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((I vanish to school for one day and all this happens. Great.))

The two listened as Starlight muttered whatever she was muttering again and ignored the words she said. She was repeating what she had said earlier, but the two couldn't help but get freaked out by her. Until...

"Whoa! Bear with us!"

Navine noticed that Starlight was coughing and collapsing. "Starlight!"

The two stayed by the sick pony until they heard something rustling in the trees. It was something strange, but the two didn't want to deal with it yet.

Thinking it was the monster catching up with them, Strongcolt said, "We wish you luck, Starlight."

"Wait, what?"

Before she could understand what was going on, Navine was being lifted and placed on Strongcolt's back. He then proceeded to start running as she watched the sick pony. "Nooo!"

And with that, the two continued to run. But they could find no way out, and it was frustrating. It was like they were running in circles and not finding a way out. They wanted to leave; they didn't know what to do if they stayed any longer without an exit.
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Navine and Strongcolt were a bit worried when the mare spewed out the creepiest things, but they were hoping the pony would follow them and run. But at least the mare decided to run and catch up with them.

"I'm Starlight, who are you? and is that thing chasing, no eyes, always watching, leave alone?"

They both were confused as hell at what she was saying, but Navine hastily said, "I'm Navine. This is Strongcolt. We saw the thing. We're trying to leave it alone. It keeps showing up."

"And we're trying to find a way out. We can't find it," Strongcolt added.

Well, at least there was someone else joining their small group. "Nice to meet you, Starlight."

"Now come on. I've seen enough disappearing mares for one day."
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That's a good idea.

Someone make the thread. XD
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8 ._.
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As the two ran, they finally spotted somepony. It was a young mare, waving to them to attract their attention.

"Hey, there's somepony here!" Navine excitedly said to Strongcolt, "Maybe she knows a way out."

She led Strongcolt to the mare and approached her calmy. Then, she said, "The thing is probably behind us..." and started to run again. This would be good so none of them would get caught, but then again they didn't know that someone was stalking them in the meanwhile.
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Today was the day. Today, Navine and her special somepony were off to a pony's birthday party. They weren't too sure why they were invited; sure, they met the stallion a few times before, but maybe he liked the couple as friends or something. They just knew that their schedules were going to be packed as ever, especially since the party would occupy the entire schedule.

"Do you have the gift ready, Jax?" Navine asked her special somepony. She was sort of upset with him because he only recently told her his real name, but that didn't stop her from actually loving him.

Jax strongly nodded. "Yep! Got it riiiiiight here." Wrapped in a green box, the small gift made its way to Navine's pack. It was polite to bring a present, after all, because they got invited to his party. The present was a pop-up book they made themselves, sure, but the story was a good one; it was about a mare finding her place with the right ponies after bad ponies made fun of her and she decided to get the buck out of there. Navine wrote it herself, and she was rather proud of it.

Navine nodded and smiled, "Alright! Let's go find this cabin!" Though she didn't trust a party in a cabin, she was going to go anyway because it was a birthday party. So the two left home and made their way through town and in the outskirts.

After a short while, the couple saw balloons in the distance. Navine jumped up and down excitedly, saying, 'There it is!" She picked up the pace and went off to the cabin, Jax following close behind her. And they arrived just in time to hear music coming on.

"Juuuuust in time."

The two went on ahead to the yard and shouted at the same time, "We made it!" Navine got out the invite and the present, and both grinned, "Happy birthday Scruffle Gus!"
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"Hey, what's that?"

After the couple walked for a bit, they came across some weird clearing. It was a landmark, something with a triangular pattern made from three large boulders. Coming a bit closer, there was a slab in the middle.

"Hey, we found something! Maybe it has the key for a way out?" Navine was focused on getting out, and she was about to step closer when Strongcolt stopped her.

"Look." He pointed to something across from them, something all too familiar. The figure.

"RUN!"

The couple made headway and made a break for it, leaving behind the landmark. But as they ran, Navine left an imprint on a tree with her magic so she could find the place later on. She really wanted to know what the thing said. She wanted to find a way out of this forest.
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6 lol
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4! :3
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Actually let's count to 100. And see what happens when we get to 100. Maybe start our own little party inside this thread until DM comes back?
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Names: Navine and Strongcolt!

