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2017 Jul 01, 22:13:33 Last Edit: 2017 Jul 02, 00:19:24 by Brave Fleet
Mystery
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Mystery usually dons a peculiar black trench coat while doing detective work, and sometimes even wears it when she isn't. She can also be seen wearing a fashionable hat or scarf from time to time. She has pretty blue fur and eyes, a green mane and tail, as well as green bat wings. A dark grey hair clip is usually placed in her mane, which goes well with her trench coat.

peaceful and fair, and Mystery hates being alone. Partnership is very important to her, and with her victorious mentality and cooperation, she cannot stand to be alone. Mystery is a bat pony, with expressed intellect and a keen mind. She can be inspired by good books, insurmountable discussions and interesting ponies.

quality is always more important than the quantity for Mystery. She is often surrounded by art, music and beautiful places. She is cooperative by nature, so she often works in teams.

Mystery prefers justice and equality, and she cannot tolerate injustice. She avoids indulging in all types of conflicts and prefers to keep the peace, where this is possible. She likes to do everything in pairs and not alone.

The biggest problem for Mystery is when she is forced to choose sides because she is very indecisive and sometimes forgets that she has her own opinion.

Mystery loves harmony and gentleness, being a very peaceful pony. She also likes to share with others and spend most of her time outdoors.

She really doesn't enjoy violence or injustive too much... As well as loudmouths and conformity.

When Mystery was a foal, she was put into an orphanage at Canterlot a while after birth for reasons she really never knew. By the age of six, she was adopted by somepony named Standing Guard, who took care of her until she was fifteen. That was about the time she was told that she was adopted, and she decided it was a good time to learn about her true parents. She went back to the orphanage and got as much information on her parents as possible, though it wasn't enough at first. This drove her to take a trip to ponyville for more information based on the stuff that she had. The visit wasn't successful, though she did make a new friend named Archer Blue.

Mystery's clues lead her, however, to Manehatten. She decided to settle there, still at the age of fifteen, and start a detective business, since she found out that she earned her cutie mark by solving a clue to the biggest mystery in her life.

To her, having a partner (Archer Blue) to work with is the best thing ever. It helps a lot, and she also has some much-needed company on what few cases she has, since the detective agency isn't too popular. Currently, this bat pony is still living in Manehatten, where she makes a living out of solving mysteries. She is also still looking for her parents.

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Standing Guard
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Archer Blue
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Saturn
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Saturn has colourful fur and a vibrant mane. His mane is a pale orange with a few baby blue stripes along the sides. His fur is sort of orange but more of a dirty yellow. He has an average build for a stallion, though he usually tries to stand out from the crowd as much as physically and mentally possible, despite being a little bit shorter than most.

Saturn's cutie mark is a purple, ringed planet silhouette which is tilted slightly to the side. It represents his talent in astrophysics and astronomy... or just anything involving the universe.

Saturn is very stubborn and a little bit selfish, though he is also optimistic and quite honest about most things. He is adventurous and courageous, always wanting to be the first for everything as well as the best at anything, even if it's not something he loves. Though, when he does love something, he is very enthusiastic about it, wanting to be as involved as possible.

Despite these pleasant traits, Saturn can be very impatient, again having to do with his need to be the best as well as the first for anything. He can also be a bit moody and short-tempered, managing to get a bit angry when something doesn't go as planned. When this happens, however, he still tries to fix it or find another way. Saturn can be a bit impulsive as well, acting without a second thought on everything. It's sometimes good, but he never gives himself time to think things out. Ever. Along with the impulsiveness, he can be quite aggressive most of the time.

A natural born leader, Saturn will prefer to issue orders rather than receive them. His speed of mind and vast energy to move helps him to always be one step ahead of everyone else. All he needs to do in order to succeed is follow his chosen path and not give up on plans guided away by emotions. When faced with a challenge, Saturn will quickly assess the situation and come to a solution. Competition does not bother him and instead encourages them to shine even brighter.

Saturn is obviously in love with the sky and how it works, so outer space is definitely on the list of things that he likes. Actually, like isn't a strong enough word to fit his passionate personality. He loves anything including outer space, and will clearly do anything in his power to know everything about it.

He likes comfortable clothing, especially when he's just lounging around and doing nothing important. He much prefers to take on leadership roles, since that's really the only thing he knows how to do. He loves physical and mental challenges, as well as individual sports. He usually joins activities that involve running and competition. Saturn very much dislikes things that involve inactivity and doing nothing but sitting around, which can explain why he is always on the move when learning about how the universe works. He hates delays and having to wait for things since it slows him, and everypony else, down.
Another thing Saturn can't tolerate is doing work that doesn't involve his talents. Doing things such as explaining photosynthesis makes him a bit frustrated since he isn't a botanist. He's an astrophysicist.
Saturn was born on April 6th and grew up just outside of Los Pegasus, out in the xeric desert where he grew up with an odd hobby involving the cultivation of cacti. For the longest time, he believed that cultivating cacti would be his special talent, though it never was.

