Finally, My OC Thread!

[Peace Keeper]

Hello All! Welcome to my OC thread. Here I keep a collection of the OCs I have created. Well... it perhaps serve as a memory bank for the ideas of my OC, and also serves for the info that is used for RPing so that other can know what to expect or know about my OC. Perhaps it is here so that people can curiously see what OCs I have created. I know, it isn't the greatest, but it can't hurt trying to be creative, can it?

Well... here are my OCs, and enjoy.

My Ponysona:

Spoiler: Peacekeeper • show

Name: Peacekeeper
Age: 23
Gender: Male (Stallion)
Pony type: Pegasus
Coat color: Blue
Mane/Tail color: Primary black; Mane secondary: eggshell white stripe down the middle/ Tail secondary: Blue
Eye Color: Brown
Other: Black shirt (3 types: w/o wing holes, w/ wing holes, plaid sweater w/ flaps), black cape
Residency: Las Pegasus
Strengths: Good pulling strength, positive attitude, very kind and generous, and intelligence in math
Weaknesses: Gullible, cannot stand up for own self, fears conflict, and not-so-strong lifting strength

Spoiler: Peacekeeper Images • show

Spoiler: Peacekeeper (Pony creators) • show

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At a young age
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Spoiler: Peacekeeper art by LarryMcLie (Painty Tailbrush)  • show

Spoiler: Peacekeeper art by Gingineer • show

Spoiler: Peacekeeper Secret Santa art by Chrisgotjar (Finally knew who drew it) • show

Spoiler: Peacekeeper art made by Peace Keeper (Me!) • show

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Spoiler: Peacekeeper & Peacemaker (anthro) art by Reginald27 • show

Peacekeeper is on the top

A little "interview" of him.

Spoiler: The Questionnaire • show

1:What's your OCs favorite color?
-Black and Blue

2:Where does your OC work?
-Unemployed, but willing to work anywhere

3:What's your OCs favorite food?
-Fruits; mostly cantaloupe, banana, and apples. Nature's candy!

4:Does your OC have a favorite drink?
Smoothies.. I love fruits.

5:How old is your OC?
-21 years old

6:Does your OC have any supernatural powers?
No, but I believe I can do magic

7:Is your OC in a relationship?
-Eenope

8:What are some of your OCs strengths?
-Can pull large carts (Strong hind legs), Usually happy (emotionally strong, hard to anger, depress, or cry)

9:What are some of your OCs weaknesses?
-Can't lift, bro (Not-so-strong forelegs), gullible, and very hot weather

10:What is your OCs favorite outfit?
-Usually a shirt and sometimes a cape

11:What is your OCs spirit animal?
-The monkey (Chinese Zodiac)

12:Is your OC currently in school?
-Yes. Currently in college

13:What is your OCs earliest memory?
-Looking out the window of the train at age 2

14:Does your OC have a cell phone? If so, what kind?
-No

15:What makes your OC angry?
-Not getting an answer, bullies, and backstabbers (those who betray or break promises)

16:When is your OCs favorite time of year?
-Winter (Nice and cool)

17:How long can your OC hold their breath?
-2 minutes usually (record was 3 minutes)

18:What is your OCs favorite holiday?
-Christmas
*Not sure if it's named like that in Equestria

19:What usually bums your OC out?
-Very hot weather, literally nothing else to do, and long-term tasks

20:What's your OCs favorite kind of pizza?
-Pepperoni and cheese, and sometimes with pineapple

21:Who is your OCs best friend?
-I know how they look, I just can't remember their names. I haven't seen them since my childhood.

22:Has your OC ever been arrested?
-Eenope, and hopefully never

23:Whats your OCs biggest secret?
-Um... I would like to keep that a secret. Well... just this one. I want to do magic really badly like my brother. I know I'm a pegasus, but I believe it is possible. I will try to the very end to learn and understand how magic works. Others see me crazy, and called me an idiot, but I don't mind. It does seem pretty dumb, but I still believe.

24:What does your OC smell like?
-I'm a bit embarrassed. I just smell clear, but sometimes I smell like sweat because of the heat or the exercise.

25:What time of year does your OC prefer?
-Again? Ok then. The winter, and a bit early spring.

26:What race is your OC?
-Pegasus

27:What languages does your OC speak?
-English and Spanish

28:Does your OC like anime? Western Cartoons?
-regular cartoons, yes. Anime... somewhat.

29:Can your OC swim?
-*nervously* Eenope!

30:What would be your OCs favorite movie?
-Good question. I guess it is between Toy Story, Twister, or The Wizard of Oz.

31:Does your OC believe in fairies?
-Eenope

32:Did your OC go to college? What did they major in?
-Currently attending college. Majoring in meteorology (weather). I'm gonna be a math major and a minor in physics.

33:How many family members does your OC have?
-4 sisters, 2 brothers, an uncle of 12, and a soon-to-be granduncle (I have a huge family, and that's not counting the family from the south)

34:Is your OC a huge fan boy/girl over anything?
-Eenope, but I am a fan of some sports teams.

35:How flexible is your OC?
-About average.

36:What if they were gender bent?
-*Reads dictionary* I would do my best to help them understand that we all have ambitions in our lives. If they still feel gender bent, I just hope they don't get extreme.

37:What was your OCs first word?
-Not really sure, but it may possibly be in Spanish

38:Does your OC have any pets?
-No

39:Who is your OCs biggest enemy?
-I would never have an enemies list, nor I don't feel I have an enemy. I am a respectful pony

40:What is the craziest thing your OC has done?
Well... *sigh* there was a time I was exercising and ended hurting myself very badly. I can still feel the pain from that day. It was a very depressing 2 weeks of my life.

41:What is your OCs motto about life?
-This quote I have in my personal message:
"Respect, Trust, Support. The three steps to friendship."

42:Does your OC drink coffee or tea?
-Eenope

43:Who is your OCs biggest hero?
-Everyone who have influenced and changed my life for the better: My parents, my good friends, and my teachers

44:What color eyes does your OC have?
-Brown

45:Does your OC like reading?
-Usually short stories. I like stories of real-life accounts, or first-person fics (something like an everyday pony lives their lives)

46:Is your OC loyal?
-Definitely. I live by the respect my family has lived through thanks to my parents. It's respect that starts many friendships.

