Icy's OCs -YAY!

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2013 Feb 01, 19:01:45 Last Edit: 2013 Feb 02, 09:03:43 by IcyFlight
Woohoo! I can do it! I played on my guitar in front of lots of ppl so I can do THIS! >:O
Yes an OC page, finnaly! Lets start then!
Spoiler: Imagination • show

Imagination is a pony version of irl me

Full Name: Imagination Sketch (Originally Sketching The Imagination, but it was stiupid so I changed it)

Age: Teenager (Somwhere about 10-15 years old)

Race: Unicorn (Using mechanical wings!)
Specializes in creation magic, that works ONLY in my own world ^-^

Location: Floating island above in my own world, she gets there trough a portal

Likes: Flying, magic, pets, all of her friends in their house and RAINBOWS

Dislikes: Wings running out of battery, school, dark places and small rooms

Pets: None for now, but she wants a flying husky (She lives in sky)

Talent: Sketching stuff

Spoiler: Cutie Mark • show


Spoiler: Appearance • show


Spoiler: Backstory • show

WARING! BACKSTORY MAY BE STIUPID!

Imagination was born on a piece of paper... Someone (Me, of course) was thinking about a pony version of herself. She drawn a pony, gave her nice hair, a cutie mark and a special talent. All the pony was missing was name and colors. The girl (YUSH it's me again!) coloured her in, and was now thinking about name.
"Hmmm... Aha! I got it!"
She wrote the pony's name on paper and went to toilet. The text was saying "Imagination Sketch" and was colored into colors of rainbow.
Suddently, Imagination blinked. She jump out of paper, leaving picture of her on paper. Using her unicorn magic, Imagination opened a portal, to a different world, a world called Equestria. But before she left, she took a pencil with her, so she can draw things.

Imagination got her cutie mark, when she was drawn, so she knew her spcial talent from beggining.
One time she seen Quickfix flying on her mechanical wings (Reference to this). Imagination also wanted to fly, so she asked Quickfix if she can make her wings. Quickfix said yes, but Imagination needed to draw them herself, as she had th pencil.

Ta-da! I know this story...well... sucks I should say... I was never good in writing..........
Enjoy this....

Hope youu liked ^^


Spoiler: Icy • show

My second-main pony

Full Name: Icy Flight

Age: Teenager (Somwhere around 10-15 years old, but younger by 1 than Imagination)

Race: Pegasus

Location: Cloudsdale

Likes: Flying, cold wheather, winter, her friends, ice, snow, ice creatures etc.

Dislikes: Very hot wheather, annoying pets,

Pets: None

Talent: Freezing with her breath

Spoiler: Appearance (+Cutie mark) • show

Some old ref sheet of her, she accualy dosen't wear that scarf ALWAYS XD

Spoiler: Backstory • show

No-one accualy know her story, one day she just came to Cloudsdale. Icy told ponies where is she from but never told them her story... When ponies ask her about her story she says:
"You wouldn't want to hear that..."
But sometimes she also mentions The Infection....

How she got her cutie mark:
It was a normal day in The Snow Kingdom (Idonoteven), fillies where playing in the snow. Icy just got hit by a snowball. She growled and took a deep breath. But when air got out, it was frozen. Everypony was shocked by that. Icy looked around and thought of something. She took a big breath again, and it happend again. Icy understood that she can breathe ice, and then she got her cutie mark.

Yay hope you liked it ^^


Theese are my 2 main ponies... Yeah... lol

Ps. Tell me about any errors, typos and stuff like that...
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Darkrogue

Okay, let's see here. Ah, let's start with the ages.

Hmm, with the ages, I would suggest trying to take a rough guess as to what they'd be. If they're teenagers, then why not list their ages somewhere between 13 and 16, or 17 if you want to rage about it. Just saying teenagers is a bit vague, in my opinion.

About the backstories, if you're not good at making them up, why not ask someone nicely to make them for you. I commend you on your attempt to write something so we're not left with nothing, but it raises many questions.

1. How did Imagination Sketch and Icy Flight get their cutie marks?

2. Are they related in any way?

3. How did Imagination Sketch get her wings?

4. Seeing as she's a unicorn, does Imagination Sketch specialize in any type of magic?

5. How can Icy breath ice?

Thank you for reading this and I hope you and your OCs prosper.

IcyFlight

Quote from: Darkrogue on 2013 Feb 01, 21:13:26
Okay, let's see here. Ah, let's start with the ages.

Hmm, with the ages, I would suggest trying to take a rough guess as to what they'd be. If they're teenagers, then why not list their ages somewhere between 13 and 16, or 17 if you want to rage about it. Just saying teenagers is a bit vague, in my opinion.

About the backstories, if you're not good at making them up, why not ask someone nicely to make them for you. I commend you on your attempt to write something so we're not left with nothing, but it raises many questions.

1. How did Imagination Sketch and Icy Flight get their cutie marks?

2. Are they related in any way?

3. How did Imagination Sketch get her wings?

4. Seeing as she's a unicorn, does Imagination Sketch specialize in any type of magic?

5. How can Icy breath ice?

Thank you for reading this and I hope you and your OCs prosper.


Okay, I'll try to put that in... And about Imagination's wings, I was thinking about this in morning XD
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