Appearances: ((I know you've seen them before, lol xD))
So Navine...
Spoiler: show

She always tries her best to have fun but sometimes has her head somewhere else. If she really cares about someone, she will keep her head away from the clouds unless everything is quiet. She's very adventurous and curious, though she can come off as anti-social at times. Her love for watching television is pretty evident once she looks at her schedule and realizes it is time for a favorite show.

And Strongcolt...
Spoiler: show

Except he has a flatter mane and an arrowhead-shaped tail with that weird brown-green color on each of the 5 points.
He's a hyper and cheery pony, though he definitely comes off as anti-social to those he doesn't consider his friend. Navine is his best friend and special somepony, and he mainly talks to her. He would do some crazy stuff if he wanted to, however, just to impress his love. He does have his way with the controller and is the life of the party when he isn't being strangely shy.

(BTW, I think I might just have him introduce himself as Jax from now on. He looks more like a Jaxton Hill, lol xD Thanks for the name suggestion :3)
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Maybe we could just without her? IDK
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((I was busy! Could not reply until now.))

Strongcolt looked around and noticed that nobody was actually behind them the entire time and that they were alone.

"Hey, we're on our own again."

Navine pouted, seeing that they were stuck in the dark forest with nobody else around them. "Great. Just what we needed." She turned on her periwinkle light and beckoned to Strongcolt to follow her.

"Hey," he asked her, "Why are we moving?"

Navine replied with ease, "Because! The thing will find us if we stand around like derps, so we gotta move so he has no ground to find us."

Agreeing with her logic, Strongcolt nodded and started to follow her as he said, "Alright. If that's what we're doing."

And so they walked. They were on their own, just like when they first started out; the only difference was back then, they didn't know about a monster. Now they were watching their backs and walking on like they were going to be hunted at any second. They moved quickly to cover more ground so they could find a way out, so they wouldn't end up like Windfrost. They carried forth and thought of nothing but escaping the forest, because what was the point of staying when ponies were dying? They knew there was a way of escaping, but they just had to look for it.
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Quote from: Chishio Kunrin on 2014 Mar 26, 16:11:32
Quote from: Night Pony on 2014 Mar 26, 08:54:53
But Elsa is a Queen.  :o

Which kinda makes Frozen different in a good way. Suddenly, we have a likeable queen who isn't evil.
Also, Anna is a princess.

Frozen changed a lot of things.

Good queens, evil princes... Anna's a princess, sure, but she doesn't end up with a prince. She ends up with someone else.

At least Frozen came out after MLP did. If MLP came out after Frozen, maybe it would actually have the whole "Queen Cadence and King Shining Armor" thing to accommodate for the changing times, lol
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((It should work like that, but if you take too long to find a page he starts going after you anyway.))

After a while of running, Strongcolt stopped. He found himself in the middle of the forest, still with no way out. 'Great. We still can't get out.' Either way, he still had Navine on his back and the other two mares behind him. He gently slid Navine to the ground and lifted her face with his hooves.

"Hey," he started in a gentle tone, "we're safe now. It's going to be okay."

Navine lifted her head and looked at him with teary blue eyes. "But... but the mare..."

Strongcolt softly shushed her and gently hugged her. "It's okay. We tried, okay? That's what matters."

And with that, Navine cried in his chest. It didn't matter to her that others were watching; she was having a rough night already, and she couldn't help it. She could feel Strongcolt's hoof brushing her curly mane in an effort to calm her down, and it was somewhat working. She stopped crying after a few minutes and parted the hug, but Strongcolt brushed her tears from her cheeks with his nose.

"You're okay."

The two exchanged small smiles and then turned to face the other two.

"Sorry about that." She rubbed the back of her head with her hoof and said, "We gotta find a way out of this place..."
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Name: River Snowbed
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Race: Earth pony
Appearance:
Spoiler: show

Does your pony already do their special talent?: Eh, no. She did a lot of stuff but none of them are what her cutie mark could be.
Other: Her two best friends are Snowblue Blitz and Ace Charming. Snowblue is a unicorn with a lightbulb for a cutie mark, but she has MPS, which means she transforms into Denblue Blunt. Ace Charming is a pegasus and has an Ace of Hearts for his cutie mark. River has known them since foalhood, but she sometimes gets jealous because they have their cutie marks. She likes to swim but it has nothing to do with her cutie mark. She wishes that she could just get her cutie mark already.