At the age of fifteen, Saturn received a telescope for his birthday, which he wasn't too interested in at first. Though, after getting a bit too curious, he climbed up to the roof of his house with the telescope and looked up at the wonderful night sky. It was then that he decided to go to the library and read up on a few books involving the names of every star in the sky. It interested him, though he wanted more in order to become smarter on the subject. He, to memorise every planet, star, and comet in the sky, began to map out the galaxy on a piece of paper. He learned and explained the trajectories of the planets and how fast they moved. After showing his parents this, he earned his cutie mark... but was shot down by his parents for not focusing on actual school work. They began to not only not support him but tried to encourage him to stop the "nonsense" he was doing.

Thankfully, Saturn's stubbornness helped him to keep learning astronomy and astrophysics through textbooks and the sky itself. Unfortunately, his parents, specifically his mother, became fed up with the whole thing and sold his telescope. It was probably the saddest day of his life, and he actually felt like giving up. If it wasn't for his teacher, he probably would have.

It was a Wednesday and Saturn was making his way out of the classroom at the end of the school day when somepony suddenly bumped right into him and caused all of his papers on astrophysics to fall to the ground. His teacher happened to notice and was surprised by the rather accurate math he had done while explaining things like the distance between Mars and the sun, as well as the orbits of every planet. His teacher began to encourage him to continue his work and even got him a new telescope to use on school property. His goal to become the best at anything involving space never actually faded.

After years of hard work and schooling, Saturn became an astrophysicist, one of the very few in Equestria, as well as the youngest. He moved Baltimare, where he soon founded the Institute of Equestrian Space and Aeronautics (IESA). It's not the most popular institute out there since most ponies don't have much interest in space sciences. It bothers him a little since he prefers to have some sort of competition to keep him motivated to discover and learn more. [/spoiler]
Brave Fleet
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Expressive and quick-witted, Brave is kind of like two different personalities in one and you will never be sure which one you will face. She's sociable, communicative and ready for fun, with a tendency to suddenly get serious, thoughtful and restless. She is fascinated with the world itself, extremely curious, with a constant feeling that there is not enough time to experience everything she wants to see.

Brave Fleet has an abundance of social contacts and loves to chat, search for understanding, always looking for strong willed people to communicate with. Without a clear flow of words spoken, Brave will quickly lose interest in the entire theme of any conversation and need to stay on the move, feeling inspired and pushed forwards by the information shared.

Brave enjoys flying quite a lot, even when she is not going very fast. Nothing can make her feel more free or excited than a good fly through the clouds.

She also enjoys reading a little bit, though she can never really finish books she starts. No matter how good the book, there's a high chance she will put it down after reading for a while and lose interest.

Brave also loves to talk with all of her friends, and sometimes even strangers despite her social anxiety.

This pegasus also really loves to just walk around town on her days off from work. She not only gets a chance to see her friends, but she also gets to go shopping a little bit.

Despite all the things this pegasus likes, she also has her much disliked dislikes. One thing she can't stand is being alone. Not only does she get a little cranky, but she can become really bored. She also doesn't like being confined, as well as repetition and routine.

since Brave Fleet was very inconsistent, her interests changed a whole lot. From learning how to fly to acting, becoming a faster flier (didn't last long at all), or even just playing a musical instrument. Though it sounds like she was searching for her cutie mark, she wasn't. She just had many different interests.

Brave's interests lasted for either a day to a year and changed no matter what. She didn't get her cutie mark until she was around the age of ten years old, when her neighbour's house was lit on fire by a baby dragon (not spike, ok? Another baby dragon). She was walking home from school until she saw the fire, and hesitantly "borrowed" a bucket from a neighbouring house, filling it with somepony else's well water, and then flying as fast as she could to the house to put it out. Even though it was a small fire.

Brave never knew she could fly so fast. Sure, there was the occasional case where she avoided being late by flying really fast, but this was different. Then again, that could have counted as practice.

Brave grew up to become a firefighter and was always given the job of putting out forest fires due to her speed and agility. You may be thinking by now "Oh, water is too heavy for one single pegasus!" This is true, and Brave could never carry that much water, which is where rain clouds can come in handy!

A lot of accidents have heppened where Brave could not put out the fire in time. This made her become a bit tougher emotionally. Though, it still hurts her.

Flaws: she can't run very well, she isn't good at math, she hates reading, she is a bit selfish at times, she takes pity on herself when she doesn't feel included, she likes attention, can't swim, she drinks too much hot chocolate, she becomes a boring, grumpy pony when she is left alone for more than ten minutes, and she can be easily embarrassed.

she can also move her wings fast enough to look like hummingbird wings, which is pretty fast.[/spoiler]

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