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2015 Feb 10, 01:32:04 Last Edit: 2016 Feb 19, 03:00:41 by toebahbee
Name: Churning Gears
Cutie mark: Gears with a blueprint in between the two of them.
Appearance: Goggles with a blue mane, Grayish with dark gray splotches, Green eyes.
Race: Earth
Persona: Committed, Diligent, likes to read anything about inventing or flight, Independent, Curious, Ambitious, and has a minor case of Aquaphobia (fear of water)
Pic: ( more to come )
Gender: Stallion
Lore/Desc: One foggy, rainy night, a colt was born during the time of 11:40, first words were Eureeka... As he grew up, he discovered a fond for inventing, he loved reading books about inventing and flight, hoping that he would one day make an invention to take him to the sky.
He also when beyond boundaries that other may stop at, unless it involved water, which hindered is research on anything that involves water, the reason he says he is scared of water is that, "I'm scared of water because I don't want it to ruin my inventions when I have been so diligently working on it for weeks, I don't have the fear of water that it would go as far as me not wanting to swim or take a bath in it, but just keep it away from my machines, especially anything electric, it won't only be the invention getting hurt..." he said. Once he became old enough, he bought his own house near twilight's library, hoping that he could sneak in and take any books about inventing, though he was happy finding all the books about inventing, he knows he'll get caught sometime, but not yet, not yet. As a young stallion, he didn't have a job and was having trouble inventing and he was also having trouble with supporting himself with the essentials of life. He applied for a job at apple acres and got tired of bucking the trees, so he thought of inventing a machine to buck for him while he is collecting the apples, the family at apple acres didn't take to kindly to this, as they want natural and not machinery work, he was shortly fired afterwards. Looking for a job in ponyville, he went to rarity's boutique to see if he can do anything in design, he made his own sowing machine, and it was used to just copy the designs rarity would be making, but it malfunctioned one day and ended his designing career. After a day of failure, he went back to his house and straight to his basement where he had his bed, he lied down, looked at one of his blueprints, it was for an airplane, he thought to himself, "If I could somehow bring flight to all the earth ponies without having to build a million mechanical wings, it could be a new life, but I don't have the money for the life of me to invent it mainly because the items I have are insufficient for the mechanics of the airplane, but I want to change the name airplane to honor something I appreciate, something about me that I would like to face or conquer." Then, right then, he thought of an idea, a plane that could go in the air, and swim through the water! He then got to work on some of the things he could make, like the brakes and the cockpit. He was building so much that he forgot to sleep, and before he knew it, it was daybreak. He rose up and said "HOOWee!!! Am I tired, but it feels all so worth it, that i forgot to sneak into twilight's library to get a book, but the front of the waterplane is now done, now just gotta fill it with all the goodies that will make it fly, but first, I want to test the possibilities of flight, which is the reason I made these gliders to test how effective two people would be on a single glide, but I'm going to need a second person in order to test it with." There he thought of who he could bring with him. So he thought of a good Ol' friend in ponyville his name was Steam Clockwork, an inventor was an well, he went to Clock's house and asked him if he wanted to help him test his two-pony glider. Clockwork replied to Gear's request by saying, " Sure! I got nothing else to do, where we gonna do it and when? " Gear replied to him by saying, "Awesome! we are going to do it at the center of ponyville! and we can do it around noon or after, sound good?" Clockwork agreed. So when it reached noon, they met up at the center of ponyville, prior to this, Churn made a simple ladder so they can glide of a roof of a house, so they got a good vantage point to glide. They climbed up on the roof, and before this, they both made a speech to say before they fly, they both said,   
"Let's have some fun testing!"
And without hesitation, they got a running start and jumped of the roof, nose diving for the first part of the test, then pulling up to go higher then they were at the start! The glide was a success! Proving that flight to multiple ponies in one vehicle is possible! Gear exclaimed, " Eurekaaa!!!! " as they were doing this, they drew a crowd towards there whole ordeal flight test, claps could be heard all 'round the area, cheers and all, Clockwork and Gear both high-hoofed with their success, and they noticed it was still pretty early, the flight lasted only thirty minutes, but with a double travel, that is a smashing success! Though, Gear knew that there were hot air balloons, but he knew they could only carry so much, but with a waterplane, he could go all places fast with much more than the little amount you could on a balloon. Gear and Clockwork both went to the nearest fast food chain, mainly 'cause they were craving some big meals, and after that, they parted ways, and gear went home happy. When he arrived, he noticed a newspaper in his mailbox, one of the articles said, " Ponies for hire: Engineering " right when Gear saw this article he went, " YEEEEEE HAWWWWOOOO!!!!! ", he was still outside, and the noise he created could be heard miles round! Without waiting another minute, he got out his quill, and sent in his application. He went inside to his house when he was done with that, he was so happy, that he couldn't sleep, but just talk and think about all he was going to do once they accepted his job application, he can finally earn money to support his waterplane building, and he was thinking so far out of many boundaries that many ponies wouldn't dare think of. But he finally went to sleep, and Churning Gears, was Happy. Right when he woke up, he skipped brunch and went straight to the mailbox forgetting to fix his hair, he saw a return on the application! It said, " Hello Churning Gears, thank you for your application, we noticed that we may have a use for you at our department, when your ready, come on over, and we'll see what you can do! If we are impressed or notice you have the requirements, you will be able to have a job that you may be happy with, now come on over when your ready! " Gears, without no worries for anything in the world, ran through puddles, which he would be scared to slip on but not today, he jumped over a river, which would of never happened if it wasn't for his excited behavior, when he arrived, he when in the door, and told the owner, " I'm here!! " the owner replied, "Ay! you seem excited for such a job, it's a wonderful opportunity if you can make it, ok we're gonna run you through a series of tests and see how well you do in it, if it's enough, we'll hire you, if it's impressive, expect a early promotion." The series of tests where, endurance for how long they'll put you to work, skills to see what department you would fit in the most, and agility/speed to see how fast and diligent you are at your job. Gears passed speed and endurance with flying colors, he showed his skills to be appropriated in the department of flight and Gear-related items, such as rock a yo-yo. As he got the job, received the early promotion, and earned money to support himself and his waterplane project, he got back home to get to work on the project, he completed the innermost part of the cockpit, then he got to work on the first cabin. He then thought, "Hmm, in order to make this a comfortable experience, I am going to be as space efficient as possible, make room for legs and sleeping if for long trips, I can try to make it a double decker, but if it's going to be water travelling too, I should go ahead and build the rafts so it can float and sail through, or I could make it an underwater design instead of an above water one. I'll make it retractable, for it to go underwater and above water when needed!" In the next few months, he built and worked at his job, built some more, until his waterplane was complete! it was a big ol' hunk of metal that was able to fly and swim. With the overall statistics of it, it has, 200 seats, all not tightened together for discomfort, rather privacy and comfort. Also the double decker project was a success! Now all he needed was fuel and some test flyers. He put up flyers all over ponyville to see if anyone wanted to test it out for the first ever flight that 200 earth ponies flew all at once! He got many submissions, but only could accept 200, he got all 200 ponies in, and surprisingly, he was a pretty good pilot, but he needed a second pilot, so he went out to get his friend, none other than Steam Clockwork, they got in the plane, Gear explained to Clockwork everything in the cockpit and told him what everything does and told him what to do if certain situations happened and etc.. he got 10 of the flyers to be flight attendant, and only the most hospitable he chose to be them. The test was to see if it could handle water as well as handle air travel o'er a long distance and see how long they can stay up with the limited fuel supply, and he made sure to make it self-sustaining if anything DID go wrong. But the flight was an overall success, and Gear's went out to be a well-known pony, turning his fear for water and fighting it with metal. And Gear, was Happy.


