Parfait - Updated and whatnot

Started by PrincessParfait, 2012 May 09, 17:23:35

previous topic - next topic

0 Members and 3 Guests are viewing this topic.

Go Down

Gracie Sky

I like cute ponies, but this is boarder line too cute!  :I
Character Critique Thread

Have your OC fairly and honestly evaluated!

Minaco

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2012 May 10, 21:26:55
I like cute ponies, but this is boarder line too cute!  :I
Well,Parfait does mean perfect.. *-*

PrincessParfait

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2012 May 10, 21:26:55
I like cute ponies, but this is boarder line too cute!  :I

Thank you~!

Gracie Sky

Oh? I thought it was just a desert that's really yummy. She does look like a desert pony, after all; sweet flavored.
Character Critique Thread

Have your OC fairly and honestly evaluated!

PrincessParfait

Quote from: Gracie Sky on 2012 May 11, 17:40:53
Oh? I thought it was just a desert that's really yummy. She does look like a desert pony, after all; sweet flavored.

It is a dessert :3 And it also means perfect in French. I didn't mean for that to translate as perfect. I just always thought parfait was a cute word. And the dessert too

PrincessButton

I'll just leave this here....even though it's past the day now.  0:)

[Avatar drawn by Dusky Hues; Thank you!]

Lary

Quote from: Pinkie Pie on 2012 Jul 30, 23:49:05
I'll just leave this here....even though it's past the day now.  0:)




Wouldn't it make more sense to PM her instead of bumping a two and a half month old topic?
Could've been something great. But ya' blew it... Ya' blew it.

Skype: Suloboru

PrincessButton

Quote from: Lary on 2012 Jul 30, 23:57:20
Quote from: Pinkie Pie on 2012 Jul 30, 23:49:05
I'll just leave this here....even though it's past the day now.  0:)




Wouldn't it make more sense to PM her instead of bumping a two and a half month old topic?
She's already seen it, I thought this topic deserved to be bumped anyhow~  ^-^ Sorry if it bothered you..  X3
[Avatar drawn by Dusky Hues; Thank you!]

Lary

Quote from: Pinkie Pie on 2012 Jul 31, 00:07:36
She's already seen it, I thought this topic deserved to be bumped anyhow~  ^-^ Sorry if it bothered you..  X3


It didn't, but this topic was asking assistance for a cutie mark. I though that problem was solved months ago.
Could've been something great. But ya' blew it... Ya' blew it.

Skype: Suloboru

PrincessButton

Quote from: Lary on 2012 Jul 31, 00:10:43
Quote from: Pinkie Pie on 2012 Jul 31, 00:07:36
She's already seen it, I thought this topic deserved to be bumped anyhow~  ^-^ Sorry if it bothered you..  X3


It didn't, but this topic was asking assistance for a cutie mark. I though that problem was solved months ago.
Ah yes, but it's also her OC page, she just never changed the title..  X3
[Avatar drawn by Dusky Hues; Thank you!]

Itty Bit


Bumping it up cause I was told to. It wasn't my idea  X3
But if I was to post something relevant...
Yaay!

Nala Valor

How dare you give me diabetus, Itty Bit! Too cute for anything alive to see! Cute pony cuddling a cute foal is really too much!
*turn around, see a bunch of ponies and human knocked out of that cuteness*

PrincessParfait

Itty is indeed the cutest xD

Blame me if this isn't okay~ :P I'm just a lazy lazy pony.

Nala Valor

I don't see how it isn't ok. The only problem is that I can see that the kid was still awake at 10pm...

I would say what's better and what's worst about the update you did on the oc but I remember anything of how it was before. :P

PrincessParfait

Well, you're welcome to give feedback anyways o3o It's always wanted~

Nala Valor

There's a few flaws that... Lets just say they annoy me just a bit because they are often there.
Like Parfait being a princess. I don't know how much ponies made a princess/price from a far away land but since you didn't made her an alicorn, it doesn't look too much like she is. And also saying that she doesn't have a home since she travels a lot can be problematic in some way. I mean, where does she sleeps? Does she sleeps in hotels/motels, does she do camping or something else that I am not thinking right now.

For the good part now. First off, I'm sure everyone here agrees. She's gorgeous. I really like her desing. Her weaknesses and strengths are well balanced...

I know this seems like a short list of good things but there would be some other things if the backstory was present ATM.

PrincessParfait

Thanks! ;D I'll be sure to fix some things~.

I'm kinda afraid to make a backstory for her >u< It'd be the shortest backstory ever.

Itty Bit

I love the new back story of yours! I see you changed it a little bit from your original concept, too~
Snuggling up under the blankets with your daddy, that little bit made me smile  :3

PrincessButton

[Avatar drawn by Dusky Hues; Thank you!]

Itty Bit


Go Up