47:Does your OC tolerate violence?
-If its fake, acted, motion picture or cartoon violence, it's ok. Real violence I do not. I would try to break up fights or prevent a fight from happening. I keep peace that way (it's my talent)

48:What social class is your OC?
-Working class (I still live in an apartment)

49:What country was your OC born in?
-Equestria

50:Does your OC cry easily?
-I hardly even cry at all, even at a funeral, but it doesn't mean I don't love and miss them so much ( My heart sank to the deep trenches of the ocean)

51:What is your OCs favorite genre of music?
-I listen to about anything. My favorite would be rock.

52:How does your OC feel about insects?
-I don't mind insects, but the spiders with a large back body gives me the willies *shivers*

53:What are your OCs hobbies?
-playing games, looking at the sky (the sunlight makes it look more beautiful, and at night see the cosmos), and daydreaming.

54:Does your OC use any medication?
-Eenope

55:What gender is your OC?
-Male (Stallion)

56:What kind of clothes or accessories does your OC wear?
-Ah, this again. *Drinks chocolate milk*. Well the shirt and cape. However, I do have three shirts. 1) a shirt with no wing holes (It was made for earth/unis, but it's so comfortable) 2) a shirt WITH wing holes (for when I know I'll be flying frequently) 3) a cross-pattern shirt with a flap (thicker shirt for the cold. Wings are under flap to keep them warm, but in case of flight, flaps open when I unfurl them)

57:Would you call your OC adventurous?
-Kind of. I would like to see nature, but not be out in nature for longer than 4 days (I get homesick because I feel all alone)

58:Is your OC social?
-Um... not really. I'm kind of shy to new ponies.

59:What is the first thing that someone would notice about your OC?
-The clothes. Most OC's don't usually wear clothing

60:Does your OC enjoy nature?
-EEYUP. Been on a trip to one of the best national parks and would visit again some day in the future.

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
          Born in Las Pegasus, Peacekeeper is the youngest of 6 siblings; 4 sisters and 2 brothers. His parents once lived in another country south of Equestria known as Mexicolt, and after marraige moved to Las Pegasus for a new start on life. During his time as a colt, growing up in a community outside of downtown Las Pegasus, Peacekeeper was somewhat mischievous, sometimes not realizing his actions. He is kind of a playful pony, and an innocent pony who just want to fit in and play with the neighborhood foals. When he is not outside running around, he is inside his apartment, where he can play with is brother, who is 3 years older, and his niece and nephew, who are 1 and 2 years younger respectively. Though he is biologically an uncle, he is more like a best friend to his niece and nephew.
           Peacekeeper's oldest sister and youngest brother are unicorns, and would usually see them use their magic. However, there are special magic tricks his brother would show to him and will want to do magic as well. Peacekeeper then thought about wanting to become a unicorn, but his parents were confused of his decision. At first, Peacekeeper was upset because he learned that he is a pegasus and he can't do magic like unicorns can, but later, his parents would convinced him in 2 ways that 1) It's impossible for a pony to change type and 2) That he is a special pegasus and to stay the way he is, because they love him very much. Peacekeeper finally took the pride of being a pegasus and being proud of who he is. Still, he can't look away from the magic unicorns are capable of doing.
            Peacekeeper's time in school is where some of his life-changing experiences happen. He was usually lazy in school; he didn't like doing homework and prefer to play games. Though he does learn what his teachers taught him  in class, he doesn't feel the need to do homework. Astonishingly, he is very good in math. However, his lack of work in school is what alarms his parents, and sometimes got punished. In high school, one of his teachers had changed his life completely around. Well, for keeping him in detention and making parent conferences, his teacher gave him a good talk on a perspective on life, how life after high school is both critical and precious. He made Peacekeeper realize the bigger world out there and his role that he has to play later on after graduation. After that, Peacekeeper finally realize the great importance of education, and has been completing more tasks on his own. After graduation, he now focuses on taking on the responsibility of his role in life.
            His cutie mark resembles a rainbow firework. However, it represents the spreading of peace. The story started in elementary school, his childhood friend was having a hard time with another foal and both were about to fight. Peacekeeper always runs away from danger, but it was his best friend who was in the conflict. He came in to try to stop the fight, asking what problems they were having. It all started with a friendly game of checkers which his friend was winning, and the other foal didn't like losing, and stared with a verbal backlash. So Peacekeeper helped them calm down and relax and realize that fighting is pointless. The two apologized and continued the game. On that day, he finally gained his cutie mark.
            Today, Peacekeeper is now a stallion who attends college to become a meteorologist; he will study the weather patterns for predicting and scheduling weather, and also understand the mechanics of clouds for producing better weather for crops and prevent storm build-ups. He currently resides in Las Pegasus, but would travel to Ponyville to meet his friends during his free time. Having friends over there, he learns and teaches a bit of respect and friendship, and play around with them as well before returning to his apartment back in Las Pegasus. Since being a colt, he still always wants to learn to do magic. It may be foolish for a pegasus to learn unicorn magic, but he feels... scratch that... he believes it is possible. He curiously reads scrolls and books about magic, and would soon find help from somepony to understand how magic works. Though learning to manipulate pegasus magic to do other magic abilities like levitating objects may be difficult if not impossible, it can be very dangerous, as it is considered doing dark magic. He understands the risks behind it, and will try to learn under supervision. He would want to be the first pegasus to perform magic unassisted.

My second OC (ponysona) :

Spoiler: Peacemaker • show

Name: Peacemaker
Age: 26
Gender: Male (Stallion)
Pony type: Unicorn
Coat color: Red
Mane/Tail color: Primary black
Eye Color: Brown/ (Sharingan activated: red. 3 dots (basic); specific sharingans have various patterns)
Residency: Las Pegasus
Strengths: Very flexible, caring, responsible, can stand his own ground, and an upper-level unicorn
Weaknesses: The sound of his voice (Sounds too serious sometimes), somewhat anger-prone, and a permanently damaged ankle.

