War Stories (Feedback, Discussion, Ideas, Criticisms, etc.)

Started by Onyx Quill, 2017 Nov 28, 13:52:38

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 Is this the worst idea in history?

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Onyx Quill

 Using this topic for feedback on my writings about the Great War. Give me ideas, criticism, questions, etc. here.


 Link to the series itself
 https://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=17505.new#new
When you've walked my road and you've seen what I've seen,
You won't try to talk about your magic friends.
You'll know dang well why I have this glint in my eye.
And I won't cry beneath anypony's hoof again.
-Onyx Quill ((Inspired by "Mal's Song." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_btQs2Movo))

Onyx Quill

 I'm going to post stories for my OCs' points of view here. Eventually, I'd like to open it to other users. Make this a collaboration if anyone thinks it's worth their time. :)
When you've walked my road and you've seen what I've seen,
You won't try to talk about your magic friends.
You'll know dang well why I have this glint in my eye.
And I won't cry beneath anypony's hoof again.
-Onyx Quill ((Inspired by "Mal's Song." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_btQs2Movo))

ScarletInk

Wow, this is really a HUGE work! :I

And it also very well done, it can be seen clearly that you put a lot of careful thought behind it: it's incredibly coherent and shows a great knowledge on history!

I really look forward to read what is to come! ^-^
"Oh, somewhere deep inside of these bones
An emptiness began to grow
There's something out there, far from my home
A longing that I've never known"
- "Jack's Lament", Danny Elfman

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