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Messages - SparklestheUnicorn337

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Ok, so you say his life story is amazing or whatever, but you really didn't seem to put much effort into it. It just sounds like a bunch of random stuff you threw together in a rush, without very much detail. If you look at a lot of other good OC background stories, you'll see how they're not made up of just a few sentences but instead a paragraph or more. So I think by adding details and telling us more about who your pony really is, it would add a lot more depth.  ^-^
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Original Characters / Re: My OC, CloudLight
2014 Aug 19, 15:23:06
I believe that more background information is required. I am not understanding the full depth of this character, or who they are. (Their life, personality, relationships, etc.)
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Original Characters / Re: All my Oc's
2014 Aug 19, 15:09:29
The colour schemes of your ponies.
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Original Characters / Re: Oc: Frost Shard
2014 Aug 18, 23:14:17
Do ponies even make alcohol? :o
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Original Characters / Re: All my Oc's
2014 Aug 18, 23:09:10
Well, they're certainly interesting. However, I find that some of your OCs' colour schemes are a bit dull, but then again, this is coming from the girl whose room has every colour imaginable. And of course, everyone has their own opinions, so listening to mine is only an option.  ^-^
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You should post a picture! I would very much like to your OC for myself! (Because unfortunately, imagination cannot do justice.) Thankyou!
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You really should add a cutie mark, most ponies get theirs at a young age. And it would make your pony even more interesting!
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Questions

Star Showers

1:What's your OCs favorite color?
Silver or Blue
2:Where does your OC work?
She studies stars and sometimes volunteers at the observatory
3:What's your OCs favorite food?
Peanutbutter
4:Does your OC have a favorite drink?
Probably Milk
5:How old is your OC?
Around 13 or 14
6:Does your OC have any supernatural powers?
Other than magic, (since she's a unicorn), sort of. She has the ability to connect with the stars in a spiritual way.
7:Is your OC in a relationship?
No
8:What are some of your OCs strengths?
She is good with navigating stars, and fairly above average in art, but only as a side hobby.
9:What are some of your OCs weaknesses?
She isn't the most social pony, having only a small circle of friends. And even then, her head is always in the clouds.
10:What is your OCs favorite outfit?
She has a cape and hair bow that she's often seen wearing.
11:What is your OCs spirit animal?
Owl
12:Is your OC currently in school?
No, but she learns a lot when she's at the observatory.
13:What is your OCs earliest memory?
Drinking tea and eating scones lathered in peanut butter with some fillies in the park.
14:Does your OC have a cell phone? If so, what kind?
Cell phone? Did ponies even ever have landlines?
15:What makes your OC angry?
Pollution, being pressured or crowded, and poofy outfits
16:When is your OCs favorite time of year?
Summer and Winter, she loves the warmth and growth, but also the crisp air and frosty skies.
17:How long can your OC hold their breath?
Not too incredibly long, it's not like she'd been training to be an under water dancer she whole life.
18:What is your OCs favorite holiday?
Nightmare Night, the costumes are always fun, as long as they aren't poofy!
19:What usually bums your OC out?
When clouds are covering the night sky, or there's a party she's not invited to.
20:What's your OCs favorite kind of pizza?
She doesn't really eat pizza.
21:Who is your OCs best friend?
InfinitePassion, a young mare from school.
22:Has your OC ever been arrested?
No, she would never break a law
23:Whats your OCs biggest secret?
She wishes there was more nighttime instead of daylight.
24:What does your OC smell like?
A bit dewy with a hint of fresh narcissus.
25:What time of year does your OC prefer?
Isn't that pretty much the same as 16?
26:What race is your OC?
A unicorn
27:What languages does your OC speak?
English
28:Does your OC like anime? Western Cartoons?
She's not all that interested in it.
29:Can your OC swim?
She's average
30:What would be your OCs favorite movie?
Probably something like Frozen or How To Train Your Dragon.
31:Does your OC believe in fairies?
Of course!
32:Did your OC go to college? What did they major in?
Nah.
33:How many family members does your OC have?
She doesn't have a very big family.
34:Is your OC a huge fan boy/girl over anything?
Not really.
35:How flexible is your OC?
As flexible as she needs to be, I guess.
36:What if they were gender bent?
Not sure how to respond to that. Probably not too different, she is a bit of a tomboy.
37:What was your OCs first word?
Moon
38:Does your OC have any pets?
She has a kitty named Rainbow.
39:Who is your OCs biggest enemy?
Enemy? Star doesn't do enemies. You're either her friend, or an acquaintance.
40:What is the craziest thing your OC has done?
Sneak into the Grand Galloping Galla, but only after three days of begging from her friends.
41:What is your OCs motto about life?
Be patient, be kind, and be happy.
42:Does your OC drink coffee or tea?
Tea sometimes, but more often when she'd been a filly.
43:Who is your OCs biggest hero?
Hero? Nopony, really, since she is more indepent and reliant on herself.
44:What color eyes does your OC have?
Light lavender-purplish colour
45:Does your OC like reading?
Yes, she does it quite often.
46:Is your OC loyal?
Of course! She may not always remember to do things, but she is always there for her friends and family.
47:Does your OC tolerate violence?
She tries to stay out of it.
48:What social class is your OC?
Well, she doesn't really believe in social classes, but probably about middle class.
49:What country was your OC born in?
Equestria, where else?
50:Does your OC cry easily?
It depends.
51:What is your OCs favorite genre of music?
Pop is often something she listens to, but she doesn't mind country or classical every now and then.
52:How does your OC feel about insects?
Butterflies, Dragonflies, and Fireflies are pretty much the only ones she likes.
53:What are your OCs hobbies?
Art, reading, taking strolls, and sometimes frolicking with animals.
54:Does your OC use any medication?
No
55:What gender is your OC?
A mare
56:What kind of clothes or accessories does your OC wear?
Her red cape and bow
57:Would you call your OC adventurous?
She likes to travel between Ponyville and Canterlot.
58:Is your OC social?
She just has a small group of friends, but she does love a nice social gathering or party every once in a while.
59:What is the first thing that someone would notice about your OC?
Her particular friendliness and almost bubbly personality.
60:Does your OC enjoy nature?
She finds beauty in all things in nature.
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Well I had no fun whatsoever. I couldn't even play!Every single time I tried to download, it came up with an error message saying that too many people had viewed or downloaded it and to wait 24 hours. A whole weekend is longer than 24 hours! I was all excited for a month for NOTHING!  ono
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A pencil, for sure! I could draw for HOURS. Or at least until my hand cramps up. ^-^