Spoiler: Peacemaker Images • show

Spoiler: Peacemaker (Pony Creator) • show

Spoiler: Peacemaker art by fairymaid • show

With Sharingan

Spoiler: Peacemaker art by -ReiMar- • show

Without Sharingan

Spoiler: Peacemaker art by GlassMirror • show

With Sharingan

Spoiler: Peacemaker & Peacekeeper (anthro) art by Reginald27 • show

Peacemaker is on the bottom. (Without Sharingan)

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
   Born in Las Pegasus, Peacemaker is the second youngest sibling of the seven, and the older brother of Peacekeeper. Both him and Peacekeeper shared similar childhoods in the house; They played with each other, and sometimes argue with each other. He sometimes felt overshadowed by his little brother because he is the baby of the family, which made him kind of jealous. He made good friends with the neighborhood foals and would play games involving many ponies such as tag and hide-and-seek. He was kind of an average student throughout school and later graduated high school.
   His cutie mark is a rainbow triangle. The triangle signifies the three elements of peace: understanding, respect, and forgiveness; The rainbow represents the many ponies that roam Equestria. His cutie mark came a bit late, but at least earned it. In his high school, there was a conflict between two community groups with a few of his friends in the action. Him, and a few other ponies, attempted to stop the fighting from happening. Though somewhat hurt from this action, he helped stop the fight and aided in making peace (Well, not completely) between two unstable groups. He helped them understand the wrongful hate these groups had and forgave each other. On that day, he finally earned his cutie mark.
   Today, he resides in an apartment in Las Pegasus. He works at the produce market to support the family, while gaining the money to make himself happy. After some time working, he wasn't the selfish pony that he used to be, and now better understand the world more clearly. His goal is to go to school like his little brother and become a technician. Though he is a unicorn, he wanted to become a pegasus like is older and younger brother, but later realized being a unicorn has its benefits, and unlike Peacekeeper, he never had an obsession of becoming one. The biggest reason was that throughout time, he understood his magic more and more throughout time and later started to become a prodigy of magic, and later was able to levitate himself off the ground and fly, not needing wings. He has even created his own techniques such as the instant transmission, where he locks into a pony's magic, another technique he learned by feeling magic from ponies, and teleports to their location. It is his outstanding magical abilities that brought his little pegasus brother Peacekeeper into wanting to do magic as well. In his generosity, he will sometimes teach Peacekeeper to do magic and lend him some of his own magic to help him understand how magic works.
   What makes him very unique is a birth mark that has a very unique magic of his own. It is a special mark in his eye known as a sharingan; It has a red iris with three dots around the pupil. His eyes are normally brown, but can change it to a sharingan, and even from there can change into different patterns, each with a unique  ability. He rarely uses it because it's magic is unknown and may cause harm to others. When he is angered to an extent, he will threaten to use the sharingan. He hopes to understand it more so he can use it more effectively and safely.

Non-ponysona OCs:

Spoiler: Arco Iris • show

Name: Arco Iris
Age: 53
Gender: Stallion
Pony type: Pegasus
Coat color: White
Mane/Tail color: Rainbow
Eye color: Blue
Residency: Las Pegasus
Talent: Athletics
Strengths: Social, calm, friendly, competitive, shows good sports-stallion-ship
Weakness: Age(minor), remembering his retirement (sadness), sometimes show-off

Spoiler: Arco Iris Images • show

Spoiler: Pony Creator w/ edit • show

Spoiler: By Bakasan • show

Spoiler: By SparklestheUnicorn337 • show

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
          Born in Las Pegasus, Arco Iris is an active pony, always wanting to fly fast. He earned his cutie mark after winning a race in his elementary school race. Being a fast pony, other ponies would like to offer him to join track and field. He accept, and had a good challenge against other fast flyers. Not just fast, he was also very good in other track and field events and winning first in his division. He would later join the Equestria games. At age 18, he entered his first games. Though not succeeding in winning medals in most of his events, he did win silver in the 200m flight sprint. In his 3rd appearance, he did what only a couple ponies were able to do. He created a sonic rainboom during a sprint race, which was a very rare and special achievement. For the next 4 events, a total of 7 events or 28 years, he was beginning to show his age, and would eventually fail to qualify in the quarterfinals. At that point, he knew this was the end, and would retire when the event was over. Though saddened, he can't help but smile at the many medals he earned, and the photo of his sonic rainboom feat next to them. He looks at them to remember not just the events, but the friends he made around the world. Today, He is living a happy life. He would train to keep his health in top shape. He is a good role model for young athletes, and would likely coach other ponies and foals who love to exercise. Though old, he can still compete with others, and perhaps maybe show them a sonic rainboom, if possible.

Spoiler: Cheveyo • show

Name: Cheveyo
Age: 28
Gender: Stallion
Pony type: Earth
Coat color: Metallic Black
Mane/Tail color: Silver gray primary, white secondary
Eye color: Gold
Other: Red mask (tribal tradition)
Residency: Meadow land in an unnamed forest
Talent: Guardian
Strengths: Outstanding fight skills, honorable, stays on tasks
Weakness: Somewhat overprotective, gullible in civilized areas