(( THE END ))
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alright, time for an OC that represents me..... ok this art is gonna take a while to match just who I am! and it will update as i myself find new personalities, and i'll bump It everytime I get It updated Also some of the stories will be based off my real life! This is gonna be one of the longest oc's i will ever write about, as there will be multiple stories, it shall not be rushed in the end like my Churning Gears one, I just ran out of time in the end with churning gears so I decided to wrap it up quickly, but without further ado here is my very own, ponified self.
Name:Toby Bliss
Age: 13
Gender: Colt
Appearance: Dark brown mane, Dark brown eyes, Red and Green coat, and no cutiemark! (haven't discovered my real talent... yet)
Good Traits: Happy, Optimistic, Cheerful, Joyous, Hospitable, Charismatic, and a party animal! (literally)
Bad Traits: When upset, can throw a big fit, A lil sloppy, fear of heights, hides real emotions, and gets motion sickness easily.
Personality: He LOVESS games, he played them ever since he was 5! he typed his first word when he is 6 and he also loves food, he won't let you down if you give him a big platter of food, he'll give what he can give and he will never let a friend go without one more question, he is curious, he is a brave one yes he is, though the height and motion sickness gets to him pretty easily. He's a jumper and a lover for Christmas, he will make the best party you'll ever have for Christmas!
Pic(s): (used pony creator for this one, ill get to drawing one myself when I get time, just temporary!)
Race: Earth
Description: Was born in Coltrea (korea) at the late time of 11:40, he was a fine little faun, and his first word's were, ( i honestly don't know what my first words were so here we go ) "Christmasss!"As he grew up, he had his first cup of ice coffee when at age 3 when his granny gave him a sip, but granny left him with it, and he liked the taste of it, so he drank half the jug!That is just a taste of my life to be given also, when I was just 5, I moved to Coltorado, which the first story will take place, and most of the stories.

