Atala, the lost city

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Naura

"Oh, okay" Naura says and goes back to the table and waits for the stallion.
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LunarDusk

The youngling slowly opened his eyes then rose his head to gaze at the medical AI silently.  "......."
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Maplewood

After grabbing a ration something that maple had grown to like i went and sat down "ah rations my favourite,now what were you sking agian?" As i sked i pulled up the armory list and started to review it

Coffee Rush

(( I think I'll get back into the hang of things... ))
Panacea was lounging around the medical area, occasionally looking over the book that the AI had given her. Even though it was a foals book, she didn't understand what the words meant, but could make out the pictures in it. She did recall mentions of a library, but didn't give much thought to it.
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Maplewood

I look up "yo naura you ok why are you staring at me like that" i ask eating some more of my ration i sart to wave my hoof infront of  try to get a reaction

Naura

"Nothing, I would need somepony to show me around, maybe give me a little room where I can sleep or something..." She asks and burps, quickly pushing her hoof in her mouth.
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Maplewood

I chuckle "sure let me just finish eating" after i was done my ration i got up "well lets go find you a place to call home"

Omega_Khaos

Cosmic says over the coms, "Maplewood, could you please come to the section F Control room? Please bring anypony with you as well. I kind of need your help with something."

Maplewood

Radio back "sure can do iv got a pony right here" i look at naura "well of to F section you ready for a cool tour?" I say to naura while bringing up my hologram verison of the map

Naura

"Oh, so your Maple? Well, I'm ready!" She says and a smile comes up on her face.
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Maplewood

I smile to "alright lets go" as we are  walking down the hallway "so why did you sound suprised when you learned my name was maple,not trying to be rude?"

Naura

"Hmm, I just thought I had heard it before...." Naura replies with a thinking face.
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Maplewood

I shrug "its ok just wanted to now" we pass the medical bay "well for starters theres the medical bay were you can find all your medical needs and theres the veiwing deck want to check it out?"

Naura

"Sure" Naura says and grins.
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Maplewood

We walk into a large glass dome "wow just look at it its just so beautiful" i walk around being amazed by the site

Naura

"Wow, this is really somthing!" Naura says and gazes at all the things.
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Maplewood

"Well we better get to cosmic before he goes blastic" and with that i exit the room and wait outside inthe hallway

Naura

"Okay" Naura says without letting her eyes leave the amazing things in the room.
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Snowcraft_Pony

((Yeah, when writing you should always use third person and the past tense.))

Grizzly

2014 Jun 15, 03:59:09 #479 Last Edit: 2014 Jun 15, 08:45:10 by Grizzly
((not always, first person and present tense also work, but you absolutely can not mix them. Either write in 3rd past of 1st present, never mix them [as in, you start with using 3rd past, then use 1st present, then return to 3rd past ect]))

Post Merge

Several hours of smooth sailing go by and Blue, Saiko, Starlight and her group set a shore on a rocky beach of the landmass. "I's good to get out of the city every now and then..." Blue sighed in relief.
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