Spoiler: Cheveyo Images • show

Spoiler: Pony Creator w/ edits • show

Spoiler: By Keldeluxe • show

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
          He is a pony from the Alatzima tribe. He thrives to protect and serve his people, but protecting the leader is always his biggest honor, and is the champion of his tribe. Growing up, he always had a sense for adventure and courage. He grew wondering nature traveling, but at times he wrestled with creatures, defending himself and others. His cutie mark came to be when he enters in his tribe's warrior tower, where the colts of his tribe compete to being the strongest of the tribe. When he became champion, he not only gained the mark of honor by his chief, he also gained his cutie mark. His mark is a golden pickaxe. Later in life he grows to hone his honor as a guardian for his chief. He has conqured the warrior tower again for the stallion warriors, and after many intense battles, he has become champion, and has gained this time a permanent mark next to his cutie mark to show his champion status.
      For his continuing service to his tribe, and gaining the blessing from the chief, the witchcrafters of the tribe has constructed a special ax for him. The ax, though small,  has special properties that allows him to not only speak to the spirits, but to also inherit the traits of the spirit he comes in contact with. Cheveyo has shown that he goes into the woods and listen to the wild and the winds, where he says he listens to the spirits. The ax has been enchanted to also become durable to nearly all enviornments, combats, and used as unintended tools. The tool also is enchanted to be magically connected to Cheveyo, in which only he can use its abilities. Cheveyo always carries his axe wherever he goes, becoming his vital tool in time of need. He has used in times of bear attacks when using his ax to call upon a spirit to inherit animal taming techniques to calm the bear. Such abilities of the ax has helped save his life.
      In his life, Vheveyo is also former henchpony for Ahuizotl. His tribe once honored Ahuizotl as a great leader and Cheveyo would follow along to protect him on his quests. Only once he has ever faced against Daring Do and proved to be a tough opponent, being near equal in fighting skills before having to evacuate the crumbling temple to save himself. When he figured out Ahuizotl's true evil goal, Cheveyo would want to leave his control. Though this means losing his honor to protect a leader, he felt that the harmony of life has more worth to protect. In the best opportunity during another quest, he decided to fake his fate and leave his control, not wanting to take part of his evil plans any more.
           Today, his tribe is relocated after learning their former leader's goals. Living in a meadowland inside a forest a few miles away from civilization, He continues to train keep in top shape for any danger that comes into his village and to maintain his title as the champion. His tribe hears local tales of the princesses and the elements. Cheveyo heard of this, and wishes to protect the princesses, who are very important in maintaining peace and order to the lands, but would also wants to watch over his tribe, the ponies that he knows and loves. He still wanders of the pegasus who he fought in the past. Being his most worthy opponent, he wishes to spar against her again to finally answer the question, "Who is the stronger warrior?"

New OC:

Spoiler: *unknown name* • show

For the sake of being used in the RP, assume that most of the info is unknown. Areas marked with '***' are the knowns and can be used in the RP
Name: *Unknown*
Age: 30
Gender: Stallion
Pony type: Earth
Coat color: Brown
Mane/Tail color: Semi-long black with purple stripe.
Eye color: Black grayish
***Other: Always in armor that covers his entire body.
***Residency: Anywhere around Equestria, constant movement
***Talent: Guardian/fighter
Strengths: Outstanding fight skills and stamina, incredible knowledge in learning events and opponents minds/talents, strong, and flexible (even in armor)
Weakness: Too large of a military and innocent ponies in the midst of a battle.

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
                He is from a small place on the outskirts of Ponyville. As a colt, he wasn't much of a bully, but he was a strong pony. He wasn't skilled in sports, but excelled in contact games. Growing up, he did develop skills in learning what his friends were thinking in games and in hide and seek. He also at couple points protected his friend in an arguement and in fights. Incredibly, he took on a group of bullies by himself and his friend owed him his life. It is at the games he played and protecting his friend that he earned his cutie mark in defending. The cutie mark resembles a shield with a pony on it.
               In his school years, he was mostly into Physical Education, but astonishingly is also interested in psychology classes. He learned how to know about other ponies, such as if they are lying, or what they are thinking by narrowing down on what he knows about the pony. At times he actually can snitch on others cause of his high sense of lie detecting. He once told the principle about a plan to throw pain at the school. He was never caught, luckily, but even then the group may not even know if they can win in a fight, or find him, since he is good at hiding.
               If it is one thing he perhaps is known for by his peers and friends is his humor and trash talk. He grew up with foals that do kinda like to tease other ponies. He was once teased, until he learned how to trash talk himself. He earned some kind of popularity, and even started to get creative and improvise on an insulting joke. Though he does kind of get in trouble with teachers and parents, he keeps it to only his peers and friends. He was nominated of being the funniest foal in school. Too bad he was first runner-up.
               After graduation, he attended to be a security guard. Since his talent is defending, he decided to guard a business. All has went well for his 3 years in service, until catastrophe happened. All of a sudden, the business exploded, making the building disappear in a fireball. Though all of the guards are okay, he was the only one missing. In the city, ponies declared him passed away and made a small shrine for him. However, he was actually about 2 kilometers away from the explosion site. Little that he know that he was declared gone at his hometown, he snapped out of his mind, almost going into madness to now try to figure out the criminals that tried to eliminate him.
               Near Canterlot, he however found out about ponies thinking he was gone for good. It was an excellent strategy to now conceal his identity so that there is no danger to find out about him and use the knowledge against him. He sneaks into a Royal Guard fort to try to train with the guards. Pretty sure, the guards did not recognize him being amongst the group. Later, he happened to sneak into the armory, where he stole a couple armor plates, and hid outside Canterlot. In the woods, he spent weeks and months to forge the armor to his body's speculations. In learning a bit on how armor works, he was able to engineer the armor to be incredibly durable and flexible, and at the same time breathable and sort of light weight. The armor was built  slightly thicker than his body so that once his body adjust to the added weight of the armor, his body grows thicker to were now he actually fits. He also added a horn and wing armor, so that nopony knows of his type.
***------Now this is the part where we can assume we know about him here--------
                During a battle against the changelings (separate from the canterlot Wed) The Royal Guards defended Equestria against them. However, the unnamed pony, now completely covered in his armor, jumps out to take on the group. Nopony from the royal guards knew who he was, but was worried he can get hurt. Fortunately, with his skills in fighting learned in the camp, and a few techniques from learning psychology and anatomy, he was able to take on many changlings by himself. In a time much faster than normal, they guards, including the unnamed pony, made the changelings surrender. The Royal Guard captain thanked the pony for the help and honored him to be in the group. The unnamed pony refused, but in a strange way. Instead of saying no, he instead said "It is a good compliment, but I am good going off myself. If you need me, just call me. I will try to hear the squeeky horn." A little humor and perhaps an insult, the captain took the gesture passively. The unnamed pony moves off to a road, in which it wasn't Ponyville, to now come across many cities.
               NOW, he roams across Equestria. He searches around, looking for trouble to be stopped. After his battle against changlings, he now had a war mind, now wanting more battles. Whenever he hears of a battle or war going on, he will outright jump into the action, battling changelings, dragons, timberwolves, and more. During a war near Crystal Empire, he was thanked blessfuly.

