Competition mix question.

[Xodakat]

im in a competition and got the song mostly done just somedetails maybe the great and kind Forum Users could help me win this Comp
the only rules is that the song has to be in 130bpm and i MUST mix his Song: Try again
for the 1# there will be a place in a Album From NamelessWarning...
and i really like his work so one wish would come true
THIS WOULD BE REALLY NICE

please click me for the mix