((Question: How do I put links but make them so when you click on a name it's actually a link?))
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Name: Navine
Gender: Filly
Age: 10
Race:Unicorn

Appearance: http://i1363.photobucket.com/albums/r706/Electriranger/YoungNavine_zps89803f2f.png

Backstory (well, a bit of it): She isn't exactly sure where she's from. It's likely that she was born in Canterlot to a unicorn mother and a pegasus father. It was rumored that Navine was born an alicorn but she used her powerful magic to hide her wings. She doesn't know for sure because now she is in Ponyville, but she does want to make friends and control her magic. So far she can use most basic spells and can also give herself wings; she can also teleport without draining her energy and change the gender of somepony else, but she doesn't exactly know how she can change other's genders. She's working on controlling a spell that can give Earth ponies wings if they wanted temporary flight abilities.
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The two were running, alright. They were running faster than the breeze that was blowing, and quicker than maybe a bullet. But when Strongcolt felt lighter on his back, he stopped. Navine stopped shortly after, noticing something very wrong.

"Wait..."

Wind Frost was gone.

"Hey!"

"Where are you?!"

They could only see one thing as they tried to eye for their newfound friend: the ghastly pony from the recording.

"No." Navine had an idea of what happened. Wind let go of Strongcolt and sacrificed herself to make sure the couple got away.

"NO!!"

Navine lowered herself to the ground and got rid of her wings. The tears started to form in her eyes and she layed down to cry. Seeing this, Strongcolt picked her up and placed her on his back.

"Please don't cry." He started off running again, Navine's aura keeping her on his back, and he saw that the other two ponies from before had found them. "Come on! We have to go quickly!"

Strongcolt knew that the group was so bucked, but he didn't lose any hope of them surviving the night. He didn't want to see Navine cry, but she couldn't help it; and he wasn't going to stop her from crying either. He reminded himself to hug Navine when they found a safe place away from the monster and kept on running.
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"Run, bro, run!"

Navine could see that Wind Frost was holding on to Strongcolt, so she pulled her up on his back with her magic. She focused her magic a bit and sprouted wings, because she always knew how to do that. She then flew up, giving Wind some more room as Navine stayed close. She looked towards the creature and fired another beam towards it; eithout seeing whether it hit or not, her magic directed itself to Strongcolt's legs. He couldn't run fast enough to outrun that monster, no matter how hard he tried, so she gave him a boost. The periwinkle aura focused on the grass and at Strongcolt's moving hooves.

"Ice maneuver!"

The ice maneuver was something Strongcolt and Navine would do together. It consisted of Strongcolt using his speed and Navine using her magic to give boosts of speed by forming ice only where he was stepping. It always worked because Strongcolt was good at keeping his balance, unlike Navine herself.

"Hang on tight!"

She set her aura to the patches of grass and Strongcolt's hooves, and ice started to form. With each step Strongcolt took, it would make him go faster. And with those increases of speed, Navine would follow with her flight. It was bad that she couldn't fly very high, but she wouldn't leave her special somepony behind anyway. Hopefully the ice boost would help them escape as Navine melted the ice left behind.
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"I know we are almost complete strangers, but we all gotta stick together."

Tabbyte was right. As Strongcolt kept his stance to make sure she didn't fall as she backed up into him, Navine observed the camera.

"So there really is somepony else here..."

Leave it to Navine to not be so afraid of the place. She does have her many fears, but they were being repressed by Strongcolt's presence. She looked at Windfrost and agreed with a nod.

"Good plan. Stay away from where we think this figure is." To be honest, Navine didn't really feel like meeting whatever lived in this forest.

That thought was interrupted by yet another scream and the presence of somepony Navine didn't know.

"Oh my gosh, it's Diamond Rose!"

"Who?" Navine wasm't really one to know who was famous in these parts. But as everyone else was leaving to investigate the new scream, the couple followed the group.

And then they saw it.

Strongcolt stood there like a statue as he saw the corpse. Navine, on the other hand, was unfazed by the body but saw something more dastardly near it.

With its tentacles, it grabbed Wind Frost, and the couple watched as Diamond Rose was trying to help her. "We gotta do something!"

But Strongcolt's logic was beyond what Navine was thinking. He grabbed her hoof and threw her on his back before he started running off. She managed to fire one of her beams at it and hopefully it would make it let go of her friend, but for now Strongcolt and Navine were on their own once again.