Spoiler: this part is unkown • show

He was given a crystal that had magical properties that allows him to levitate objects similar to a unicorn. The color aura is different from his eye color, which made it better to conceal his identity. He placed the crystal right inside the horn piece of armor.

As he came around, he has been called a hero, but at the same time, he is also infamous for it, and at times called crazy for jumping into action in which most of the time is life-risking even in armor. Through some royal guard troops and squads, he also gives motivation and insults, which made them laugh, and sometimes open them up to rage them. It works to his advantage to rage them, as he can take their rage against them as a weakness. Being incredible in psychology, he knows how to discover evil plans of leaders and hiding spots. It also helps for his identity a secret to not let the enemy know about any weakness in him. He has grown very fond of his hidden alter-ego it pretty much became almost his main persona.

[Invultrois]

You really need to learn the difference between "were" "where" "we're" and "wear".

A piece of advice Ms Sparkles. No one likes a Grammar Nutzy.  Not everybody's English is perfect. Even my grammar wouldn't be perfect all the time. 

Love your OC Peace Keeper! Very interesting story indeed. 

[Peace Keeper]

You really need to learn the difference between "were" "where" "we're" and "wear".

I apologize for the bad grammar. I kind of rushed it because LoE would automatically log me out  for being idle too long and lose my progress (Happened a few times and I got frustrated). I'll correct the grammar.

Love your OC Peace Keeper! Very interesting story indeed. 

Thanks. I always believed that a good story comes from within the author. Peacekeeper's story is matched up to my own experiences, just a bit ponified.

I may update his story as time goes by. If there is any improvements I need to do, let me know.

[Gracie Sky]

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As for your character, he has a lot of emphasis on his schooling life, although since you explain that he is a ponysona, I'm guessing he copies your schooling experience. That said, he has a few oddities about him, although I'm not going to be too critical about them since he's based off you. The only thing that I feel I should bring up is that I don't understand why he would be a meteorologist if his special talent is preserving peace. He sounds more like an idealist or even a security officer, depending on how physically capable he is.

[Peace Keeper]

The only thing that I feel I should bring up is that I don't understand why he would be a meteorologist if his special talent is preserving peace.

Good point. I may try to rewrite his story in some way. Well Peacekeeper is curious about the little things in the world so he continues going to school to learn more. However, ... yeah the meteorology part would be a difficult thing to sort out , but I guess I can put it in a way that this is the kind of career he likes to pursue in as a colt, like me. It's his dream job to help research and create weather, a way he would like to give to the ponies; He's pretty much a giver, like me.

He sounds more like an idealist or even a security officer, depending on how physically capable he is.

Hmm, he's not a strong pony, and he fears being confronted, but he would sometimes try to step in to prevent a conflict from happening, even if it is a group of ponies. Seeing others fight is what upsets him more than somepony giving him trouble. He would like to have a peaceful world, but he knows there will always be conflict somewhere. He feels that he may have been brought to the world to keep peace.

... he has a few oddities about him, although I'm not going to be too critical about them since he's based off you.

You can tell me, I don't bite  . I will accept any criticism you give me, and I will try my best to answer or clarify my OC, or maybe adjust it a bit.

[Gracie Sky]

If that's what you want, I'm going to have to evaluate this character as an OC rather than a ponysona. Ponysonas are based on the writer, for better or for worse. Most ponysonas have little to no regard to character balancing and development, and adding such tends to force a character away from the realm of being a ponysona. However, OCs can still possess characteristics similar to that of the writer, but only points that help make the character more relatable to the reader. I don't like evaluating ponysonas because any problems I would find insinuate that the writer possesses the same problems, and I don't want to say anything that could be possibly insulting to a fellow author. As just an OC, you may have to change some things about the character for the sake of balancing and making the character more interesting.

The first issue I wanted to point out is his name. I find it too convenient. His name is Peacekeeper and his talent is keeping peace. What I find hard to believe is that his parents would conveniently name him Peacekeeper, as though they knew he was going to eventually specialize in the skill he was named after. I tend not to recommend names that spell out the character. There are a few exceptions, though. One: The pony was expected to specialize in the field from birth, such as Applejack. Two: The character changed his or her name after acquiring their talent. Three: The character is a background or minor support pony, to whom the narrative cannot afford time to develop, so their name must do that for them, like Bulk Biceps. It's fine if their special talent is hinted at by their name, but the stronger the connection between the two, the greater the strain it puts on my suspension of disbelief.

Next on the list is his past and schooling. I think you may have gone into too much detail and should probably summarize it a little more. Right now, half of the things I'm reading about him in his history don't seem to impact him in the present day, so I'm not sure what relevance they have in the big picture. While this is just my opinion, I believe the history of a pony should be limited to commonly known and accepted facts about the pony from the perspective of his peer group. Things like him being good at math would fit into this, whereas the things about his family would probably be known only by his closest friends, unless he is publically open about such facts. His education should probably be condensed to the most important details, such as his homework habits and his career pursuit. I would keep and expound a bit more about his desire to learn magic, because it is something that he is still currently pursuing. Obviously, his cutie mark story should stay.

Going back to his special talent versus his career choice, I'll give my input on the best way to resolve this clash. Your best bet is to somehow combine the two passions and create something completely new and unheard of. I'll bet you 500 bits that he isn't the only pony whose talent involves peace keeping, but it's far more likely that he is the only pony that is also a meteorologist. This represents the potential to create something that's never been done and could help establish his own unique contribution to Equestria. The only issue would be how these two passions interact with each other. Can you use the skillset of a meteorologist to help keep peace? How would a peace loving meteorologist differ from just a normal meteorologist? Think about it, and if you need some help thinking up possible ideas, I can help with that upon request.

Lastly, questionnaires... I don't understand why authors would put them in a character introduction topic. I find them to be more of a tool to see if the author truly knows his or her OC well, but to a reader, it's a long tedious list of trivia that I can't really relate to and have little to no impact on developing the character. It's a fun distraction, but I just don't recommend including something like that in a topic like this..

[Peace Keeper]

Wow, I never knew there are so many flaws on Peacekeeper as an OC  .

