My (far too many) OCs (Looking for opinions, please!)

[Renatan]

I'm going to post all my OCs here. It will be updated from time to time with new info/characters. I apologize for the lack of images; this will be fixed as soon as possible!

Click Clack

Name: Click Clack
Age: 14
Gender: mare
Race: earth pony
Cutie Mark: 3 marbles
Family: none known
Talent: classic marble games
Likes: playing, sunny days, friends, competitions
Dislikes: bullies, rain, ponies who brag
Enemies: none for the most part
Friends: Pinkie Pie, Twilight, a few other young mares all around town
Fears: Darkness, lightning, bugs
Bio: She was born in Ponyville and grew up with many friends. She was very lively and outgoing, and soon was introduced to a few different games by her friend. She soon discovered a love for marbles. Their designs, shape, and the games possible fascinated her. She woke a few weeks later to discover her cutie mark had appeared, and has stayed in Ponyville to play games and compete with others to see who's the champ!
Born in: Ponyville
Lives in: Ponyville
Theme: none yet

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Dark Grave

Name: Dark Grave
Age: 19
Gender: mare
Race: pegasus
Cutie Mark: a pony skull
Family: none known
Talent: dark magic/necromancy
Likes: solitude, nature, any weather, night
Dislikes: lots of noise, most fillies/colts, bright lights, Celestia or anyone who could interfere with her talent
Enemies: None officially addressed
Friends: Although she never says it, she considers her apprentice, Loathe Flash, her friend
Fears: Death, some white magic, powerful ponies, dogs, flying/heights/standing on clouds
Bio: Dark Grave was born somewhere uncharted to most ponies, and grew up being taught by her parents. She had no siblings, so she had lots of attention. Her mother was always willing to help her, meanwhile her father worked to keep them alive by gathering food and protecting them from any wild animals, such as Timberwolves. One thing about them, though, was that her father was actually a unicorn; her mother was a Pegasus. Her father had taken her into the woods one day to teach her to gather food that was safe to eat, and to show her what not to eat. While they were there a seemingly mad pony confronted them, demanding them to hand over whatever they had. Of course, this was nothing, for they hadn't even gathered anything yet. This angered the pony, causing him to attack. Dark's father acted quickly, doing the first thing he though of: fight back.
Using his magic he tore a tree limb off, swinging it at the pony.
A sharp crack echoed around the area as the pony slumped over, blood trickling from his head. Dark watched as her father chucked the body away with levitation. He quickly hustled her back to the cottage and told her to stay there for the rest of the day with her mother. But Dark realized something from that experience: she would do anything to use magic. The limits to it were endless. She thought of Celestia and Luna, how they could move the sun and moon! Amazing! She was a Pegasus, but she would still try to learn. In her own way, of course.
Skipping the more grim details, Dark learned magic through using old black magic, long forgotten. She changed things about them so that they could be done with blood, flesh, and bone. No horn needed! To this day she is still practicing, raising her powers. She avoids society as much as possible so as to avoid questions or suspicion. After all, she takes lone, sometimes lost foals and kills them, or cuts off just what she needs and lets them go so long as they don't tell anyone about her.
If they don't bleed to death before they reach anyone first, that is.
(How she met Loathe Flash will be described in Loathe's bio)
Born in: Unknown
Lives in: A forest some ways away from Ponyville
Theme: none yet