Story Time!!: So now you get the basis of the stories, I can tell you more! First story is the first Christmas I can remember, I was at my house in Coltorado, and I was doing my everyday things and I noticed my mom and my dad told me that grandma and grandpa are coming, and my cousin, and that they're staying for Christmas! When He heard the news, he was so happy! (it's so funny going back to my nonbrony days, even before bronies existed) It was December 21, the day they'll arrive, so he got prepared, he made a checklist of what to do and made sure to get everything he wanted, he went to the store, got a new christmas tree, check, get new christmas lights, check, get a mistletoe just because, check, and lastly, the snacks, check! When they got home, they got home a not a moment too soon, 30 minutes after they arrived, they heard the doorbell ring, and it was none other than granny and grandpa, seems like they got here first, Toby invited them in and said, "Hello, grandma and grandpa, welcome to our house, we hope you get to spend a wonderful Christmas with us!" (I remember this story like it happened yesterday) And so he explained all the work they got to do in order to get ready for his cousin coming after, they set up the Christmas tree in the living room, they set up the lights, and they set the custom floor mat around the Christmas tree, his grandma and grandpa made it. But they weren't done, he himself not being too tall and still a young one, only 7 yrs old, he grabbed a few chairs and sneaked in a few mistletoe around the ceiling. Grandpa and Grandma brought some new things to decorate the Christmas trees, yes, we had the old decorations, but it was time for some new one, one of them was a really cool circle shaped black piece of paper, but it was like a lottery card, if you scratched it, it would turn rainbow and scratch the whole thing, you get a rainbow star, or a rainbow snowman, or a rainbow snowball, etc... About 2 hrs later, his cousin arrive, (he isn't a brony, so I don't want to reveal his name, I'll just use fluffle's) His name was Chony, they were real close cousins, they loved each other as if they were just brothers from different mothers. Toby went first by saying, "Hey big brother, how have you been?" Chony replied by saying, "Great, what about you?" Toby replied by saying, "Great! I got plenty of things planned for us this Christmas, just you wait!" And they talked some more and Toby brought him to his room, they played some games, and they were having a good time. About 2 hrs later, they're called downstairs to get the decorations ready for the Christmas tree, so they went down, and noticed they got lots of work to do. The first thing they had to do is make a snowman out of 3 cotton balls and some cardboard, it was harder than you would think. After we're done, we hung them on the Christmas tree, as well with the rainbow stuff.Next was the gingerbread house, we got all the candy, we started with the foundation, added frosting for the glue of the walls and roof, then we added in the decorations. It was not to be eaten until Christmas. Of course, me and chony were just kids and couldn't resist! So every night, we get up in the middle of the night and took just one small piece of the gingerbread house, good thing we did it so subtly otherwise, the amount we ate really would've shown. Soon enough, Christmas came and the party commenced. It was a great time, sadly, I can't remember this part of the story too well, so i'll try to add it  to the best of my ability. Ok, so we started off with eating the gingerbread house, we played some more games, we went out played some tag, came back in, played pin the tail on the pony, and last but not least, present time! It was a laptop! Of course, me loving games the way I did back then, my pony self went crazy and before anything else, plugged it in, and started playing. Ok, I Do not remember the rest of it, but the end ended like this, They all took a family photo, and went home happy.

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well since I didn't want to flood the oc page with another thread, ill just update this old one. i should also probably spruce up the older stories; another time though. aurite back to new oc...


Name: Shadow Blitz
Age: 17
Size: Big mac sized
Race: Pegasus
Cutie mark: A Lightning shattering glass.
Appearance: A dark gray coat, (im batman), Obsidian colored mane, large chest, large matte black wings, shimmering towards the edges, a tail shaped like a raging fire, where the color got lighter towards the end. The mane was smooth past the ear and curled behind the ear.
Description/background:

This massive pegasus stallion came on college lease after having an episode with a colleague. This episode hurt his place in the public eye, so to start a new life, he held residence in ponyville.

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Name: Chony
Cutie mark: None...yet
Apperence: Yellow with no mane But a fake beak Black eyes.
Race: Pegisis
Persona: UNKOWN
NO PIC YET
Gender: Not Known
Story: NOT KNOWN

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