Thanks for the OC evaluation. It helped me learn a lot about what makes an OC a good OC. 
So I guess Peacekeeper as a ponysona will be a better fit for me then. Alright then, I'll take a good note of this for future reference. Thanks you so much!

I added the questionnaire as an extension of his bio so that I don't leave the bio too elephantine.
I'm sure others would like to learn more if they please, but I do understand that sometimes it's not a good decision to add it. I'll try to make good judgement on whether adding it to my OC's bio.

Again, thank you very much.   

[Peace Keeper]

I now added another OC. This one is another ponysona. This one shares the same personalities as my brother, because he is the closest to me and I love him as a brother, and I felt my ponysona needed a brother as well. And so, my second OC, Peacemaker.

Spoiler: Peacemaker • show

Name: Peacemaker
Age: 25
Gender: Male (Stallion)
Pony type: Unicorn
Coat color: Red
Mane/Tail color: Primary black
Eye Color: Brown (Sharingan activated: red. 3 dots (basic); specific sharingans have various patterns)
Residency: Las Pegasus
Strengths: Very flexible, caring, responsible, can stand his own ground, and an upper-level unicorn
Weaknesses: The sound of his voice (Sounds too serious sometimes), somewhat anger-prone, and a permanently damaged ankle.

Spoiler: Peacemaker (Pony Creator) • show

Bio:
   Born in Las Pegasus, Peacemaker is the second youngest sibling of the seven, and the older brother of Peacekeeper. Both him and Peacekeeper shared similar childhoods in the house; They played with each other, and sometimes argue with each other. He sometimes felt overshadowed by his little brother because he was the baby of the family, which made him kind of jealous. He made good friends with the neighborhood foals and would play games involving many ponies such as tag and hide-and-seek. He was kind of an average student throughout school and later graduated high school.
   His cutie mark is a rainbow triangle. The triangle signifies the three elements of peace: understanding, respect, and forgiveness; The rainbow represents the many ponies that roam Equestria. His cutie mark came a bit late, but at least earned it. In his high school, there was a conflict between two community groups with a few of his friends in the action. Him, and a few other ponies, attempted to stop the fighting from happening. Though somewhat hurt from this action, he helped stop the fight and aided in making peace (Well, not completely) between two unstable groups. He helped them understand the wrongful hate these groups had and forgave each other. On that day, he finally earned his cutie mark.
   Today, he resides in an apartment in Las Pegasus. He works at the produce market to support the family, while gaining the money to make himself happy. After some time working, he wasn't the selfish pony that he used to be, and now better understand the world more clearly. His goal is to go to school like his little brother and become a technician. Though he is a unicorn, he wanted to become a pegasus like is older and younger brother, but later realized being a unicorn has its benefits, and unlike Peacekeeper, he never had an obsession of becoming one. The biggest reason was that throughout time, he understood his magic more and more throughout time and later started to become a prodigy of magic, and later was able to levitate himself off the ground, not needing wings. He has even created his own techniques such as the instant transmission, where he locks into a pony's magic and teleports to their location. It is his outstanding magical abilities that brought his little pegasus brother Peacekeeper into wanting to do magic as well. In his generosity, he will sometimes teach Peacekeeper to do magic and lend him some of his own magic to help him understand how magic works.
   What makes him very unique is a birth mark that had a very unique magic of his own. It is a special mark in his eye known as a sharingan; It has a red iris with three dots around the pupil. His eyes are normally brown, but can change it to a sharingan, and even from there can change into different patterns, each with a unique  ability. He rarely uses it because it's magic is unknown and may cause harm to others. When he is angered to an extent, he will threaten to use the sharingan. He hopes to understand it more so he can use it for the greater good.

[Peace Keeper]

I have been doing Ponysonas and maybe I should finally do an actual OC. I have been thinking of these characters before I joined LoE, and I had put in my imagination, and even my dreams, to forge them into what they are now. Hopefully I have improved in OC making, since these are my first non-ponysona OCs. And so... here they are.

Spoiler: Arco Iris • show

Name: Arco Iris
Age: 52
Gender: Stallion
Pony type: Pegasus
Coat color: White
Mane/Tail color: Rainbow
Eye color: Blue
Residency: Las Pegasus
Talent: Athletics
Strengths: Social, calm, friendly, competitive, shows good sports-stallion-ship
Weakness: Age(minor), remembering his retirement (sadness), sometimes show-off

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
          Born in Las Pegasus, Arco Iris is an active pony, always wanting to fly fast. He earned his cutie mark after winning a race in his elementary school race. Being a fast pony, other ponies would like to offer him to join track and field. He accept, and had a good challenge against other fast flyers. Not just fast, he was also very good in other track and field events and winning first in his division. He would later join the Equestria games. At age 18, he entered his first games. Though not succeeding in winning medals in most of his events, he did win silver in the 200m flight sprint. In his 3rd appearance, he did what only a couple ponies were able to do. He created a sonic rainboom during a sprint race, which was a very rare and special achievement. For the next 4 events, a total of 7 events or 28 years, he was beginning to show his age, and would eventually fail to qualify in the quarterfinals. At that point, he knew this was the end, and would retire when the event was over. Though saddened, he can't help but smile at the many medals he earned, and the photo of his sonic rainboom feat next to them. He looks at them to remember not just the events, but the friends he made around the world. Today, He is living a happy life. He would train to keep his health in top shape. He is a good role model for young athletes, and would likely coach other ponies and foals who love to exercise. Though old, he can still compete with others, and perhaps maybe show them a sonic rainboom, if possible.