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Crooked Path
Name: Crooked Path
Age: 20
Gender: mare
Race: earth pony
Cutie Mark: 1 red, 1 black, and 1 white arrow twisting and overlapping one-another.
Family: Orphaned; adopted by royalty
Talent: leading ponies to their deaths
Likes: not much of anything, really. The only thing she enjoys really is causing ponies suffering because she feels like it's revenge.
Dislikes: busy places, bright lights, the princesses, nearly every pony she meets
Enemies: Celestia, Luna, Cadence,
Friends: none
Fears: Death, being found out about
Bio: She was a young orphaned filly when she was discovered by Celestia and taken back to the castle. She was raised by the princesses and was mostly happy, but soon realized that some ponies had distaste towards her due to the fact that she lived amongst royalty but was not an alicorn herself. Soon she took up misleading ponies. If anyone ever asked her for help regarding directions she would give them incorrect ones to bother them. Soon ponies became aware of this and their distrust only grew. Upon this, she led fillies and colts into dangerous areas. Thorns, holes, caves, rivers, anything that could harm them. During one of these, a tiny filly ended up dying. Crooked didn't actually mean for it to happen; she had become distracted briefly and wasn't watching the filly. They were near a river, and she had fallen in when Crooked wasn't paying attention. She of course heard the splash, but the water was deep and murky and she was unable to locate the filly, who had gone under the surface, until much later. When she had managed to drag her out, there was little she could do. There was no time to get help, and she knew nothing that could help, thus the death of the filly was determined. Crooked knew she could not return to the castle, so she ran.

The mother of the filly later found her dead daughter. The Canterlot ponies knew it was the work of Crooked Path. Nopony else guided foals near areas such as that one, but no one thought she would ever kill an innocent. They would never know it was all an accident. When Crooked had left the scene, she did not take notice of the change to her pattern; only that to her mind and heart. She was filled with hate, and blamed the others for this. After all, it was they who had deemed her as not worthy of the royal name. While Princess Crooked Path did not sound very pleasant, Princess Silver Song did. Silver Song was what she was originally named, before her cutie mark appeared and she changed her own name. To this day she preys on the lost, being their guide to the grave.
Born in: unknown
Lives in: almost always traveling; hiding most of the time in caves or forests.
Theme: none yet

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Dainty Lights

Name: Dainty Lights
Age: 9
Gender: filly
Race: earth pony
Cutie Mark: I'm still designing it 
Family: unkown
Talent: lighting the street lanterns around Ponyville
Likes: fire, lamps, stars, night, humming, singing, open areas
Dislikes: busy places, swimming, storms, being forced to be around other ponies
Enemies: none by name
Friends: none by name (but she tends to get along with others well enough... by day)
Fears: Foalnappers, forests, predatory animals
Bio: I haven't written a full story yet... But this is actually a horror character 
Born in: Unknown
Lives in: Assumed to live in Ponyville
Theme: She has one, but it isn't being posted quite yet

Spring Healing

Name: Spring Healing
Age: Unknown, but is the eldest of the four sisters.
Gender: filly
Race: earth pony
Cutie Mark: a bloomed orange flower
Family: Sisters with Summer Blaze, Autumn Streak and Winter Massacre
Talent: Bringing forth the season of Spring
Likes: flowers, nature, plants, animals, warm days, the wind
Dislikes: natural disasters, ponymade disasters, death of creatures, winter (as in the cold and death it brings.)
Enemies: none, but doesn't always get along well with Winter Massacre
Friends: Her sisters, and the gods of the weather
Fears: Hurricanes, insanity, deep pits, blizzards
Bio: She is the goddess of Spring, and the eldest of the 4 Season Sisters. She controls the life of new creatures, and beginning the first stages of Spring.
Born in: Nowhere.
Lives in: Anywhere. Can travel the world freely.
Theme: None yet

Summer Blaze

Name: Summer Blaze
Age: Unknown, the second eldest sister.
Gender: filly
Race: unicorn
Cutie Mark: a sun
Family: Sisters with Spring Healing, Autumn Streak and Winter Massacre
Talent: Bringing forth summer
Likes: Heat, playing, sunny days, being outside
Dislikes: rain, mud, sunburns (That's right. Pony sunburns.  )
Enemies: None
Friends: Her sisters, and she likes Celestia.
Fears: Sea Monsters, even older gods than the Season Sisters, landslides
Bio: She is the goddess of Summer, and the 2nd eldest of the 4 Season Sisters. She controls the heat of the sun (although Celestia raises it, Summer has more control over the world), the effects of Summer's heat (as in the season. Not the pony here), and slowly changing Spring Healing's weather, life forms, and nature appearance into that of Summer's.
Born in: Nowhere
Lives in: Anywhere she wishes.
Theme: none yet

