My OCs

[TwilightNight]

My OCs are as follows:

Name: Torch Light

   : "Torch Light is my name, adventuring is my game!"
Gender: Female

Age: 19

Personality: Fun (At times) but can also be quite angry or sad when things go downhill for her. She is a lone-pony, has never had more than one friend at once.

Talent: Adventuring. Her favorite places to explore are caverns and caves.

Backstory: Born to parents 'Twilight Night' (Mother, earth pony) and 'Wheat Field' (Father, another earth pony), she liked to keep to herself from a young age, for fear of being hurt emotionally. She doesn't remember what sparked this desire to be alone, though she still stays alone much of the time. Her father was a farmer pony, a wheat farmer of course, and Torch Light decided to stray away from the farm one day to explore. She came upon a cave, where there were lots of bats. Instead of being frightened, she was amazed at the bats flying, and while in that cave, probably while watching the bats, she got her cutie mark. Torch Light was born in the Badlands of Equestria.

Parents:

Twilight Night:

Name: Twilight Night



Age at being a parent: 31

Age currently: 50

Loves: Twilight Night loves reading the news, especially the comics and anything good that happened that day. She also loves travelling, which is why she often goes around to the different areas of Equestria. She has not, however, been to any other countries. Mrs. Night also loves spending time with her family, more than anything else.

Hates: Doing laundry, bats, and any member of her family being in danger.

Currently lives in: Ponyville, with her husband, Wheat Field. They formerly lived in the Badlands, where Torch Light was born.

[super_chris85]

Very nice start i suggests that in the back story you include her childhood and parents. Was she brought up away from civilization? that would be one of the answers i would ask since she doesn't have friends but 1 at a time.  The Cutiemark is a torch right well it doesn't look that bad also considering you did this half-asleep. How did she acquire her cutiemark was she helping someone through a cave or just exploring for the first time?

[Tiger]

I must ask, what does a torch cutie mark have to do with adventuring?

About her backstory, you could type about how she got her cutie mark, her childhood, and how she got interested in adventuring.

Why is she such a lone-pony?

I'd think she and Tiger would get along well, since Tiger is an adventurer/treasure hunter

I also have to ask about that notched ear. What cause it to be bitten like that?

Other than that, this is a good start, but there is more to be improved on 
I also like her name, not many name their OC something like that.

[Midnight Breeze]

I must ask, what does a torch cutie mark have to do with adventuring?

Don't cave/tomb spelunkers stereotypically carry a torch?

[ShadowHeart]

I like ur oc but it's weird. I play a game called Torch Light

[TwilightNight]

Uhm, well, it took me a long time, but I updated. I hope it's ok that I post here telling everyone I updated.

[Gracie Sky]

What exactly changed?

And why doesn't Twilight Night have a Cutie Mark? I'm assuming you just forgot to put it in, since she's way too old to be without one, especially since her daughter has one.

[TwilightNight]

What exactly changed?

And why doesn't Twilight Night have a Cutie Mark? I'm assuming you just forgot to put it in, since she's way too old to be without one, especially since her daughter has one.

Sorry about that, I'll fix it.