Spoiler: Cheveyo • show

Name: Cheveyo
Age: 27
Gender: Stallion
Pony type: Earth
Coat color: Metallic Black
Mane/Tail color: Silver gray primary, white secondary
Eye color: Gold
Other: Red mask (tribal tradition)
Residency: Meadow land in an unnamed forest
Talent: Guardian
Strengths: Outstanding fight skills, honorable, stays on tasks
Weakness: Somewhat overprotective, gullible in civilized areas

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
          He is a pony from the Alatzima tribe. He thrives to protect and serve his people, but protecting the leader is always his biggest honor, and is the champion of his tribe. He is a former henchpony for Ahuizotl. His tribe once honored Ahuizotl as a great leader and Cheveyo would follow along to protect him on his quests. Only once he has ever faced against Daring Do and proved to be a tough opponent, being equal in fighting skills. When he figured out Ahuizotl's true evil goal, Cheveyo would want to leave his control. Though this means losing his honor to protect a leader, he felt that the harmony of life has more worth to protect. In the best oportunity during another quest, he decided to fake his fate and leave his control, not wanting to take part of his evil plans any more.
          Today, his tribe is relocated after learning their former leader's goals. Living in a meadowland inside a forest a few miles away from civilization, He continues to train keep in top shape for any danger that comes into his village and to maintain his title as the champion. His tribe hears local tales of the princesses and the elements. Cheveyo heard of this, and wishes to protect the princesses, who are very important in maintaining peace and order to the lands, but would also wants to watch over his tribe, the ponies that he knows and loves. He still wanders of the pegasus who he fought in the past. Being his most worthy opponent, he wishes to spar against her again to finally answer the question, "Who is the stronger warrior?"

[Peace Keeper]

I haven't updated this since my last OCs were made. Well... FINALLY made a new one. This one took me quite a while to think about, since this one I had to ponify it and keep it at most PG. Hopefully it comes along well.

And so... here it is...

New OC:*unknown name*

Spoiler: *unknown name* • show

For the sake of being used in the RP, assume that most of the info is unknown. Areas marked with '***' are the knowns and can be used in the RP, unless stated otherwise.
Name: *Unknown*
Age: 30
Gender: Stallion
Pony type: Earth
Coat color: Dark brown
Mane/Tail color: Semi-long black with brown stripe.
Eye color: Black grayish
Other: None
***Residency: Anywhere around Equestria, constant movement
***Talent: Guardian/fighter
***Strengths: Outstanding fight skills and stamina, incredible knowledge in learning events and opponents minds/talents, strong, and flexible (even in armor)
Weakness: Too large of a military and innocent lives in the way during battle.

Spoiler: The questionnaire • show

1:What's your OCs favorite color?
Ah yes, the color question. I say clear (he he)

2:Where does your OC work?
Well... pretty much everywhere.

3:What's your OCs favorite food?
You want to know, eh? I pretty much eat everything.

4:Does your OC have a favorite drink?
Ah that too? Can't say I have a favorite, but I drink whatever.

5:How old is your OC?
Try to guess...

6:Does your OC have any supernatural powers?
He he you should guess as well.

7:Is your OC in a relationship?
I had some. Didn't turned out well with most. I do have one love, and it can't be kissed.

8:What are some of your OCs strengths?
My fighting, and incredible knowledge of psychology to understand my enemies well.

9:What are some of your OCs weaknesses?
You want to find out? Nope. Like I give my weakness.

10:What is your OCs favorite outfit?
Outfit. I like anything that embarrasses or scares my enemies... or both.

11:What is your OCs spirit animal?
Myself. I AM the animal.

12:Is your OC currently in school?
Actual school, no. I do learn, and teach in my camp.

13:What is your OCs earliest memory?
Me playing games with other foals. I usually win.

14:Does your OC have a cell phone? If so, what kind?
Nope. You know, I can track your cell phone, so I can be right behind you at any point. Also, I know your crush he he.

15:What makes your OC angry?
Idiots, especially from leaders who are trying to be funny but are not.

16:When is your OCs favorite time of year?
I like everytime of the year cause I can kick flank every day.

17:How long can your OC hold their breath?
For as long as I can... or want. Also, I am holding mines now cause your breath stinks.

18:What is your OCs favorite holiday?
Boxing day. I take it literally.

19:What usually bums your OC out?
What bums me out is no action.

20:What's your OCs favorite kind of pizza?
I just eat pizza. No need to ask for flavors.

21:Who is your OCs best friend?
Me, myself, and I. Also my platoon.

22:Has your OC ever been arrested?
I did, cause I arrested someone else. Hey, his fault for pointing his colorful hoof at me. I did break out.

23:Whats your OCs biggest secret?
That... is a secret to be kept. Between you and me, I know one of your secrets, but I keep it safe.

24:What does your OC smell like?
I smell like victory and a bit of other things I come across. I hardly wash. I just dip myself in water as a whole. I never take off my armor.

25:What time of year does your OC prefer?
Again this question. You got amnesia, or I can help by bonking your head.

26:What race is your OC?
You see my horn? You see my wings? Well... I may have both, one of them, or none. Maybe I may not be a pony.

27:What languages does your OC speak?
Quite a number. I travel a lot.

28:Does your OC like anime? Western Cartoons?
I like funny ones. Helps me come up with ideas.

29:Can your OC swim?
Yes I can...

30:What would be your OCs favorite movie?
I like documentaries. Mostly about battles.

31:Does your OC believe in fairies?
I do... maybe I don't.

32:Did your OC go to college? What did they major in?
I went to boot camp without permission, and got a major in kick-butt-nomics

33:How many family members does your OC have?
I used to be in a family. I let you take a guess.

34:Is your OC a huge fan boy/girl over anything?
I am a fan of battles. I like a challenge. Hey, how bout we spar sometime?

35:How flexible is your OC?
As much as I need to be *makes a slow backwards cartwheel, making an arch for a moment and flips upside again*. I am not Blossomforth flexible, but pretty close.

36:What if they were gender bent?
That you can also find out.

37:What was your OCs first word?
That I never knew. Gotta think back to my time.

38:Does your OC have any pets?
Yes, but lasted only 5 seconds. It touched my food. It didn't love me at all.

39:Who is your OCs biggest enemy?
The world... just kidding. Well... I have some, but that is a secret to only me. You probably be on my list... you scared? just joking.

40:What is the craziest thing your OC has done?
Join a battle. I never regret it, and I showed my Royal Guard friends how jobs get done.

41:What is your OCs motto about life?
All I gotta say is you mess with someone, Ima be a bully to you. Or... just don't mess with me.

42:Does your OC drink coffee or tea?
May-be?

43:Who is your OCs biggest hero?
Myself. I AM the hero.

