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Mystic Bliss
race: unicorn
cutie mark: blank talent hasn't been discovered yet
age 10
place of residence: canterlot
story: her parents are not around a lot so she decided to teach her self magic and so far she can levitate small things and teleport short distances
she is shy but is working hard to overcome the social anxiety
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I have an idea of what I want the talent to be (elemental magic) but I want to have her learn over time and have the feeling of excitement of getting her cutie mark through doing as opposed to just telling and what not. I guess there is a part of me that wants to experience the process for my sell  X3
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Lightspeed flash

edit: I have to admit that I did not imagine that many people would read this. Far more people have read this than I figured even cared so in a way thanks to all of you for your consideration and interest. ;)

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Well this is my character and her story hope i don't disappoint.
personality strengths and weaknesses have been hidden for those of you that don't want see
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strengths: she is kind, thoughtful, loyal, optimistic, willing to help anypony in need, can fly fast, always willing to teach as well as be taught likes to be serious but knows when to be silly and cut loose
weaknesses: born blind in her left eye.Sometimes can come across as a little mean if she doesn't understand a situation(example is in story) stubborn at times, tends to be anxious sometimes when meeting new ponies


likes: hard work, seeing ponies smile, helping ponies in need, flying for fun, ponies being nice, apples and grapes, making new friends being cautious and knowing what what she is getting herself into, watermelons.

dislikes: bullies(explained in story), severe laziness, fighting(she will fight for friends though) pointless arguments, bad/hurtful or stale jokes(light teasing is fine) being rushed into unknown situations lemons okra and green beans.

talent(sorry if this sounds lame):
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teaching young pegasai how to fly especially the ones that struggle its not easy but her determination to help ponies in need really makes her shine here


age: she is 13 in her back story but she is currently 15 read on to find out what she has been doing for 2 years
     
Lightspeed was born blind in her left eye. As she grew up she grew used to it by paying extra attention to her surroundings so she doesn't bump into trees or fly into mountains. Because of this she hates being rushed into unknown situations that would allow her to be blind sided on the left.
She is among the best flyers in her class and is highly regarded as such but one thing that bothers her most of all she still hasn't gained her cutie mark. Knowing she is a great flyer and that she loves doing so just as much she is more than confused as to the reason she is a blank flank.

She is tasked with helping coach a few of the more undeveloped flyers she ends up spending time with two in particular one of which can barely fly and the other who can't fly very fast. She tends to the slow flyer first as the Pegasus that is having a hard time needs a little more attention. Lightspeed Flash gives out pointers to the more able one and she is eventually able to get past her limitations and fly faster and get her wing speed up beyond what she had ever imagined. Lightspeed then focuses on the younger less able one and helps her develop her flight technique to the point where she finally grasps the ability to fly much better. Feeling very grateful the two fillies thank her and hug her. Lightspeed then looks at her flank only to find it is still blank frustrated she heads home.

As she is making her way home when she spots a filly falling from a great height to a dangerous rock bed she quickly jumps to action and attempts to save the falling filly. At first it doesn't seem like she is fast enough but out of determination she gains more speed and in a flash of light (in the form of a shock wave with the center being yellow and the outer edges being white) manages to save her before she hits the cold rocky ground below. Then much to her surprise she finally earns her cutie mark a lightning bolt with a shock wave at the bottom and two bolts on side at an angle and upon seeing this she gets excited.

She flies back home to cloudsdale then she notices that a young colt is having trouble getting off the ground. Thinking it is a joke at first because she had never seen a Pegasus pony fail at flying so badly she teases the colt and he and his teacher give her a mean look. She realizes sometimes jokes can hurt someone and quickly apologizes and after seeing that first hand develops a dislike for bullying. As she goes to leave, they both stop her and the teacher asks why she had teased the colt. After explaining they accept her apology. Soon after her teacher from flight school praised her ability to teach the struggling fillies and offers to let her teach once she graduates flight school. She gladly accepts and hugs the teacher because she couldn't be any happier. She is now a teacher at the flight school and coaches the underdeveloped fliers after class.

Okay that is my story I hope you guys like it feel free to tell me what you think. I worked really hard on it and revised it a few times but I wouldn't be surprised if it needs more changes lol well give your thoughts below and have a nice day

edit: credits for changes go to tiger reipie10 and gracie sky thank you all for the awesome feedback and suggestions. Some of which I adapted into this post. Changes made are intended to be final but are subject to change as well as anything else that may need work. Although I can't please everyone I will try my best to right wrongs and fix the broken

changes made
-spoiler tags for strengths and weaknesses
-added more likes and dislikes for more flavor I guess lol
-added to story to try to make some stuff make more sense
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Hello I am new here ,and I want to make new friends not only for LoE but within the MLP fandom in general.  I debated for a while on whether I wanted to join or not because I am a bit shy and was anxious about meeting new people but i got up the courage and here I am.