Autumn Streak

Name: Autumn Streak
Age: Unknown, the 3rd eldest sister.
Gender: filly
Race: pegasus
Cutie Mark: autumn leaves
Family: Sisters with Spring Healing, Summer Blaze and Winter Massacre
Talent: Bringing forth Autumn.
Likes: colours, trees, leaves, flying, relaxing, rivers, beautiful things 
Dislikes: shades, dirt, heat, loud things, darkness
Enemies: None
Friends: Her sisters mostly, but can get along with many ponies.
Fears: Tornadoes, illness, war
Bio: She is the goddess of Autumn, and the 3nd eldest of the 4 Season Sisters. She controls starting up Fall, which means she is responsible for changing the leaves colours and allowing them to fall off the trees. She also changes the winds, but not much. Her powers when it comes to the wind mostly just make it easier for the weather god of the wind to create it. She is also in charge of creating a change to the temperature, dropping it slightly.
Born in: Nowhere
Lives in: Anywhere she wants.
Theme: none yet

Winter Massacre

Name: Winter Massacre
Age: Unknown, is the youngest sister.
Gender: filly
Race: unicorn
Cutie Mark: shards of ice
Family: Sisters with Spring Healing, Summer Blaze and Autumn Streak.
Talent: Bringing forth winter
Likes: snow, being alone, clouds, ice, running around
Dislikes: extreme heat (she stays in another realm during all of Summer and most of Spring), bright light, the desert,
Enemies: none
Friends: Her sisters, but Spring sometimes fights with her because she "kills off life and brings disease"
Fears: When Summer comes, drowning, being stuck in a hot area
Bio: She is the goddess of Winter, and the youngest of the 4 Season Sisters. Although she could be mistaken easily for the cutest, most innocent of the 4 season goddesses, she is also the most deadly. Although the gods of weather are mostly in charge of how the weather ends up, Winter Massacre can actually create her own weather through her magic. She can create blizzards, make it snow, create large ice bodies, and draw in clouds. When Autumn ends and Winter is to set in,  Winter Massacre has the ability to freeze over water, bring in a heavy blanket of snow and create the first snowfall, and in the process ends up killing lots of plants and sometimes animals (much to Spring Healing's horror). Recently it was learned that she can also bring in simple illnesses, such as the cold or flu. She also figured out how to make it snow over top of one particular pony, freezing them to death occasionally. Since she is a unicorn and a god, she can reign ice down on ponies, freeze them to death, give them illness, and other horrific things. Of course, she isn't a senseless killing machine, and likes to snuggle up to ponies just as much as she loves to torment them.
Born in: Nowhere
Lives in: Anywhere she wants.
Theme: none yet

All ponies under this text are from a story!

Beyond Starlight

Name: Beyond Starlight
Age: 27
Gender: mare
Race: unicorn
Cutie Mark: lightbringer cutie mark from the pony creator on this site
Family: Her daughter is Blissful Heart and her husband is Light Bloom
Talent: she is the female leader of the Harmony Saviours
Likes: foals, kind ponies, being a good leader, quiet places
Dislikes: disharmony, war, injury, chaos, the members of the Forsaken Reign
Enemies: all members of Forsaken Reign
Friends: Light Bloom, Blissful Heart,
Fears: The downfall of her ponies, the death of her daughter
Bio: Starlight was born into the Harmony Saviours, a group of ponies who went against the Forsaken Reign. The Forsaken wanted nothing more than to have complete control over the world, and have a burning desire to destroy Celestia, Luna and Cadence. When Starlight was a filly she was trained to heal ponies rather than to battle them, since she was a rather weak foal and nopony thought she would be good for war. But one night a patrol of Forsaken members attacked the city, bringing death and havoc. She and a few other healers were called to help, but as they left the main building were attacked. Nopony else noticed since they had stayed in the shadows, not wanting to be noticed by the enemy. But their plan had turned since the enemy found them, but their fellow Harmony Saviours couldn't. There was Starlight and 3 others, and 5 Forsaken. One of the other fillies named Moondrop faced off to a member of Forsaken Reign, and Starlight backed her up. The other 2 healers were colts and would be able to hold off a Forsaken member all on their own. Although not trained, the 4 of them had some instinctive fighting spirit in them and were able to drive off 2 of the dark figures. With only 3 remaining they were outnumbered by the healers, but it didn't matter. They were warriors, and could fight some healing foals. Starlight quickly whispered to Moondrop to run for help, who hesitated. "What about you?" she had asked. But Starlight insisted, and soon Moondrop darted away. One of the Forsaken gave chase, but was blocked by one of the colts who was a Pegasus. Backup came quickly.
The Harmony warriors drove in, completely demolishing the intruders. Starlight counted 3 in total who had come to help. One of them looked down at her, smiling. " You did the right thing, sending for help. When outnumbered, you should always trust your instincts. If they say get help, do it! Never try to be a hero all on your own, " she told her "you could make a fine leader someday, Starlight"