44:What color eyes does your OC have?
Take a good guess. You can try looking through my lenses, but it is not going to help seeing my eyes, or my face for that matter.

45:Does your OC like reading?
Yes. Mostly newspapers.

46:Is your OC loyal?
Yes... to myself, my platoon, and the world if they aren't annoying me.

47:Does your OC tolerate violence?
Tolerate? I AM violence he he.

48:What social class is your OC?
I am a poor homie, but that doesn't mean I am in a social class.

49:What country was your OC born in?
Ding! Another guessing game. Hopefully you getting your guesses correctly.

50:Does your OC cry easily?
I cry, but in total laughter. Best dare I made someone do. His fault for challenging me in hoof wrestling

51:What is your OCs favorite genre of music?
Just my humming.

52:How does your OC feel about insects?
They are good, but when they tough my food, they gone get got.

53:What are your OCs hobbies?
Fighting, and messing around, and looking around. Hmm... should mess around with you, too.

54:Does your OC use any medication?
Yes, vitamin KO

55:What gender is your OC?
Guess again? For every answer you get, I give you a cookie.

56:What kind of clothes or accessories does your OC wear?
I wear this armor. Pretty intimidating don't you think?

57:Would you call your OC adventurous?
Yes, especially when maintaining order from idiots.

58:Is your OC social?
Nope. I more to myself.

59:What is the first thing that someone would notice about your OC?
My armor. I am completely covered in it. You like it?

60:Does your OC enjoy nature?
Yes, and no. When nature calls, I do not like it. Trees and stuff, I do.

Spoiler: Bio • show

Bio:
                He is from a small place on the outskirts of Ponyville. As a colt, he wasn't much of a bully, but he was a strong pony. He wasn't skilled in sports, but excelled in contact games. Growing up, he did develop skills in learning what his friends were thinking in games and in hide and seek. He also at couple points protected his friend in an arguement and in fights. Incredibly, he took on a group of bullies by himself and his friend owed him his life. It is at the games he played and protecting his friend that he earned his cutie mark in defending. The cutie mark resembles a shield with a pony on it.
               In his school years, he was mostly into Physical Education, but astonishingly is also interested in psychology classes. He learned how to know about other ponies, such as if they are lying, or what they are thinking by narrowing down on what he knows about the pony. At times he actually can snitch on others cause of his high sense of lie detecting. He once told the principle about a plan to throw pain at the school. He was never caught, luckily, but even then the group may not even know if they can win in a fight, or find him, since he is good at hiding.
               If it is one thing he perhaps is known for by his peers and friends is his humor and trash talk. He grew up with foals that do kinda like to tease other ponies. He was once teased, until he learned how to trash talk himself. He earned some kind of popularity, and even started to get creative and improvise on an insulting joke. Though he does kind of get in trouble with teachers and parents, he keeps it to only his peers and friends. He was nominated of being the funniest foal in school. Too bad he was first runner-up.
               After graduation, he attended to be a security guard. Since his talent is defending, he decided to guard a business. All has went well for his 3 years in service, until catastrophe happened. All of a sudden, the business exploded, making the building disappear in a fireball. Though all of the guards are okay, he was the only one missing. In the city, ponies declared him passed away and made a small shrine for him. However, he was actually about 2 kilometers away from the explosion site. Little that he know that he was declared gone at his hometown, he snapped out of his mind, almost going into madness to now try to figure out the criminals that tried to eliminate him.
               Near Canterlot, he however found out about ponies thinking he was gone for good. It was an excellent strategy to now conceal his identity so that there is no danger to find out about him and use the knowledge against him. He sneaks into a Royal Guard fort to try to train with the guards. Pretty sure, the guards did not recognize him being amongst the group. Later, he happened to sneak into the armory, where he stole a couple armor plates, and hid outside Canterlot. In the woods, he spent weeks and months to forge the armor to his body's speculations. In learning a bit on how armor works, he was able to engineer the armor to be incredibly durable and flexible, and at the same time breathable and sort of light weight. The armor was built  slightly thicker than his body so that once his body adjust to the added weight of the armor, his body grows thicker to were now he actually fits. He also added a horn and wing armor, so that nopony knows of his type.
***------Now this is the part where we can assume we know about him here--------
                During a battle against the changelings (separate from the canterlot Wed) The Royal Guards defended Equestria against them. However, the unnamed pony, now completely covered in his armor, jumps out to take on the group. Nopony from the royal guards knew who he was, but was worried he can get hurt. Fortunately, with his skills in fighting learned in the camp, and a few techniques from learning psychology and anatomy, he was able to take on many changlings by himself. In a time much faster than normal, they guards, including the unnamed pony, made the changelings surrender. The Royal Guard captain thanked the pony for the help and honored him to be in the group. The unnamed pony refused, but in a strange way. Instead of saying no, he instead said "It is a good compliment, but I am good going off myself. If you need me, just call me. I will try to hear the squeeky horn." A little humor and perhaps an insult, the captain took the gesture passively. The unnamed pony moves off to a road, in which it wasn't Ponyville, to now come across many cities.
               NOW, he roams across Equestria. He searches around, looking for trouble to be stopped. After his battle against changlings, he now had a war mind, now wanting more battles. Whenever he hears of a battle or war going on, he will outright jump into the action, battling buffalos, changelings, dragons, timberwolves, and more. During a war near Crystal Empire, he was thanked blessfuly.

Spoiler: this part is unkown • show

He was given a crystal that had magical properties that allows him to levitate objects similar to a unicorn. The color aura is different from his eye color, which made it better to conceal his identity. He placed the crystal right inside the horn piece of armor.

As he came around, he has been called a hero, but at the same time, he is also infamous for it, and at times called crazy for jumping into action in which most of the time is life-risking even in armor. Through some royal guard troops and squads, he also gives motivation and insults, which made them laugh, and sometimes open them up to rage them. It works to his advantage to rage them, as he can take their rage against them as a weakness. Being incredible in psychology, he knows how to discover evil plans of leaders and hiding spots. It also helps for his identity a secret to not let the enemy know about any weakness in him. He has grown very fond of his hidden alter-ego it pretty much became almost his main persona.