energy up, he cant even walk... he uses his magic to stand as his body is to physically weak to stand

without his shield, like if you use a spell that counters shileds, he would fall down to weak to stand, the act of falling off his own feet would break all his bones... and kill him

he very often hurts himself, which uses up his own magic

his body is so frail that without his shield, of you were to... lets say... high five him... in his face... it would fracture and kill him

thats about 6 weaknesses about 4 of them lethal to him
P.S. why all the clapping? and darkling your like... 10 times more powerful than madness from what I've heard about you   Ozzy thou i expected to clap sense he has always disliked me

You are missing the point I mean when using weakness. Nightmare Moon - Friendship, Discord - Friendship, Changling Queen - True love.

You are talking about mental and physical conditions that would hurt him. I am talking about defeat in a battle of good and evil.

Which is also a reason why I said Madness is OP. No matter how fragile he might seem.

[Lord of Madness]

well i did say being mothered... being cared for... Madness thinks everything secretly hates him, like The Well, so when he is shown affection or is mothered he becomes very confused = so love/kindness/caring = defeating him, and all 3 are very easy to do, ether way im revising him... he will have the coldest... darkest.. most horrible background ever... you will cry for him when you read it....  more or less m taking entity out of the picture, and im making sure he is great at deception, he will never truly trust anypony ether, but he will still be pretty random from time to time, not all the time now, BUT time to time,

[Cutiebone]

P.S. why all the clapping? and darkling your like... 10 times more powerful than madness from what I've heard about you   Ozzy thou i expected to clap sense he has always disliked me

Wow talk about a jump to conclusions fella.
The clapping is of no personal attack; no one can resist posting such a classic image 
and Darkling 10 times more powerful? Not even the old, godmodding and mary sue Darkling, which I am aware is the one you know the most, is as powerful as that.
That certain IRC chatroom has been dead for quite a long time and Darkling has re-designed over time; he's simply been reduced to my ponysa nowadays. Only strength he has now is the smog thing and that's about it. I find making an actual character based on powers is a bit boring, compared to making an actual character, and being he is my ponysa I can't really change him anything beyond myself.

Anyway, chill your beans, I mean no offense 

Chill your beans?

It's British for calm down/chill out/relax

Pardon my Off Topic Post

Oh I just love you british ponies!

[The Wandering Magus]

well i did say being mothered... being cared for... Madness thinks everything secretly hates him, like The Well, so when he is shown affection or is mothered he becomes very confused = so love/kindness/caring = defeating him, and all 3 are very easy to do, ether way im revising him... he will have the coldest... darkest.. most horrible background ever... you will cry for him when you read it....  more or less m taking entity out of the picture, and im making sure he is great at deception, he will never truly trust anypony ether, but he will still be pretty random from time to time, not all the time now, BUT time to time,

essentially, focusing more on psychological weaknesses and less on physical strengths will make it much less OP-looking I think.

[Morning Glory]

I'd love to have mine critiqued. Sorry they're so long.

http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=470.0