As years went by, Beyond Starlight mastered healing and learned some fighting skills. She learned quickly and was soon popular among the city, but everypony couldn't help but notice the young mare still had no cutie mark. At age 20 another attack occurred. She rushed into the crowd, blasting a spell. The fight lasted for what felt like forever before all the Forsaken had fled or died. But the victory was not without sacrifice. As was soon revealed to the public, the leaders had both been found dead. With no offspring, they had nopony to lead them. As days went by, the situation worsened. If the Forsaken Reign found out they were leaderless they would launch a large attack, no doubt. So action had to be taken; simply choose a new leader. Although not very upholding of the law, it was the only solution. And the choice was obvious to everypony as to who should be their female leader: Beyond Starlight. Although young she was selfless, clever, and loyal. She knew healing and fighting skills and was overall a kind pony. Of course, Starlight was shocked upon being offered the position, but she made up her mind: she would be their leader. And so it was. Beyond Starlight was now officially the leader of the City, and the Harmony Saviours altogether. Of course, a male was needed to join her. She already knew who she wanted: Light Bloom, the Pegasus colt who had been among the attacked healers when she was a filly. She had quickly learned he was similar to her. A kind, sincere pony. Although he could be a bit awkward he was still a good pony. He accepted her offer and they were the new leaders of the Harmony Saviours. Upon waking a couple days later, she discovered her cutie mark had appeared. A light glowed on it, sending off a mystic beauty. She understood; she was the leader of the Harmony Saviours, and it was her destiny to lead them until her dying day.

A few years afterwards they had a daughter, who they named Blissful Heart. At first Light was unsure of having a foal, but Starlight insisted on it since she never wanted their ponies to be left leaderless again. Although at first Blissful's birth was only so their ponies would have a leader in case they both passed away, they quickly grew to adore her, as did the public.
Born in: The City of the Harmony Saviours
Lives in: The City of the Harmony Saviours
Theme: none yet

Light Bloom

Name: Light Bloom
Age: 28
Gender: stallion
Race: pegasus
Cutie Mark: a golden star
Family: His daughter is Blissful Heart and he is married to Beyond Starlight
Talent: he is the male leader of the Harmony Saviours.
Likes: balance and order, quiet, being with Starlight or Blissful Heart.
Dislikes: windy days, heavy rainfall, fire,
Enemies: Any pony from the Forsaken Reign
Friends: Beyond Starlight, Blissful Heart, Moondrop
Fears: The Forsaken Reign, wars, chaos taking over
Bio:
Born in: The City of the Harmony Saviours
Lives in: The City of the Harmony Saviours
Theme: none yet

Too lazy to finish right now. I'll do some more tomorrow! 

[Renatan]

BUMP!

(Evil bumper of doom!  Yea, I'm bumping so people will hopefully give opinions, or even better, critique. Thank you, my lovelies~  )

[Ramisha]

I like them, except for the creepy evil ones.
I mean, their stories are good, but I just don't like THEM.

[Poseidon]

I have a gift for you  I just fixed It a little

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[Renatan]

I have a gift for you  I just fixed It a little

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Awwww, thanks Yea, the lines on my first copy were, um,.... sketchy

[GoldenTerrabyte]

I like Spring Healing best!